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Legendary Longshot

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2016 8:34 am


This is probably a bad idea, but I think it's got a shot at helping people including me.

Rules:
Post all of what you like about the person above you.
Then Post ONE thing you think they need to fix.
Finally, Give them YOUR ideas on how to fix the aforementioned issue.

IF this goes up in flames, Please somebody with crew powers lock it right away!
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2016 10:38 am


You seem like someone with a really strong handshake. If I could compare Draze to any wrestler at any point in time it would be Chris Kanyon as Mortis in WCW and I like that. The problem is Chris Kanyon was a homosexual but there's not cure for that, just be glad you have a cool moveset even though he used the Flatliner as a finisher which is probably the lowest common denominator of finishers. I guess Mil Muertes uses the flatliner but he's pretty good too.

I guess what I'm saying is, no matter how good you are, people will always say you aren't good for something arbitrary. Like having the flatliner for the finisher. When I was looking at your profile for your finisher, the link was expired. Get a new link for the Dragons Fate in your profile.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2016 11:40 pm


I think Freakshow is on the MT. Rushmore of G-Fedding, and I don't know what to really critique. I mean, I guess I could give this a shot. I love your heel work and that goes beyond your ability to promo. Your movez and everything FIT the character you're portraying and I admire your knowledge on wrestling overall.

However, I have never seen you work as a face. Personally for me, being a heel is much easier to be a face and I know we disagree on that, but it would be interesting and show a wider spectrum of what you're capable of doing, but that's no real knock on you at all. After all, why fix what's not broken you ******** mark a** piece of s**t
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:24 am


Post all of what you like about the person above you.
Always enjoyed TSS' stuff, great characters and quality posts in matches! Hope P.U.R.E is the start of more good things for the G-Fed community!

Then Post ONE thing you think they need to fix.
One thing I noticed about the Bad Boy vs Renegade Young match in WWFG was a German Suplex super early in the match, from an in-ring psychology point that could be seen as a powerful move to attempt at that time!

Finally, Give them YOUR ideas on how to fix the aforementioned issue.
As seen with Renegade's match with Freakshow in WWFG, it's taken a mat wrestling approach which would soften the opponent up for stronger moves later! I've been favoring strikes recently as a way to start matches, since most of the opposing characters are usually bigger than mine! xd

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DankTectonics

PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:05 am


Cartwright's around still. Pretty chill.

Needs to fix that.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:09 am


DankTectonics
Cartwright's around still. Pretty chill.

Needs to fix that.

N/a


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2016 12:44 pm


*Gets less chill and leaves forever* emo

Post all of what you like about the person above you.
From being the most hated kid around to where he is now, this Hiro kid was able to turn it around! I like his crazy ideas, he managed to bring me back here after a break a while ago!

Then Post ONE thing you think they need to fix.
I suppose storyline planning could be a thing, like think more long term because there's been times when I've asked you what's happening on a next shows cycle (since you asked for the involvement, you're leading!) and you've had no idea! blaugh

Finally, Give them YOUR ideas on how to fix the aforementioned issue.
Instead of just thinking about the end result, think about all the steps involved, what happens on each show and how you get to the end result whether that's a match or storyline advancement/end!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2016 9:01 pm


Post all of what you like about the person above you.
This guy above me, that Cartwright chap is probably the best to ever do what we do...bar none. I've always enjoyed everything I've read from him, and he's always been down to do whatever. He's a class act.

Then Post ONE thing you think they need to fix.
That EEW guild you closed down...need to remedy that.

Finally, Give them YOUR ideas on how to fix the aforementioned issue.
Open that junt back up..DUH!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2016 9:32 pm


Is just fishing for likes.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2016 10:12 pm


SKIPPING HARLI LOL

ANGEL I LIKE YOUR NEW WHITE AFRICAN CHARACTER A LOT

BUT YOUR ENTRANCE MUSIC IS MACHINE GUN KELLY

MACHINE GUN KELLY SUCKS. USE SOMETHING BY DIE ANTWOORD

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 12:00 am


(Skipping Freak, cause he skipped Harls)


Post all of what you like about the person above you.
Always willing to put himself above others, a trait more people need to have.
When you're motivated, very few can out-write you


Then Post ONE thing you think they need to fix.
You try too much at once and it overwhelms, that and your character has a dark character like vibe but comes out to random sports cars, that seem to unfitting to what you're portraying.

Same with other characters you portray, they seem to have a clash of styles that don't mesh with the personality/persona/whatever you're trying to do.

Finally, Give them YOUR ideas on how to fix the aforementioned issue.
Put Harli on the backburner for now, and try someone new, or use Melissa. You use her better than Harli, and in a division where there are few it gives her more of a chance to shine than be lost in the sea of testosterone.

Easier to shine when there aren't many shadows lurking.
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