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 Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2016 5:13 pm
Revitalization drawing board, let's get to work. Post opinions on plot, problems, ideas, anything you have in mind, post here and we'll discuss matters to make this work.
Definite Ideas
- Timeskip to the point where all of the original characters have died off
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2016 5:16 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2016 5:49 pm
Well, first it has to be begged are we going to continue from the same continuity as previously? If not, is it going to be an alternate naruto universe, or just set somewhere in the future or something like that? Should we produce a few noncannon villages? And, if we are set in an alternate universe or future, perhaps we could expand upon the clans and blood-lines already set, like expansions to their existing jutsu, or having had the blood-line or passed down abilities evolve over time.
Another thought to add, is perhaps we could start working on other entities aside from the tailed-beasts who inhabit this universe, and could be sealed in characters as well.
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2016 6:51 pm
We should continue with the current canon of Naruto after the events of the Boruto movie, adding onto the lore and filling in the blanks. Once we determine how far into the future this takes place, then we can develop the lore. Also, let's not add any new bijuu. It adds some unnecessary complications in RP, having to deal with two sets of chakra beasts.
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TheBurritoBandit Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2016 11:02 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2016 6:55 pm
Alright, So, how far into the future would be most suitable?
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2016 5:48 pm
Sorry for my short absence, there was a conference that I had to go to in NYC this week and the wifi there was horrendous.
Anyways, I personally liked the dark matter/chakra idea I had going, however I never really came up with a way that fully explained how it was extracted/used/how it came to fruition/why everyone has it, etc. I mean, I have the majority of it written up, it's just making sense of all of it and filling the cracks in regards to doing something like that. But yeah I think sticking to canon is the ideal situation, that way we don't overcomplicate things.
Canon-wise, I think it might be an interesting idea to potentially use villages or towns or big areas after a certain amount of time from movies and stuff that were maybe only seen once, like the Blood Prison that I already have up.
So, I haven't personally been up to date on what's happened, the last thing I've read or watched was the first few Boruto mangas, so I'm gonna assume that there's more now?
In general though, what direction do we want to take the story? Before we address any other matters, I think we should focus on the story, what we want with it, where we want it go and how it should look to play out. What we all can agree on now is that it's going to be canon and a potential timeskip will take place.
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2016 6:28 am
iSage-Naruto497 Sorry for my short absence, there was a conference that I had to go to in NYC this week and the wifi there was horrendous. Anyways, I personally liked the dark matter/chakra idea I had going, however I never really came up with a way that fully explained how it was extracted/used/how it came to fruition/why everyone has it, etc. I mean, I have the majority of it written up, it's just making sense of all of it and filling the cracks in regards to doing something like that. But yeah I think sticking to canon is the ideal situation, that way we don't overcomplicate things. Canon-wise, I think it might be an interesting idea to potentially use villages or towns or big areas after a certain amount of time from movies and stuff that were maybe only seen once, like the Blood Prison that I already have up. So, I haven't personally been up to date on what's happened, the last thing I've read or watched was the first few Boruto mangas, so I'm gonna assume that there's more now? In general though, what direction do we want to take the story? Before we address any other matters, I think we should focus on the story, what we want with it, where we want it go and how it should look to play out. What we all can agree on now is that it's going to be canon and a potential timeskip will take place. It's quite alright. I wasn't aware of the whole dark matter/chakra thing. Could I get an update or link? I'd be happy to brainstorm in regards to fleshing that out. As for all the stuff from movies and the manga...it sounds like I'll have to do some catching up... As for my preference storywise. I think I might prefer the timeskip go to a point after all the current main characters are no longer present. One thought that came to mind storywise, Given the progress that, as far as I know, was made at the end of the series, with increased cohesiveness between the villages, perhaps there is a dark force intent to create some even greater unity, by attacking and kidnapping ninja of the various clans within the villages, warping them or intending to replicate their jutsu and bloodlines, in the process of forming a sort of giant village to be reckoned with.
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2016 11:41 am
RLRLR iSage-Naruto497 Sorry for my short absence, there was a conference that I had to go to in NYC this week and the wifi there was horrendous. Anyways, I personally liked the dark matter/chakra idea I had going, however I never really came up with a way that fully explained how it was extracted/used/how it came to fruition/why everyone has it, etc. I mean, I have the majority of it written up, it's just making sense of all of it and filling the cracks in regards to doing something like that. But yeah I think sticking to canon is the ideal situation, that way we don't overcomplicate things. Canon-wise, I think it might be an interesting idea to potentially use villages or towns or big areas after a certain amount of time from movies and stuff that were maybe only seen once, like the Blood Prison that I already have up. So, I haven't personally been up to date on what's happened, the last thing I've read or watched was the first few Boruto mangas, so I'm gonna assume that there's more now? In general though, what direction do we want to take the story? Before we address any other matters, I think we should focus on the story, what we want with it, where we want it go and how it should look to play out. What we all can agree on now is that it's going to be canon and a potential timeskip will take place. It's quite alright. I wasn't aware of the whole dark matter/chakra thing. Could I get an update or link? I'd be happy to brainstorm in regards to fleshing that out. As for all the stuff from movies and the manga...it sounds like I'll have to do some catching up... As for my preference storywise. I think I might prefer the timeskip go to a point after all the current main characters are no longer present. One thought that came to mind storywise, Given the progress that, as far as I know, was made at the end of the series, with increased cohesiveness between the villages, perhaps there is a dark force intent to create some even greater unity, by attacking and kidnapping ninja of the various clans within the villages, warping them or intending to replicate their jutsu and bloodlines, in the process of forming a sort of giant village to be reckoned with. Well for now what I have is this, " What was discovered on the Stone was that in the original writings of the stone, Hagoromo had written about a second form of Ninshū that interfered with his embodiment of his teachings of Ninshū. This interference was the second half of the chakra circulatory system, something no shinobi had ever heard of before; Negative Chakra. This chakra would be filled into shinobi bodies with the resurrection of Kaguya, who was the embodiment of this negative chakra. Kaguya was killed off, but all of her negative chakra was distributed into the bodies of the shinobi, and the only way to be rid all of this negative chakra from the shinobi was to resurrect the Juubi and become its jinchuuriki, eat the fruit of the Shinjū and be sealed away into the moon with all the negative chakra collected. The moon would then act as a magnet for this negative chakra, attracting the rest around the world and would seal it away forever, so no more could be formed. With the negative chakra sealed away, shinobi could then follow Ninshū the way Hagoromo envisioned it. However, from the ashes of the Akatsuki rose another group, known as the Kyuuseishu. Not much is known of this group, but from rumors spread around, their goal is said to be to resurrect the jūbi and to gain all of the negative chakra in order to control the world through oppression. The shadowy figures are rarely ever seen and are said to be growing rapidly as they recruit shinobi from other villages." Originally the idea was to reconstruct a beast something like the Juubi, but I think that that idea is too close to the main story at this point, however I still feel like the resurrection of some catastrophic beast, or land, or something would add that fire to the story. I agree with the timeskip idea, definitely want to get rid of the original characters and what not, so Timeskip will definitely be needed. Also, this might help, but that is the page that will be worked on most for the Kyuuseishu I do kinda like that idea though of warping them or taking them to replicate the bloodlines or jutsu or something. I originally had the idea of the Kyuuseishu kidnapping people and bringing them to the Blood Prison in order to extract the negative/dark chakra or energy from them to revive the beast. However, I definitely want to keep the Blood Prison as somewhat of a hideout since it's definitely a different idea from most other guilds and adds some spice. Its the hideout for the Kyuuseishu but maybe can be used to hold something, like a beast or a whole army even. If you come up with any good ideas off of this though just let me know.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2016 7:16 am
That does sound pretty interesting. If I might ask, do you have any ideas for the actual traits of negative chakra, aside from the interference with Ninshu? Some thoughts relevant to my suggestion might be that a concentrated amount of it can be used to control or influence the minds of shinobi, or that it can be used to replicate the other chakras from a ninja's body, and thus, using their negative chakra to make clones of them.
And as for the remaining in the shadows thing, perhaps it could be two-fold. A mysterious village appears seemingly out of nowhere, gathering power, while putting out a face that is relatively "benign" for a new village, though there may be a lack of inter-discussion or interaction with the other villages. Meanwhile, there are the forces working below the surface. As they make gains, so would this new village.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2016 5:47 pm
RLRLR That does sound pretty interesting. If I might ask, do you have any ideas for the actual traits of negative chakra, aside from the interference with Ninshu? Some thoughts relevant to my suggestion might be that a concentrated amount of it can be used to control or influence the minds of shinobi, or that it can be used to replicate the other chakras from a ninja's body, and thus, using their negative chakra to make clones of them. And as for the remaining in the shadows thing, perhaps it could be two-fold. A mysterious village appears seemingly out of nowhere, gathering power, while putting out a face that is relatively "benign" for a new village, though there may be a lack of inter-discussion or interaction with the other villages. Meanwhile, there are the forces working below the surface. As they make gains, so would this new village. That's the part that I never quite finalized lol. I was thinking maybe its like the yin of the yin yang, it posses this negative energy that contains this incredible power. I'm not sure what bigger role it will play though. The negative energy needs to be extracted to form something though. The underlying factor of the Kyuuseishu isn't that they're trying to cause this mass genocide or extinction, they're trying to help by removing this energy from people. While it may seem like they're doing harm, behind the scenes they're actually trying to help. Fighting also encourages the release of more negative energy which is why they antagonize people into fighting and releasing negative emotions like anger and sadness. However, the combination of the big amount of energy results in a catastrophic reaction which releases something, which we're not sure of that will yet exactly. The hidden village idea is basically like what the purpose of the blood prison is, besides the fact that its a prison lol, but that it's like a hidden base for them where they keep their captive shinobi or something along those lines. Thoughts?
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