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Kesmi
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Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2016 2:29 pm


it oculd be Draven standing up to her: what are his thoughts on this woman who is hte reason he can't play outside in villages?
does he run into her one day as he sneaks out?
what happens?
Dads reaction.. but mostly Dravens. How does he act, how does it make him grow?
(also counts as plot point if this is wrapping up the childhood thing that kept himinside)  
PostPosted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 8:07 pm


Kesmi
it oculd be Draven standing up to her: what are his thoughts on this woman who is hte reason he can't play outside in villages?
does he run into her one day as he sneaks out?
what happens?
Dads reaction.. but mostly Dravens. How does he act, how does it make him grow?
(also counts as plot point if this is wrapping up the childhood thing that kept him inside)



It had been a few weeks since the festival, Draven had in that time learned a lot from the swordsmen that were showing their own skills. He learned how to guard, perry and hold the sword in a way he wouldn't hurt himself. Along the way Draven had picked up a bruise or two from the wooden swords he practiced with. It was greater fun then hanging around his father's market stand and haggling over prices.

"Good, keep your knees bent and arms limber. Let the foe come to you." Advised one of his teachers. "Just don't get too cocky, most foes are older and have more experience then you do and less likely to make costly mistakes."

This was one lesson he learned the hard way, from the bruises that bloomed under his shirt, smart taps with the wooden sword against his exposed side a couple days ago. Taking up his ready stance, sword in front, knees bent. Dark blue eyes watching the older Wind swordsman standing on the other side. The older swordsman lunged forward to bring his blade around making Draven step back and pull his own up to block. Before lunging himself at his opponent. Things were starting to come easier, this filled Draven with pride that he could do something more then just figures in his head.

"Very good, Block and lunge, get past his defences and strike." The Wind tribesmen said stepping back. "That is enough for today, you look like you could use a good meal and a bed."

Draven laughed as he used his shirt to wipe the sweat from his face, the streams running down into his eyes making them sting. Something he had learned to ignore as it would cost him time to remove in real combat. Handing the wooden blade back to his teacher, Draven looked off to the side where he had left Regale. The Janarim watched intently, a couple times in the past week lunging at a coupe of swordsman when their blades struck Draven when he neglected his own defences.

"Alright, though I can go longer." Draven said as he shook out his sword arm, getting the muscles to ease up. "Its getting easier now. Unlike a few weeks ago."

"You have done well. With everyone here helping, you will become a master in no time," The swordsman grinned, "But don't let it go to your head, you still have a lot to learn."

This Draven knew as he waved to the swordsman and headed out of the arena area. Regale falling in step behind him as the teen started at a jog towards home. The Market place was slowly emptying, the time being close to supper time. Draven was ready to eat, his stomach protested against the idea of going all afternoon and almost to dusk without food. Even Regale, who could happily stay with Draven's father was hungry. The Janarim barely at Draven's waist at the shoulders, rumbled slightly.

"You don't have to follow me every day when I go to my lessons. You can stay at the market and father will feed you." Draven mentioned, only to get a snort from the beast who padded along with him.

This make Draven chuckle and roll his eyes, Regale still had little trust in people. While he was fine around Draven and his father and growing used to the swordsmen that trained Draven in their art. There was still the mistrust to older men, ones that hit others specifically.

Kesmi
Captain

Shapeshifter


Kesmi
Captain

Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 7:24 pm


It was when Draven drew closer to his father's market stand did the sounds of raised voices reach him. Someone was fighting with his father. At first he had thought it was just another customer, turning the corner he spotted his father fighting with an elderly Ice woman. The woman, who's hair was streaked with grey, in a gnarled hand a cane that she, hopefully, used for walking. At the moment she was waving and pointing it at his father in what looked like a threatening manner. Confused and someone annoying, he hated coming back to someone arguing with his father about something.

"Excuse me ma'am," Draven said, as he drew closer, "Is there a problem?"

"Step back young pup, this is between me and the old man here." The woman snapped without even turning to look at Draven. "Where is my grandson Remman, I know you took him all those years ago. I am here to take him back with me for a proper education."

Remman, Draven's father looked at him before turning back to the old woman. Apparently this old woman knew his father and wanted to take him back? "Who is this woman, father?" Draven asked as this time the woman turned around to stare at Draven with almost glowing ember eyes.

"I told you... Wait, You. YOU! You are coming back with me this instant!" The old woman suddenly reached out to grasp Draven's wrist. "I am your Grandmother, but I don't suppose Remman told you about me, no? Not surprised." She squinted at Remman who glared back.

"Can we take this off the street? Its bad enough you come storming in here with your normal demanding nature." Remman growled moving out of the way to lead everyone into the back.

Draven in nature lunged backwards out of the way of the grab, while Regale went forward to place himself between his owner and this woman. The beast growled and threatened with long white teeth to tear the woman's arm from her body. This sudden appearance of the Janarim made Draven's Grandmother stumble backwards with a bit of a surprised yelp.

"You allow the boy to have dangerous pet? And you call yourself a responsible father?" The woman shouted as she followed Remman behind the stand and into the alley behind. "if he had been raised where he belonged he would have a better behaved pet. Not a savage one like that, that that thing."

She didn't even know what to call Regale as the pair brought up the rear, Regale keeping closer to Draven then he ever did. Those golden eyes watching the elderly Ice woman as she shouted and swung her cane about like she was trying to swat something away from her.

"Regale is hardly savage. If you didn't shout or make sudden movements, he might have just ignored you." Draven snapped making the woman scowl at him.

"And you have the manners of a lesser species. Honestly Remman, you run away taking my grandson a week after my daughter dies. You know how long I have searched?"

Looking between both, Draven looked to his father in question. Who was this woman and why was she acting this way? As far as he had ever known, it had only been him and his father. There was no other family. Remman's parents had both passed away a long time ago, he never knew of his mother or his mother's family. Now everything was confusing.

"What is going on?" Draven asked, "I thought I didn't have any other family, when was I going to be told of a Grandmother?" He looked to his father as if accusing him of not telling him everything. "So there was more to my staying hidden all those years then just keeping me safe. Wasn't there?"

"Yes, this is your Grandmother Inna, from your mother's side of the family. Inna, this is your Grandson, Draven."

"Draven? What sort of name is that? Surely my daughter didn't agree to this, no she couldn't have, she died minutes after he was born." Inna snarled banging her cane against the ground. "If it hadn't been for you," She pointed towards Draven, "My daughter would still be alive."

"Don't you dare accuse him of something he couldn't control." Remman said in Draven's defense.

"All the same, its the fault of both of you. Now come, boy, you are coming home with me." Inna said reaching for Draven again only to pull back as Regale snapped at her.

"He's staying here. To take up my stead as a merchant."

Back and forth it went, both arguing over where he was going to stay or go. What he was going to do with his life. Shaking his head and covering his ears, Draven finally shouted and it caused both adults to stop and look at him. Those dark blue eyes looked from Remman to Inna.

"I am doing neither, not going back with you, or staying as a merchant.' Draven said pointing to each in turn, "I have been getting training in to be a swordsman. That is what I want to do." He put his foot down as if to make it seem clear.

"A swordsman? Seriously? The act of swinging a sword around appeals to you?" Inna said as if it were a bad thing.

"Yes, I find it more interesting then being a merchant and whatever it is that you want me to be, Grandmother. If that is what you really are." Draven snapped back. "And if neither of you can come to accept that, then I suppose it is time I left. I am my own man, I should know what I want."

Remman nodded to his son, he always knew that his son would probably want something more then he could give. It just hurt to hear it come in such a tone. It was Inna who paled and backed away from Draven. Her ember eyes glaring at him.

"You may think you are a man, but you are still nothing but a child." She spouted turning away, dejected. "Just like my daughter, full of spirit and fire. If it is a swordsman you want. Then it will have to do."

Draven glanced at his father before looking back to his grandmother, confused. The argument suddenly changing to loose acceptance? This was getting to be too much, his head was starting to ache.

"Ok...." Draven said unsure, "Was there anything else?"

"As much as I would love to simply drag you back to Zena. It seems that you are too planted here. Be a sword swinging male. Just, come visit once and a while." Inna said before turning away and hobbling off. "I am getting too old to chase after you all the time."

The atmosphere in the alley suddenly deflated from the lack of tension. Draven leaned back against a wall where Regale came over and nosed at Draven in concern. The teen smiled weakly and petted the Janarim, glancing over to his father.

"I have a lot of explaining to do." His father chuckled rubbing the back of his head as if he had been cuffed.

"Yeah, you do. But not now, I'm hungry, tired and starting to get a headache. You can explain later, and it better be everything." Draven jabbed at his father in a playful manner at the end.

Remman wrapped an arm around Draven's shoulders and chuckled before both headed back towards the market place to get something to eat. Things were about to become interesting in the years to come.
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