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I feel pain- A poem to honor my dead brothers.

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Archdemonessa

PostPosted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:29 am


My brothers died in Iraq trying to save me. Now I honor them and will walk in their footsteps.


Brothers you left me
And now I weep
I weep for your pain
I weep for your smile
I swear to the lord
I will be waiting
I will wait for you



They destroyed your body
They created their foes
I won't let you go
Your death will never pass
I hate them
But they created me


I swore that I'd avenge their death.
PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 1:49 pm


i too share your pain as i too lost something that was very dear to me at the time but i would write a longer poem expressing your pain sorrows and agony as to better understand it b ut thats just my opinion so you can take it or leave it...

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