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Name:Ralphael DeLestat
Age:300
Dorm:Willow #115
Race/Species:Pure blood vampire
Sex/Gender:Male
Sexual Preference:Bisexual
Grade Level:College
Subject:Drop That Bass: Musical Signatures and Composing Them
Abilities:He can conduct orchestras, play the piano and violin. he can also use telepathy and is abnormally fast.
Personality:He's willing to help those who are in need. he's rather strict with his lessons but is generally a warm-hearted person. the only exception is if someone harms another individual. when this happens he is not afraid to show the sadistic side that he does his best to keep concealed from others. Ralphael is into many things such as nature, art, and the history of other races aside from his own.
History:Ralphael was born in the kingdom of France to a family of vampiric musicians, conductors, and singers. Who is also a family of vampires. His family is consist of pure blood vampires and some that have been converted into vampires.The DeLestat Family has been around for many generations. Ralphael was born. Because of his family's fame, Ralphael has been moving constantly from city to city.It was hard for him to make friends because he was always moving. there was a good side though, during his travels he learned a great deal about music

His mother the famous opera singer and pianist Jacqueline DeLestat had taught him not to just sing but to play the piano as well. His father the famous violinist and conductor Dimitri DeLestat was the one who taught him how to play the violin a. He had done his career for twenty years. After that long of a time period, Even though he is in public eyes, how hunters have not yet hunted him down. Ralphael had wanted to try something different.During his travel, Ralphael arrived to Ashhaven City, he had saw a wanted advertisement. The flyer had mentioned Ashhaven Academy has been searching for a music teacher. This is a subject he have knowledge of and would love to teach it to those who love the art of music. Two days later, he had received a letter from the headmaster. The contents of the letter is of him being hired to teach at the academy.

hey christian.
okay, make sure you pick a dorm number for him. also, you never explained his vampire lineage. i see that he's a pureblood and that's pretty big deal. also, he has no vampire related powers. was that on purpose? also, he's 300... that's pretty old. why hasn't he been hunted if he's in the public eye? please proofread your profile for spelling errors/syntax mistakes.


that's all i have. just make those corrections and you should be all set.

make sure you don't go overboard powerwise. c:. i would pick 2. just let me know when you're all set.

okay, you just need to go through and fix the grammar and you'll be all set.

"He can conduct and orchestra. Play the piano and the violin. He is also a telepathic and have super speed. Just like most vampires"

should probably read: he can conduct orchestras, play the piano and violin. he can also use telepathy and is abnormally fast.

"He is willing to helph those who are need. He is rather strict with his lessons. Also he can be warm hearted and into various things like natures,art the history of other races besides his own.But if someone harms another person, he do not mind showing his sadistic side. A side of him he does his very best to conceal from others. "

should read: he's willing to help those who are in need. he's rather strict with his lessons but is generally a warm-hearted person. the only exception is if someone harms another individual. when this happens he is not afraid to show the sadistic side that he does his best to keep concealed from others. ralphael is into many things such as nature, art, and the history of other races aside from his own.

"Born in France, Ralphael's family were of famous musicians,conductors and singers. Who is also a family of vampires."

Ralphael was born in the kingdom of france to a family of vampiric musicians, conductors, and singers.

i'm gonna stop here but keep reading through your history section and make the appropriate changes.

"At the moment even though he is 300 years old. He is still able to use telepathy. Just like most vampires is he also fast with speed. These abilities run through his family He even have some relatives involved in the performing arts."

i don't think you need this line at all.

"It was hard for him to make a single friend since he all ways have to move. There is a good side."

it was hard for him to make friends because he was always moving. there was a good side though, during his travels he learned a great deal about music.

again, read through the rest of your history. there are glaring errors in grammar and syntax. i gave you a few more lines but you need to go line by line. c:

Thank you. Because of the meds, I'm barely able to think. But I hope it's ok.