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 Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2015 12:00 pm
xXUltimateDestructionXx Rayne Katski 【b a s i c . i n f o】Picture:   [/img]
Username: xXUltimateDestructionXx
Name: Rayne
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Hollowfied vamparic demon
Defining Features:
Hair Color: Burgundy black
Tattoos: Multiple tattoos covering as ancient seals around his body
Eye Color: Dark Red
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Position: Student【a b o u t】Likes: Training with his sword, walking to clear his head, learning new things that forces him to be in a situation where he has to adapt
Dislikes: Just about everything that gets on his nerves especially imperfect symmetry
Attitude: Care free in its own regards,
Personality: hot head, formal, ingenious, hates to wait on people
Bio: Rayne Katski... the hell born son of the katski clan. Rayne was only about 12 when he watched as a demon slaughtered his family in front of him. Morbidly confused and angry the young boy began to practice with alchemy and witchcraft. By the age of 13 rayne began demon hunting chasing down what would be the biggest accomplishment of his life but boy was he wrong. Badly beaten and wounded the demon granted him a chance to gain power but only at the price of demons letting them change him into one of the most dangerous demon to walk through the gates of hell. Could he tell... He could feel as his quest for power was but a surge of madness he continued experimenting with his new found powers. Now he travels the world in search of knowledge and the power he so desperately wants to just be able to bring his family back home. 【b a t t l e . i n f o】Strengths:
1. Highly smart
2. Able to walk on air
3. Able to read minds
4. Has full mastery of black fire and black lightning as well as normal fire and lightning
5. psychokinesis which he can change an environment mentayl and lift objects
6. Brute strength and a heightened sense of speed
7. Has a transformation state
Weaknesses:
1.If he loses enough blood like a regular human he can die
2. Theres a limited range to his psychokinetic powers (about 900 km)
3. He is part vampire so he constantly needs blood to survive.
4. Not very strong against heavenly based attacks
5. His mind manipulation only works if he makes contact with the person
6. He can only teleport himself and things within a 200 mile radius
7. Although he has full mastery of his mind manipulation, if his user can realize thats its only an horrid illusion and faces its fears under its pressure they can break it.
Abilities:
Teleportation
-The feat of making an object or person disintegrate in one place while a perfect replica appears somewhere in another place This power can also make his user to disappear and reappear in his own manipulation , which includes making an attack disappear. Making objects and or himself vanish and reappear.. The only limitation to this power is trapped in barrier he cant vanish.
Illusion and memory manipulation
-The ability to create illusions which alter the victim's senses and perception of his/her surroundings. Also the ability to manipulate the memories of others, such as erasing and altering them. With this power not only can venture into people minds implanting himself into their thoughts and memories, but he can cast an visual illusion on a person making their perception of reality altered to only he wants them to see.When this power activates he can control the users sense of time and create a realm of his creation.
【e x t r a】Extra: His Katana was forged was forged with demon dragons skin so it is not easily broken. His katana has the sealed devil ormasa inside of it that rayne calls on at times for extra power. The tattoos he has covering his body are connected to his sword and his spirit acting as seals to compress his dark powers. , He can resignate with his sword to transform into ormasa
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2015 12:15 pm
Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3)
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2015 12:59 pm
xLustfulxInsanityx Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3) ok and THANK YOU
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2015 1:01 pm
xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3) ok and THANK YOU NO PROBLEM heart
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2015 10:01 am
xLustfulxInsanityx xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3) ok and THANK YOU NO PROBLEM heart *ooc question* i dont want to seem like a bother but my charachter rayne katski, he's not god moding is he i mean he does have similar power as masa but his work in occular ways
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2015 10:12 am
xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3) ok and THANK YOU NO PROBLEM heart *ooc question* i dont want to seem like a bother but my charachter rayne katski, he's not god moding is he i mean he does have similar power as masa but his work in occular ways To an extent, he's not. But to another extent, he is. Basically your character shouldn't have had the power to fix the lights or the glass. Whilst that is a very minor thing, it suggest he may have some unknown ability not stated within his power rooster, which can become somewhat confusing. As for the actual fight, the power Masa used should have been inescapable unless she was distracted. Now, the way it was set up, we can assume that by locking eyes with Rayne, she was distracted and unknowingly released him, which in turn allowed him to retaliate. Also, did your character freeze time? If so, that's fine but you would have to state it as apart of his memory manipulation power. And the lighting and fire was fine as well, but again, you would need to state it as a strength in your profile. Also! If you're going to have 7 strengths, then you should have 7 weaknesses to equal them out. Sound simple enough? 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2015 8:02 pm
xLustfulxInsanityx xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3) ok and THANK YOU NO PROBLEM heart *ooc question* i dont want to seem like a bother but my charachter rayne katski, he's not god moding is he i mean he does have similar power as masa but his work in occular ways To an extent, he's not. But to another extent, he is. Basically your character shouldn't have had the power to fix the lights or the glass. Whilst that is a very minor thing, it suggest he may have some unknown ability not stated within his power rooster, which can become somewhat confusing. As for the actual fight, the power Masa used should have been inescapable unless she was distracted. Now, the way it was set up, we can assume that by locking eyes with Rayne, she was distracted and unknowingly released him, which in turn allowed him to retaliate. Also, did your character freeze time? If so, that's fine but you would have to state it as apart of his memory manipulation power. And the lighting and fire was fine as well, but again, you would need to state it as a strength in your profile. Also! If you're going to have 7 strengths, then you should have 7 weaknesses to equal them out. Sound simple enough? 3nodding Hey can you please check my character profile maybe it will clear up a lot of things with the rp, my character and his powers
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2015 8:04 pm
xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx xXUltimateDestructionXx xLustfulxInsanityx Accepted! (For future reference, please post in the Pending Profile Section first x3) ok and THANK YOU NO PROBLEM heart *ooc question* i dont want to seem like a bother but my charachter rayne katski, he's not god moding is he i mean he does have similar power as masa but his work in occular ways To an extent, he's not. But to another extent, he is. Basically your character shouldn't have had the power to fix the lights or the glass. Whilst that is a very minor thing, it suggest he may have some unknown ability not stated within his power rooster, which can become somewhat confusing. As for the actual fight, the power Masa used should have been inescapable unless she was distracted. Now, the way it was set up, we can assume that by locking eyes with Rayne, she was distracted and unknowingly released him, which in turn allowed him to retaliate. Also, did your character freeze time? If so, that's fine but you would have to state it as apart of his memory manipulation power. And the lighting and fire was fine as well, but again, you would need to state it as a strength in your profile. Also! If you're going to have 7 strengths, then you should have 7 weaknesses to equal them out. Sound simple enough? 3nodding Hey can you please check my character profile maybe it will clear up a lot of things with the rp, my character and his powers EDIT: MUCH BETTER! YOU'RE ALL SET~
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