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►►► P E R S O N A L - I N F O R M A T I O N

    Full Name: Shauna Marie Toshi
    Nicknames: [none at this time]
    Dream Title: The Molten Swordsman
    Current Title: Molten Shauna

    Age: 17
    Birthday: October 2nd
    Gender: Female
    Sexual Orientation: Pansexual

    Height: 5' 2"
    Weight: 113 lbs
    Eye Color: Light Gray
    Hair Color: Pale Red

    Build: Thin, athletic, and a little short. Shauna has nearly no fat on her bones, most of her body weight simple comes from her tone muscles.
    Scars/Tattoos/Birthmarks: Shauna has a rather large number of scars on her back from a particularly nasty whipping session. She has the symbol for Yōton tattooed above her heart.
    Outstanding Features: Shes has a few piercings in some rather delicate places, aside from the pair in her earlobes. Generally wears rather simple clothing and almost always has a plain white dress shirt on. Some days she might wear a skirt with tights, maybe some simple slacks, or even some pants that are too tight to move in... this all depends on the mood she's in when she wakes up or the mission she needs to be prepared for.

    Personal Skills: From spending much of her childhood reading various books in the library, she has a near encyclopedic memory. Able to memorize the names and faces of people she meets in an instant, she even remembers the dates and times she met them. Able to draw quotes from books she had only read once from inside her vault of a brain space. An expert fisher though she doesn't fish anymore. Decent baker, knowing her way around fresh dough. She's very well versed with mythology of the Shinobi world, particularly in the Mist's classic Seven Swords.
    Personal Goals: Read every book in the great library. Live up to the full potential of her bloodline.
    Shinobi Goals: She hopes one day to be a member of the Seven Swordsmen and locate the missing original swords. If that doesn't work out for her she plans to travel the world and collect peoples stories, maybe write a few books about the juicy ones..
    Relationship Status: Single and ready to mingle.
    Personality: Shauna is... to put it plain a sweet and ditsy girl that trusts far to easily. She sees the best in everyone no matter how rude someone might be to her. While she may trust everyone, she only believes in one second chance if someone breaks that trust twice she knows better then to let them break it a third. Shes also a people pleaser, loving to make people laugh and smile. This way about her stems from her abusive father and wanting to leave a better mark on the world then he did.

    Village: Kirigakure
    Headband Location: Tied around her neck.
    Headband Color: Pale Red


►►► C O M B A T - D A T A

    Bloodline: Yōton, Bloodlines Head. [Approved by Azeiel The Risen]

    Primary Class: Bloodline
    Secondary Class: Bloodline Sub
    Chakra Pool: 345
    Chakra Elements: Katon, Doton
    Chakra Color: Gray
    Chakra Materialization: A thin outline.
    Rank: A Simple Genin

    Strengths:
      ◇ Heat, she is able to stand higher temperatures than most being one with her Yōton blood. Doesn't make her immune to fire based attacks, just most the heat they put off.
      ◇ Medium range combat, isn't perfect at either either ranges but isn't terrible at them either finding a happy median in the middle.
      ◇ Perfect memory.
    Weaknesses:
      ◇ Trusting, gives everyone the benefit of doubt the first time she meets them.
      ◇ Fight multiple opponents at once, tends to focus down on one person at a time.
      ◇ Genjutsu, she has a hard time with deception. She also refuses to learn it.
    Fears:
      ◇ Someone she trusts wholeheartedly betraying her, even worse if they do it through genjutsu.
      ◇ Being deemed unfit to join Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen.

    Class Paths:
      Strong Lineage
      The user has a very strong connection to their family line and a natural aptitude at using the Jutsu that are of their Kekkei Genkai. As such, all selectors of this path gain a +1 rank in power to their bloodline techniques and a -10 bonus to Chakra control applied only to their bloodline techniques.

      Prodigal Child [Specialist]
      The user was born with a strong blood connection to the ancestors of the Clan. Because of this they are able to grow much quicker in terms of the Clan's ranking and hierarchy. As well they can use their clan techniques with ease, making them cost [1] full rank less Chakra than other users of the clan.

      Path of the Manipulator
      The user was born with a strong connection to their clan's elements, allowing them to freely manipulate their clan's abilities with single handed seals.

      Pure Blood [Specialist]
      The user chooses two of the disciplines from the main class rather than just one


    Learning Reductions:
      ◇ Learn Kekkei Genkei techniques a grand total of [2] posts faster.

    Clan Attributes:
      ◇ Immune to the effects of Yōton.

    Personal Attribute:
      ◇ Royal Flush: Shauna starts off with [1.5] in both her Speed and Agility.


►►► S T A T S

    Strength: 0
    Speed: 1.5
    Agility: 1.5
    Reflexes: 0
    Flexibility: 0


►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A

    Weapon Type: Hatchet
    Weapon Reach: 14"
    Weapon Weight: 1 1/4 lbs
    Weapon Location: Strapped to her lower back.
    Weapon Properties: [n/a]


►►► I N V E N T O R Y

    ◇ Kunai x2
    ◇ Senbon x 8
    ◇ Shuriken x5


►►► M I S S I O N S - D A T A

    AC: 00,000
    Ryo: 500

    D-ranked: 0
    C-ranked: 0
    B-ranked: 0
    A-ranked: 0
    S-ranked: 0
    S+-ranked: 0
    Event Missions: 0
    Chakra Training Missions:
    ◇ [n/a]
    Physical Training Missions:
    ◇ Agility: [n/a]
    ◇ Flexibility: [n/a]


►►► F A M I L Y - A N D - H I S T O R Y

    Father: Deceased: Naga Toshi [Official report deems cause of death: self defense]
    Mother: Npc: Aria Toshi
    Siblings: None

    Traumas: She isn't the biggest fan of fishing nets, or fishing for that matter.
    History:
      Shauna was born to a small family of self sustaining fishers in the land of Water, just her and her parents for miles. From what she gathered growing up her father was unable to pass his exams to become a full Shinobi and out of embarrassment for his failures he vanished into the country side. Her mother had followed him due to her love for him at the time. It wasn't until Shauna was born on their fifth year away from civilization that her father started to change for the worst. Her earliest memory of her father was smacking her for letting a fish get off her hook. Most of their money they made from the fish was spent on feeding her fathers unhealthy affair with alcohol. She honestly feared for her life anytime she didn't return home with a bundle of fish while he was wasted. His drinking habits got so bad that one day after getting caught in a storm she returned with nothing, not even her fishing net had made it back with her. Cold and soaked to the bones she made her way into the house only to find her father finishing off a bottle. He slammed the empty glass onto the floor as he walked over her full of rage. He took her back outside and tied her to a tree while he got his old tattered fishing net from their shed. The last thing she remembers from that night was the thin fabric ripping into her skin like a bundle of whips, the pain was to much for her causing her to pass out half way through. Apparently this was the last straw for her mother for when she woke up she was being carried away from their home. Her mothers hands were covered in sticky blood and trembling as her tears rained down on Shauna's face.

      Her life was much different after that, her mother decided that she wasn't going to return to that hut of nightmares and instead moved them to the outskirts of Kirigakure. She didn't have enough money to gain housing inside the city but she had enough to start a small farm so they would at least have food. She refused to let Shauna help her with the farming telling her to enjoy the rest of her childhood, that she couldn't stand to rob it from Shauna any longer. At first Shauna didn't know what to do with her time not being allowed to do housework so she was forced to explore the city of Kirigakure for entertainment. It took her a few weeks before she found the cities great library. She spent most of her time before the academy reading in the almost endless halls of bookshelves often loosing track of time and returning to her house well past her curfew. She never really let the first half of her life force the smile off her face, she says it as an experience that made her who she is. She didn't have the easiest time in the academy, having a notable difficulty with Henge no Jutsu for a few weeks while other students moved on to Kawarimi no Jutsu. No matter how hard of a time she had from her classmates she found joy in learning from her failures. She never let her initial mediocre grades with Transformation hold her back from graduating with her class. Before graduation her mother presented her fathers old tattered Yōton scrolls as a reminder to never be ashamed of her bloodline, no matter the bad apples in the bunch. After graduating and before heading off to get her headband, she decided to get the symbol for her bloodline tattooed right above her heart.


►►► T E C H N I Q U E S

    Limitations:
      Ninjutsu: 00 //06
      Genjutsu: 00 //06
      Taijutsu Styles: 00 //02
      Bukijutsu Styles: 00 //02


    N i n j u t s u :
      ------- Maruton
        [ E-rank ]
        ◇ Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
        ◇ Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
        ◇ Genso Bushin no Jutsu [Illusion Clone Technique]
        ◇ Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
        ◇ Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
        ◇ Kai [Release]

        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Katon
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Doton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Yōton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




    T a i j u t s u :
      ------- Tame Za Kyokudo [Stage 0]
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]


    B u k i j u t s u :
      ------- Mist Sword Style [ Stage 0 ]
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- [Not Chosen Yet] [ Stage 0 ]
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 2:53 pm


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►►► P E R S O N A L - I N F O R M A T I O N

    Full Name: Shauna Marie Toshi
    Nicknames: [none at this time]
    Dream Title: The Molten Swordsman
    Current title: Molten Shauna

    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Sexual Orientation: Pansexual

    Height: 5' 2"
    Weight: 103 lbs
    Eye Color: Light Gray
    Hair Color: Pale Red

    Build: Thin and Short.
    Scars/Tattoos/Birthmarks: Shauna has a rather large number of scars on her back from a particularly nasty whipping session. She has the symbol for Yōton tattooed above her heart.
    Outstanding Features: Shes has a few piercings in some rather delicate places aside from the pair in her earlobes.

    Personal Skills: From spending much of her childhood reading various books in the library, she has a near encyclopedic memory. Able to memorize the names and faces of people she meets in an instant, she even remembers the dates and times she met them. Able to draw quotes from books she had only read once from inside her vault of a brain space. An expert fisher though she doesn't fish anymore. Decent baker, knowing her way around fresh dough.
    Personal Goals: Read every book in the great library. Live up to the full potential of her bloodline.
    Shinobi Goals: She hopes one day to be a member of the Seven Swordsmen.
    Relationship Status: Single and ready to mingle.
    Personality: Shauna is... to put it plain a sweet and ditsy girl that trusts far to easily. She sees the best in everyone no matter how rude someone might be to her. While she may trust everyone, she only believes in one second chance if someone breaks that trust twice she knows better then to let them break it a third. Shes also a people pleaser, loving to make people laugh and smile. This way about her stems from her abusive father and wanting to leave a better mark on the world then he did.

    Village: Kirigakure
    Headband Location: Tied around her neck.
    Headband Color: Pale Red


►►► C O M B A T - D A T A

    Bloodline: Yōton [Awaiting Review]

    Primary Class: Bloodline
    Secondary Class: Bloodline Sub
    Chakra Pool: 345
    Chakra Elements: Katon, Doton
    Chakra Color: Gray
    Chakra Materialization: A thin outline.
    Rank: A Simple Genin

    Strengths:
      ◇ Heat, she is able to stand higher temperatures than most being one with her Yōton .
      ◇ Medium range combat, isn't perfect at either either ranges but isn't terrible at them either finding a happy median in the middle.
      ◇ Perfect memory.
    Weaknesses:
      ◇ Trusting, gives everyone the benefit of doubt the first time she meets them.
      ◇ Fight multiple opponents at once, tends to focus down on one person at a time.
      ◇ Genjutsu, she has a hard time with deception.
    Fears:
      ◇ Someone she trusts wholeheartedly betraying her.
      ◇ Being deemed unfit to join Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen.

    Class Paths:
      Strong Lineage
      The user has a very strong connection to their family line and a natural aptitude at using the Jutsu that are of their Kekkei Genkai. As such, all selectors of this path gain a +1 rank in power to their bloodline techniques and a -10 bonus to Chakra control applied only to their bloodline techniques.

      Prodigal Child [Specialist]
      The user was born with a strong blood connection to the ancestors of the Clan. Because of this they are able to grow much quicker in terms of the Clan's ranking and hierarchy. As well they can use their clan techniques with ease, making them cost [1] full rank less Chakra than other users of the clan.

      Path of the Manipulator
      The user was born with a strong connection to their clan's elements, allowing them to freely manipulate their clan's abilities with single handed seals.

      Pure Blood [Specialist]
      The user chooses two of the disciplines from the main class rather than just one


    Learning Reductions:
      ◇ Learn Kekkei Genkei techniques a grand total of [2] posts faster.

    Clan Attributes:
      ◇ Immune to the effects of Yōton.

    Personal Attributes:
      ◇ Wild Fire: Shauna has poor control over her Katon, self harm is almost inevitable, Katon jutsus do [1] rank more damage at the cost of taking [1] rank more chakra to use.
      ◇ Honest to a Fault: Shauna refuses to learn Genjutsu, do it its invasive and cruel nature. Instead of gaining Genjutsu slots she gains custom jutsu slots at a ratio of 1/2.


►►► S T A T S

    Strength: 0
    Speed: 0
    Agility: 0
    Reflexes: 0
    Flexibility: 0


►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A

    Weapon Type: Hatchet
    Weapon Reach: 14"
    Weapon Weight: 1 1/4 lbs
    Weapon Location: Strapped to her lower back.
    Weapon Properties: [n/a]


►►► I N V E N T O R Y

    ◇ Kunai x2
    ◇ Senbon x 8
    ◇ Shuriken x5


►►► M I S S I O N S - D A T A

    AC: 00,000
    Ryo: 500

    D-ranked: 0
    C-ranked: 0
    B-ranked: 0
    A-ranked: 0
    S-ranked: 0
    S+-ranked: 0
    Event Missions:


►►► F A M I L Y - A N D - H I S T O R Y

    Father: Deceased: Naga Toshi [Official report deems cause of death: self defense]
    Mother: Npc: Aria Toshi
    Siblings: None

    Traumas: She isn't the biggest fan of fishing nets, or fishing for that matter.
    History:
      Shauna was born to a small family of self sustaining fishers in the land of waves, just her and her parents for miles. From what she gathered growing up her father was unable to pass his exams to become a full Shinobi and out of embarrassment for his failures he vanished into the country side. Her mother had followed him due to her love for him at the time. It wasn't until Shauna was born on their fifth year away from civilization that her father started to change for the worst. Her earliest memory of her father was smacking her for letting a fish get off her hook. Most of their money they made from the fish was spent on feeding her fathers unhealthy affair with alcohol. She honestly feared for her life anytime she didn't return home with a bundle of fish while he was wasted. His drinking habits got so bad that one day after getting caught in a storm she returned with nothing, not even her fishing net had made it back with her. Cold and soaked to the bones she made her way into the house only to find her father finishing off a bottle. He slammed the empty glass onto the floor as he walked over her full of rage. He took her back outside and tied her to a tree while he got his old tattered fishing net from their shed. The last thing she remembers from that night was the thin fabric ripping into her skin like a bundle of whips, the pain was to much for her causing her to pass out half way through. Apparently this was the last straw for her mother for when she woke up she was being carried away from their home. Her mothers hands were covered in sticky blood and trembling as her tears rained down on Shauna's face.

      Her life was much different after that, her mother decided that she wasn't going to return to that hut of nightmares and instead moved them to the outskirts of Kirigakure. She didn't have enough money to gain housing inside the city but she had enough to start a small farm so they would at least have food. She refused to let Shauna help her with the farming telling her to enjoy the rest of her childhood, that she couldn't stand to rob it from Shauna any longer. At first Shauna didn't know what to do with her time not being allowed to do housework so she was forced to explore the city of Kirigakure for entertainment. It took her a few weeks before she found the cities great library. She spent most of her time before the academy reading in the almost endless halls of bookshelves often loosing track of time and returning to her house well past her curfew. She never really let the first half of her life force the smile off her face, she says it as an experience that made her who she is. She didn't have the easiest time in the academy, having a notable difficulty with Henge no Jutsu for a few weeks while other students moved on to Kawarimi no Jutsu. No matter how hard of a time she had from her classmates she found joy in learning from her failures. She never let her initial mediocre grades with Transformation hold her back from graduating with her class.


►►► T E C H N I Q U E S

    Limitations:
      Ninjutsu: 00 //06
      Additional Customs: 00 //03
      Taijutsu Styles: 00 //02
      Bukijutsu Styles: 00 //02


    N i n j u t s u :
      ------- Maruton
        [ E-rank ]
        ◇ Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
        ◇ Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
        ◇ Genso Bushin no Jutsu [Illusion Clone Technique]
        ◇ Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
        ◇ Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
        ◇ Kai [Release]

        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Katon
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Doton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Yōton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




    T a i j u t s u :
      ------- < Style Name [ Stage ] >
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]


    B u k i j u t s u :
      ------- < Style Name [ Stage ] >
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]


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Hello, first off welcome to lonely road. hope you enjoy it here.


Now to tell you that I am really sorry to inform you that this profile will have to be denied on a few issues that i need to explain.

Personal Attributes:
◇ Wild Fire: Shauna has poor control over her Katon, self harm is almost inevitable, Katon jutsus do [1] rank more damage at the cost of taking [1] rank more chakra to use.
◇ Honest to a Fault: Shauna refuses to learn Genjutsu, do it its invasive and cruel nature. Instead of gaining Genjutsu slots she gains custom jutsu slots at a ratio of 1/2.

Those PA's are a no go. the first one is technically a clever way to boost a rank of justu by giving it a special way of wording and downsides. the rules are that PA's are not allowed to have any kind of rank increase....

the second one is a PA giving you more slots for customs.. by sacking genjutsu... which is not ok.. u can sack the genjutsu for something more like more ninjutsu slots... but has to equal out to the same amount of genjutsu you are giving up... remember 10 genjutsu = 10 ninjutsu or 1 tai or buki slot....

so if u started with 5 gen lets say... u can only have 5 slots nin... if you get what i mean...


please make the changes and fixes needed then please quote me again to let me know! thank you

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 11:28 pm


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Alrighty-o personal attributes have been changed to fit more in line with the rules.

EDIT:
Also went through and did some minor edits to basic info and listed the bloodline had been approved.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:00 am


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►►► P E R S O N A L - I N F O R M A T I O N

    Full Name: Shauna Marie Toshi
    Nicknames: [none at this time]
    Dream Title: The Molten Swordsman
    Current Title: Molten Shauna

    Age: 17
    Birthday: October 2nd
    Gender: Female
    Sexual Orientation: Pansexual

    Height: 5' 2"
    Weight: 113 lbs
    Eye Color: Light Gray
    Hair Color: Pale Red

    Build: Thin, athletic, and a little short. Shauna has nearly no fat on her bones, most of her body weight simple comes from her tone muscles.
    Scars/Tattoos/Birthmarks: Shauna has a rather large number of scars on her back from a particularly nasty whipping session. She has the symbol for Yōton tattooed above her heart.
    Outstanding Features: Shes has a few piercings in some rather delicate places, aside from the pair in her earlobes. Generally wears rather simple clothing and almost always has a plain white dress shirt on. Some days she might wear a skirt with tights, maybe some simple slacks, or even some pants that are too tight to move in... this all depends on the mood she's in when she wakes up or the mission she needs to be prepared for.

    Personal Skills: From spending much of her childhood reading various books in the library, she has a near encyclopedic memory. Able to memorize the names and faces of people she meets in an instant, she even remembers the dates and times she met them. Able to draw quotes from books she had only read once from inside her vault of a brain space. An expert fisher though she doesn't fish anymore. Decent baker, knowing her way around fresh dough. She's very well versed with mythology of the Shinobi world, particularly in the Mist's classic Seven Swords.
    Personal Goals: Read every book in the great library. Live up to the full potential of her bloodline.
    Shinobi Goals: She hopes one day to be a member of the Seven Swordsmen and locate the missing original swords. If that doesn't work out for her she plans to travel the world and collect peoples stories, maybe write a few books about the juicy ones..
    Relationship Status: Single and ready to mingle.
    Personality: Shauna is... to put it plain a sweet and ditsy girl that trusts far to easily. She sees the best in everyone no matter how rude someone might be to her. While she may trust everyone, she only believes in one second chance if someone breaks that trust twice she knows better then to let them break it a third. Shes also a people pleaser, loving to make people laugh and smile. This way about her stems from her abusive father and wanting to leave a better mark on the world then he did.

    Village: Kirigakure
    Headband Location: Tied around her neck.
    Headband Color: Pale Red


►►► C O M B A T - D A T A

    Bloodline: Yōton. Bloodlines Head (?) (Yoton's bloodline post doesn't list anyone, at all really and I said sure to it in the application.) [Approved by Azeiel The Risen]

    Primary Class: Bloodline
    Secondary Class: Bloodline Sub
    Chakra Pool: 345
    Chakra Elements: Katon, Doton
    Chakra Color: Gray
    Chakra Materialization: A thin outline.
    Rank: A Simple Genin

    Strengths:
      ◇ Heat, she is able to stand higher temperatures than most being one with her Yōton blood. Doesn't make her immune to fire based attacks, just most the heat they put off.
      ◇ Medium range combat, isn't perfect at either either ranges but isn't terrible at them either finding a happy median in the middle.
      ◇ Perfect memory.
    Weaknesses:
      ◇ Trusting, gives everyone the benefit of doubt the first time she meets them.
      ◇ Fight multiple opponents at once, tends to focus down on one person at a time.
      ◇ Genjutsu, she has a hard time with deception. She also refuses to learn it.
    Fears:
      ◇ Someone she trusts wholeheartedly betraying her, even worse if they do it through genjutsu.
      ◇ Being deemed unfit to join Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen.

    Class Paths:
      Strong Lineage
      The user has a very strong connection to their family line and a natural aptitude at using the Jutsu that are of their Kekkei Genkai. As such, all selectors of this path gain a +1 rank in power to their bloodline techniques and a -10 bonus to Chakra control applied only to their bloodline techniques.

      Prodigal Child [Specialist]
      The user was born with a strong blood connection to the ancestors of the Clan. Because of this they are able to grow much quicker in terms of the Clan's ranking and hierarchy. As well they can use their clan techniques with ease, making them cost [1] full rank less Chakra than other users of the clan.

      Path of the Manipulator
      The user was born with a strong connection to their clan's elements, allowing them to freely manipulate their clan's abilities with single handed seals.

      Pure Blood [Specialist]
      The user chooses two of the disciplines from the main class rather than just one


    Learning Reductions:
      ◇ Learn Kekkei Genkei techniques a grand total of [2] posts faster.

    Clan Attributes:
      ◇ Immune to the effects of Yōton.

    Personal Attribute:
      ◇ Royal Flush: Shauna starts off with [1.5] in both her Speed and Agility.


►►► S T A T S

    Strength: 0
    Speed: 1.5
    Agility: 1.5
    Reflexes: 0
    Flexibility: 0


►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A

    Weapon Type: Hatchet
    Weapon Reach: 14"
    Weapon Weight: 1 1/4 lbs
    Weapon Location: Strapped to her lower back.
    Weapon Properties: [n/a]


►►► I N V E N T O R Y

    ◇ Kunai x2
    ◇ Senbon x 8
    ◇ Shuriken x5


►►► M I S S I O N S - D A T A

    AC: 00,000
    Ryo: 500

    D-ranked: 0
    C-ranked: 0
    B-ranked: 0
    A-ranked: 0
    S-ranked: 0
    S+-ranked: 0
    Event Missions: 0
    Chakra Training Missions:
    ◇ [n/a]
    Physical Training Missions:
    ◇ Agility: [n/a]
    ◇ Flexibility: [n/a]


►►► F A M I L Y - A N D - H I S T O R Y

    Father: Deceased: Naga Toshi [Official report deems cause of death: self defense]
    Mother: Npc: Aria Toshi
    Siblings: None

    Traumas: She isn't the biggest fan of fishing nets, or fishing for that matter.
    History:
      Shauna was born to a small family of self sustaining fishers in the land of Water, just her and her parents for miles. From what she gathered growing up her father was unable to pass his exams to become a full Shinobi and out of embarrassment for his failures he vanished into the country side. Her mother had followed him due to her love for him at the time. It wasn't until Shauna was born on their fifth year away from civilization that her father started to change for the worst. Her earliest memory of her father was smacking her for letting a fish get off her hook. Most of their money they made from the fish was spent on feeding her fathers unhealthy affair with alcohol. She honestly feared for her life anytime she didn't return home with a bundle of fish while he was wasted. His drinking habits got so bad that one day after getting caught in a storm she returned with nothing, not even her fishing net had made it back with her. Cold and soaked to the bones she made her way into the house only to find her father finishing off a bottle. He slammed the empty glass onto the floor as he walked over her full of rage. He took her back outside and tied her to a tree while he got his old tattered fishing net from their shed. The last thing she remembers from that night was the thin fabric ripping into her skin like a bundle of whips, the pain was to much for her causing her to pass out half way through. Apparently this was the last straw for her mother for when she woke up she was being carried away from their home. Her mothers hands were covered in sticky blood and trembling as her tears rained down on Shauna's face.

      Her life was much different after that, her mother decided that she wasn't going to return to that hut of nightmares and instead moved them to the outskirts of Kirigakure. She didn't have enough money to gain housing inside the city but she had enough to start a small farm so they would at least have food. She refused to let Shauna help her with the farming telling her to enjoy the rest of her childhood, that she couldn't stand to rob it from Shauna any longer. At first Shauna didn't know what to do with her time not being allowed to do housework so she was forced to explore the city of Kirigakure for entertainment. It took her a few weeks before she found the cities great library. She spent most of her time before the academy reading in the almost endless halls of bookshelves often loosing track of time and returning to her house well past her curfew. She never really let the first half of her life force the smile off her face, she says it as an experience that made her who she is. She didn't have the easiest time in the academy, having a notable difficulty with Henge no Jutsu for a few weeks while other students moved on to Kawarimi no Jutsu. No matter how hard of a time she had from her classmates she found joy in learning from her failures. She never let her initial mediocre grades with Transformation hold her back from graduating with her class. Before graduation her mother presented her fathers old tattered Yōton scrolls as a reminder to never be ashamed of her bloodline, no matter the bad apples in the bunch. After graduating and before heading off to get her headband, she decided to get the symbol for her bloodline tattooed right above her heart.


►►► T E C H N I Q U E S

    Limitations:
      Ninjutsu: 00 //06
      Genjutsu: 00 //06
      Taijutsu Styles: 00 //02
      Bukijutsu Styles: 00 //02


    N i n j u t s u :
      ------- Maruton
        [ E-rank ]
        ◇ Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
        ◇ Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
        ◇ Genso Bushin no Jutsu [Illusion Clone Technique]
        ◇ Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
        ◇ Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
        ◇ Kai [Release]

        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Katon
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Doton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Yōton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




    T a i j u t s u :
      ------- < Style Name [ Stage ] >
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]


    B u k i j u t s u :
      ------- < Style Name [ Stage ] >
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




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Everything is all fine and dandy just one tiny issue.. i see you used both PA's to gain stats... but if my math serves me correctly.. it should only be a 1 point increase not 1.5 please fix accordingly

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:05 am


Kiko_Alacran


I was more going off this part of the stat section of the rules.

"using two PA's together will allow 3 points to be added into a stat or split between two stats. "

Is that no longer a thing?
PostPosted: Mon Sep 14, 2015 2:27 pm


magcookie
Kiko_Alacran


I was more going off this part of the stat section of the rules.

"using two PA's together will allow 3 points to be added into a stat or split between two stats. "

Is that no longer a thing?



ok nvm i must of missed that part my bad.... ignore the previous issue...

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 14, 2015 2:28 pm


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►►► P E R S O N A L - I N F O R M A T I O N

    Full Name: Shauna Marie Toshi
    Nicknames: [none at this time]
    Dream Title: The Molten Swordsman
    Current Title: Molten Shauna

    Age: 17
    Birthday: October 2nd
    Gender: Female
    Sexual Orientation: Pansexual

    Height: 5' 2"
    Weight: 113 lbs
    Eye Color: Light Gray
    Hair Color: Pale Red

    Build: Thin, athletic, and a little short. Shauna has nearly no fat on her bones, most of her body weight simple comes from her tone muscles.
    Scars/Tattoos/Birthmarks: Shauna has a rather large number of scars on her back from a particularly nasty whipping session. She has the symbol for Yōton tattooed above her heart.
    Outstanding Features: Shes has a few piercings in some rather delicate places, aside from the pair in her earlobes. Generally wears rather simple clothing and almost always has a plain white dress shirt on. Some days she might wear a skirt with tights, maybe some simple slacks, or even some pants that are too tight to move in... this all depends on the mood she's in when she wakes up or the mission she needs to be prepared for.

    Personal Skills: From spending much of her childhood reading various books in the library, she has a near encyclopedic memory. Able to memorize the names and faces of people she meets in an instant, she even remembers the dates and times she met them. Able to draw quotes from books she had only read once from inside her vault of a brain space. An expert fisher though she doesn't fish anymore. Decent baker, knowing her way around fresh dough. She's very well versed with mythology of the Shinobi world, particularly in the Mist's classic Seven Swords.
    Personal Goals: Read every book in the great library. Live up to the full potential of her bloodline.
    Shinobi Goals: She hopes one day to be a member of the Seven Swordsmen and locate the missing original swords. If that doesn't work out for her she plans to travel the world and collect peoples stories, maybe write a few books about the juicy ones..
    Relationship Status: Single and ready to mingle.
    Personality: Shauna is... to put it plain a sweet and ditsy girl that trusts far to easily. She sees the best in everyone no matter how rude someone might be to her. While she may trust everyone, she only believes in one second chance if someone breaks that trust twice she knows better then to let them break it a third. Shes also a people pleaser, loving to make people laugh and smile. This way about her stems from her abusive father and wanting to leave a better mark on the world then he did.

    Village: Kirigakure
    Headband Location: Tied around her neck.
    Headband Color: Pale Red


►►► C O M B A T - D A T A

    Bloodline: Yōton, Bloodlines Head. [Approved by Azeiel The Risen]

    Primary Class: Bloodline
    Secondary Class: Bloodline Sub
    Chakra Pool: 345
    Chakra Elements: Katon, Doton
    Chakra Color: Gray
    Chakra Materialization: A thin outline.
    Rank: A Simple Genin

    Strengths:
      ◇ Heat, she is able to stand higher temperatures than most being one with her Yōton blood. Doesn't make her immune to fire based attacks, just most the heat they put off.
      ◇ Medium range combat, isn't perfect at either either ranges but isn't terrible at them either finding a happy median in the middle.
      ◇ Perfect memory.
    Weaknesses:
      ◇ Trusting, gives everyone the benefit of doubt the first time she meets them.
      ◇ Fight multiple opponents at once, tends to focus down on one person at a time.
      ◇ Genjutsu, she has a hard time with deception. She also refuses to learn it.
    Fears:
      ◇ Someone she trusts wholeheartedly betraying her, even worse if they do it through genjutsu.
      ◇ Being deemed unfit to join Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen.

    Class Paths:
      Strong Lineage
      The user has a very strong connection to their family line and a natural aptitude at using the Jutsu that are of their Kekkei Genkai. As such, all selectors of this path gain a +1 rank in power to their bloodline techniques and a -10 bonus to Chakra control applied only to their bloodline techniques.

      Prodigal Child [Specialist]
      The user was born with a strong blood connection to the ancestors of the Clan. Because of this they are able to grow much quicker in terms of the Clan's ranking and hierarchy. As well they can use their clan techniques with ease, making them cost [1] full rank less Chakra than other users of the clan.

      Path of the Manipulator
      The user was born with a strong connection to their clan's elements, allowing them to freely manipulate their clan's abilities with single handed seals.

      Pure Blood [Specialist]
      The user chooses two of the disciplines from the main class rather than just one


    Learning Reductions:
      ◇ Learn Kekkei Genkei techniques a grand total of [2] posts faster.

    Clan Attributes:
      ◇ Immune to the effects of Yōton.

    Personal Attribute:
      ◇ Royal Flush: Shauna starts off with [1.5] in both her Speed and Agility.


►►► S T A T S

    Strength: 0
    Speed: 1.5
    Agility: 1.5
    Reflexes: 0
    Flexibility: 0


►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A

    Weapon Type: Hatchet
    Weapon Reach: 14"
    Weapon Weight: 1 1/4 lbs
    Weapon Location: Strapped to her lower back.
    Weapon Properties: [n/a]


►►► I N V E N T O R Y

    ◇ Kunai x2
    ◇ Senbon x 8
    ◇ Shuriken x5


►►► M I S S I O N S - D A T A

    AC: 00,000
    Ryo: 500

    D-ranked: 0
    C-ranked: 0
    B-ranked: 0
    A-ranked: 0
    S-ranked: 0
    S+-ranked: 0
    Event Missions: 0
    Chakra Training Missions:
    ◇ [n/a]
    Physical Training Missions:
    ◇ Agility: [n/a]
    ◇ Flexibility: [n/a]


►►► F A M I L Y - A N D - H I S T O R Y

    Father: Deceased: Naga Toshi [Official report deems cause of death: self defense]
    Mother: Npc: Aria Toshi
    Siblings: None

    Traumas: She isn't the biggest fan of fishing nets, or fishing for that matter.
    History:
      Shauna was born to a small family of self sustaining fishers in the land of Water, just her and her parents for miles. From what she gathered growing up her father was unable to pass his exams to become a full Shinobi and out of embarrassment for his failures he vanished into the country side. Her mother had followed him due to her love for him at the time. It wasn't until Shauna was born on their fifth year away from civilization that her father started to change for the worst. Her earliest memory of her father was smacking her for letting a fish get off her hook. Most of their money they made from the fish was spent on feeding her fathers unhealthy affair with alcohol. She honestly feared for her life anytime she didn't return home with a bundle of fish while he was wasted. His drinking habits got so bad that one day after getting caught in a storm she returned with nothing, not even her fishing net had made it back with her. Cold and soaked to the bones she made her way into the house only to find her father finishing off a bottle. He slammed the empty glass onto the floor as he walked over her full of rage. He took her back outside and tied her to a tree while he got his old tattered fishing net from their shed. The last thing she remembers from that night was the thin fabric ripping into her skin like a bundle of whips, the pain was to much for her causing her to pass out half way through. Apparently this was the last straw for her mother for when she woke up she was being carried away from their home. Her mothers hands were covered in sticky blood and trembling as her tears rained down on Shauna's face.

      Her life was much different after that, her mother decided that she wasn't going to return to that hut of nightmares and instead moved them to the outskirts of Kirigakure. She didn't have enough money to gain housing inside the city but she had enough to start a small farm so they would at least have food. She refused to let Shauna help her with the farming telling her to enjoy the rest of her childhood, that she couldn't stand to rob it from Shauna any longer. At first Shauna didn't know what to do with her time not being allowed to do housework so she was forced to explore the city of Kirigakure for entertainment. It took her a few weeks before she found the cities great library. She spent most of her time before the academy reading in the almost endless halls of bookshelves often loosing track of time and returning to her house well past her curfew. She never really let the first half of her life force the smile off her face, she says it as an experience that made her who she is. She didn't have the easiest time in the academy, having a notable difficulty with Henge no Jutsu for a few weeks while other students moved on to Kawarimi no Jutsu. No matter how hard of a time she had from her classmates she found joy in learning from her failures. She never let her initial mediocre grades with Transformation hold her back from graduating with her class. Before graduation her mother presented her fathers old tattered Yōton scrolls as a reminder to never be ashamed of her bloodline, no matter the bad apples in the bunch. After graduating and before heading off to get her headband, she decided to get the symbol for her bloodline tattooed right above her heart.


►►► T E C H N I Q U E S

    Limitations:
      Ninjutsu: 00 //06
      Genjutsu: 00 //06
      Taijutsu Styles: 00 //02
      Bukijutsu Styles: 00 //02


    N i n j u t s u :
      ------- Maruton
        [ E-rank ]
        ◇ Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
        ◇ Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
        ◇ Genso Bushin no Jutsu [Illusion Clone Technique]
        ◇ Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
        ◇ Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
        ◇ Kai [Release]

        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Katon
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Doton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- Yōton
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




    T a i j u t s u :
      ------- Tame Za Kyokudo [Stage 0]
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]


    B u k i j u t s u :
      ------- Mist Sword Style [ Stage 0 ]
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]



      ------- [Not Chosen Yet] [ Stage 0 ]
        [ E-rank ]


        [ D-rank ]


        [ C-rank ]


        [ B-rank ]


        [ A-rank ]


        [ S-rank ]


        [ SS-rank ]




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