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• Hairstyle and Color : The hair is a light blonde like in the picture but the tips a pastel pink and purple.
• Skin/fur colors : 6 for the skin color. The fur parts (3 that fades into 4 then the tips fades into 5. if you can try to make it kinda look like a galaxy.)
• Eye Color: 1
• Markings: white dots all over the fur part to make it look like the stars of the galaxy.
• Racial Features: no neck fur horn size: graceful curves, a medium size
• Clothing and Accessories : change the jacket color to a pastel pink. The dark part of the shoes( the black and red part) make it pastel pink.) and the hair white


outfit and hairstyle


Colors

Nightmare's Backstory

Well as a Freshling she doesn’t have much of a backstory. Amethyst is a orphan she never knew her family. It never bothered her because as a freshling her mind is very optimistic. She never really played with other freshling because she is always playing with paint that she made out of barriers and what ever made colors. She never got upset that she didn’t have parents (in the personality of the nightmare is more of her present.) As an orphan Amethyst is always positive. She love living in the woods and being in the trees. She feels like her family is the forest and the creatures that share the wood with her. Sometime she run into other nightmares passing by or even getting lost of course she would help them find their ways. You may think that Amethyst would have bad luck but she doesn’t. Since she believes that if you don’t think of anything negative or bad it will never happen, so she always stays positive. There is a feather in her hair that she always has because it’s also a good luck charm for her and when she first found the forest this feather landed in front of her feet and it was a sign to her that she has found her home. She is always wearing this feather in her hair and not for just good luck but a symbol for her home.

As for her appearance, it would be a lot easier if you would link to your pictures. I had a bit of trouble figuring out which picture went with which, and it might be a good idea to make a custom form just in case she gets picked up! Your outfit and hairstyle is also missing. Again, take a look at the templates I linked above! You can also get custom horns, but you'll still need to take a look for other things.

For her personality, you might want to take a look and proof read your paragraph! There are quite a few grammatical errors within it, and we'd be happy to help you fix them if you ask! Also, the forest is a dangerous place that she would not be allowed to go within. There are many monsters and creatures that would wish harm on her, and she wouldn't be allowed there by any of the caretakers. She couldn't have learned to survive by herself either because of this.

If you could also list out her personal traits and expand on them, would be a little more organized and easier to read for us too! I didn't see any negative traits for her either, so if you could add those it would be fantastic! What about being an Imp does she like? How does she relate to her race and having no family? Does she want to join a Cartel when she's older? What does she think about being in Arkham, especially since they encourage the arts?

As for her backstory, you need to expand on how she feels being an orphan. This is a big deal for her race in particular. Some of your sentences don't make much sense, so if you need help, again, just ask! You'll need to come up with a different story for the feather because can't be from the forest, and please expand on this event.

Your RP response is a little short and could use some more emotion. How does she feel when she sees the plushie, especially one that's abandoned? You've got a lot of action, but not much emotion. Again, your grammar needs work and we'd be happy to help you fix it.

Please quote me back once you've fixed her! If you'd like to discuss anything privately, please PM Nightmare Ava.