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 Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 1:07 am
I write poems and was wondering if anyone else did and if they would post some of theirs on here
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 1:08 am
heres one of mine
Everything I've Done.
By: Akio
I try so hard.
It gets me no where.
Nothing pleases them.
They think the worst things.
See my ways in the wrong way.
Every day is a nightmare
I just want go on a boat and set sail away from this life.
Sometimes I want to take a knife to myself.
I pray for my love to come save me.
She holds me soft like a dove.
Forgive me for what I've done.
I have to run.
This life is hell.
I feel like Im trapped in a cell.
I yell but no one can hear me.
For i fell so long ago.
Everything I've done.
Make foolish mistakes.
I always break.
I always tried for everyones sake.
My life is all fake.
I feel like Im going to fade away into nothing.
Im nothing but a sin.
Sorry Im here.
Im god's worst fear.
Im sheding a tear.
My dear forgive me for everything Ive done.
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 5:53 am
It's heartache every moment, heartache every moment.... Wow, you're very talented.
I use to write poems but they were short and dark so I just stopped. when I'm with you..
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:22 am
Sympathetic.Wish It's heartache every moment, heartache every moment.... Wow, you're very talented.
I use to write poems but they were short and dark so I just stopped. when I'm with you.. really you thinks so thanks xd you should never stop at first I couldn't write them but I then just started to write what happenes in my life and how I feel and before I knew it I was writing poems.
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 11:27 am
It's heartache every moment, heartache every moment.... You're welcome!
And I know I shouldn't have stopped, but I just couldn't properly put my feelings into words and such.. when I'm with you..
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 1:21 pm
I wrote a new one I also put them in my journal lol.
Simple Kiss
By: Akio
I just got of the phone with you.
Now I'm all alone.
I wish to be with you.
To hold you tight.
Lonliness makes me so cold.
Being without you is making me crazy.
My memories of you is so hazzy.
I miss that perfume you use that made you smell like daysies.
I wish to give you one last simple kiss.
Crying now I ball up my fist.
Knowing I might not come back.
This all can't be real.
Will your heart ever heal.
Im sorry I'm gone.
I hope my name iis never placed upon that list.
I pray I come home back alive.
Wanting to dive right into your arms.
Never let you go.
I love you so.
These years go round.
Pray for that your soldier comes home safe and sound.
I carry the locket that you found on the ground the day we got married.
I hold it now looking at your picture.
I dream of being there and give you a simple kiss and tell you I love you.
I hope this war will finally end.
So i can finally be with you forever my love.
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:18 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:29 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:27 am
i like poems.. yet i only seem to write them at school
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:48 pm
Dragonfaerie i like poems.. yet i only seem to write them at school do you have any of them with you?
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 6:15 pm
i like...haikus and poems
The Worst Feeling is...
Missing Someone you know...
Will never miss you back.
yea, I wrote that awhile ago, when I fell for a guy that hardly ever noticed me. And when school was over, I would miss him all summer.
Cut Me Open
Fill me with Sand
Sew me back together with a Rubberband
Can you hear me scream?
Can you fix the seam?
No, you can't
its about feeling empty,
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 11:06 pm
Sazzerous i like...haikus and poems The Worst Feeling is...
Missing Someone you know...
Will never miss you back.yea, I wrote that awhile ago, when I fell for a guy that hardly ever noticed me. And when school was over, I would miss him all summer. Cut Me Open
Fill me with Sand
Sew me back together with a Rubberband
Can you hear me scream?
Can you fix the seam?
No, you can'tits about feeling empty, I like that alot.
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