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Innocent Hope

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 3:19 pm


Hey. I'm back from my hiatus. I had no idea that I would come back to gaia, but I guess I retreated back here ^.^ So here is my poem. This is my first time writing a poem that doesn't rhyme, and it was difficult! Sorry if it is really bad sweatdrop

Once, I looked to you
I asked for friendship
You glanced at me
And accepted my request

Once, I clung to you
I asked for love
You stared at me
And accepted my request

Once, I kissed you
I asked for marriage
You smiled at me
And accepted my request

Once, I cried to you
I asked for strength
Your grave was mute
And it denied my request
PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2015 1:17 pm


That was fantastic.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 7:12 am


Aww, such a sad ending. Good poem.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:43 pm


I love it!

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