Name: Ignion Las Dragunda Gender: Male Age: 500 years old((Appears 23)) Race: Arrancar Sexuality: Bisexual Appearance: Hollow Hole: Abdomen ((Location)) Estigma: Covers left eye. Horns Sprout from under his hair Affiliation: Las Noches{Espada} Position/Rank: Espada 10 Fears: Being hummilliated in battle. Personality:Has a natural mildly aggressive nature. This is his approach to life in all that he does. He believes that the underdog should never be overlooked or underestimated, as he speaks from experience growing up in Hueco Mundo. His goal is to become strong enough to rid the world of elements that threaten the lil man and has no remorse in killing those who get in his way. He hates when warriors bully the weak, as such he refuses to fight those weaker than him, unless there's no way around it. Surprisingly in his spare time he love to gaze up at the stars in the sky in Hueco Mundo. He finds it calms the inner fury he has as his aspect of death is rage. Plus he believes there's no greater feeling than being in the skies as free as you can be, nothing holding him down. Though when his skill is questioned, it sparks his inner rage and he goes on flaming rampage. History: As a hollow Ignion was very weak. Being that he was a fledgeling he would always be a target for bigger hollows that wanted to becaome stronger. One day he was cornered by a group of hollows. His instincts finally kicked in and his power grew enough for him to fend off the attacker and feast on their power. Over a span of 300 years after the soul society lost one of their rukon districts, Ignion amassed a great deal of power and grew to be one of the fiercest Adjuchas in Hueco Mundo. As he sat within his lair atop a mountain, he noticed that their was an increase of activity in Las Noches. His curiosity forced him to survey the area. He then realized that a powerfull Arrancar was amassing an army. 200 years later an ambassador aproached him while observing one of his battles and offered him a place in Las Noches.. Combat Information
Specialization: Cero Qualification: Cero/ High-sped Movement Known Techniques: - Cero: Bala (Bullet) - Freebie for Arrancars affiliated to Las Noches While similar in function to a Cero, a Bala is not nearly as powerful, but, thanks to its composition, its speed is 20 times faster, allowing it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Cero does. The overall speed and power of a Bala varies depending on the Arrancar using it.
Cero Metralleta (Sub-Machine Gun Zero) Holding out a finger, the practitioner charges multiple Cero before firing a barrage of them at their opponent. The Cero continue to fire from these points repeatedly. While firing, one can adjust their aim to redirect the attack. This Cero's charging time is 3 times that of a normal Cero, but one may continue to fire them for a whole of 2 posts
Bala Barrage by Master Kamina Reborn | Bala required Channeling balas into the caster's fingertips and palm they can thrust their hand forward like a normal bala would but they can fire a volley of 20 bala's that are smaller but can be shot smililary to the cero matrella and can be fired with one or both hands for greater effect. The charge speed for this bala ability is twice as long as a normal bala charge
La Mirada (The Gaze) The practitioner can charge two circular Cero in front of each of their eyes. When fully charged, the two Cero will fuse together in the middle before firing as a single, highly destructive blast that covers a very wide area. It does not require any stance, but one is blinded when charging and casting this attack. It is also hard to sense others' Reiatsu as charging up the Cero will release much Reiryoku around the caster.
Cero Impact by Master Kamina Reborn Gathering cero energy into the palm of the caster's hand a ball forms and condenses and only stops growing and compressing energy to the same size as the user's palm until the user thrusts his or her hand out to make impact on the target. Unlike normal ceros this cero isnt a projectile but a melee move. The explosion from the cero impact attack depends on how long the user allows the move to charge. There is no charge for this attack at first but to make the attack as strong as it can be the charge must take 8 times longer then a normal cero. .
Heirro: Armadura (Armor) Doubles a normal Hierro's resistance and numbs all pain in the affected area. This removes Hierro completely from the user's joints and cannot be used on large portions of the user's abdomen as it will completely seal away one's movement. Like metal, however, it is extremely weak to abrupt changes in temperature.
Sonido: Gemelos Sonído (Sound Twins) Sonído is an instinctual, high-speed movement performed by Arrancar. Master practitioners can increase the number of steps in their normal movement to increase their speed to the point where they can leave afterimages of themselves that can act as clones. They are realistic enough to fool opponents as they can bleed when wounded. This technique is often used to distract and subsequently surprise an opponent. The maximum number of clones one can create, using this technique, is based on one's proficiency.
Descorrer: Garganta Broadcast Arrancar and Hollows are able to create spiritual pathways to travel between the realms of Hueco Mundo, the Soul Society and the Human World. These pathways are called Garganta. The user of Garganta Broadcast can create individual Garganta portals that can show events that are currently taking place in a different area. It can only be done to show events happening in a different realm and the user must have a location in mind. The Gargantas may be on-sided, showing only an image and remaining completely invisible to those that are being observed or it may be two sided, allowing both sides to communicate, but they are merely images, meaning that nothing may cross those small screens
Release Command: Roar & burn{Rudigo y quemar} Resurrección Appearance:
Resurrección Power-Ups: Speed & Power Resurrección Abilities -Hell Flamethrower{Infierno Lanzallamas}: Ignion inhales deeply and releases a powerful flame from his mouth. Causes a great deal of burning damage. -Hell Dragon Bomb{Infierno Bomba Dragunda}: Ignion forms a large mass of flaming cero energy and fire it with speed at his enemy. The blast radius is 20ft. Any caught by the attack are dealt severe fire damage. -Hell Shower{Ducha Infierno}: Ignion Summon a mass of flaming cero energy and flings it into the air releasing multiple missile like fireballs to bombard his target. Cause decent burning damage
Segunda Etapa Status:[Not Achieved]
Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2014 7:54 pm
If your profile is done, change the title from U/C to AA or Awaiting Approval. This will let me know that a profile review is needed.
-cracks knuckles-
Okay, buckle up because this is going to be a rough ride.
Personality 4 words just won't cut it. Not to mention that "Aggressive" and "Reserved" can sometimes be seen and polar opposites. Here are a couple of questions to help you with this section: what are his beliefs? what is his goal in life? what does he like and dislike and why? does he have any special quirks or traits that would help him stand out more than normal? does he have berserk buttons that, when pressed, he will snap?
History Everything's fine though I just want to make sure that we're both on the same page concerning a couple of things: -As an Arrancar, Ignion would have been extremely young (no need to change age since it counts his Hollow years as well) and would have only been turned extremely recently. He would have to either been part of the first batch of Arrancars made (at the guild launch) or freshly out of the oven (Just after Soul Society lost a Rukon district). -Your character would have also been an Adjuchas when he was turned since we are no longer accepting Vasto Lorde
Specialization You can only pick one: Cero or Hierro. Please Read This Thread Qualification Uh, yeah, as an Espada, pick 2 after you've read the thread mentioned above.
Pesquisa/Hierro/Sonido/High-Speed Regeneration/Descorrer -As an Espada, you may only pick 4 out of 5 disciplines -As an Espada, you may pick a total of 4 additional split among the disciplines your character has. -Sentido Arena is a technique that requires the help of an RPC (Tierra) to learn except she's gone inactive so her character has been archived. We may plan to turn this technique into one that anyone can learn in the future, but it isn't available for now.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less. -What is the condition for this ability to activate? Insight can be easily associated to metagaming so this ability will need to be explained in much greater detail and be heavily regulated by the crew. It will need limitations/restrictions.
Profile Quality I'll be honest, I don't think you will make a decent Fourth Espada. The pre-made techniques that were copy/pasted take more room than what you have actually typed out for your character's profile and that gives me a very bad first impression. Power and rank alone won't cut it in this guild. Even if I give you the rank of fourth Espada, I am convinced that your your character will quickly drop in rank should people decide to challenge him. In short, I am rejecting your profile and your application as fourth Espada. Feel free to apply as a fraccion. Promotion is always possible if you improve. Rank only dictates your character's strength at its creation and he can always train to obtain more power, but you will have to work more or at least prove to me that you can do better than that.
If your profile is done, change the title from U/C to AA or Awaiting Approval. This will let me know that a profile review is needed.
-cracks knuckles-
Okay, buckle up because this is going to be a rough ride.
Personality 4 words just won't cut it. Not to mention that "Aggressive" and "Reserved" can sometimes be seen and polar opposites. Here are a couple of questions to help you with this section: what are his beliefs? what is his goal in life? what does he like and dislike and why? does he have any special quirks or traits that would help him stand out more than normal? does he have berserk buttons that, when pressed, he will snap?
History Everything's fine though I just want to make sure that we're both on the same page concerning a couple of things: -As an Arrancar, Ignion would have been extremely young (no need to change age since it counts his Hollow years as well) and would have only been turned extremely recently. He would have to either been part of the first batch of Arrancars made (at the guild launch) or freshly out of the oven (Just after Soul Society lost a Rukon district). -Your character would have also been an Adjuchas when he was turned since we are no longer accepting Vasto Lorde
Specialization You can only pick one: Cero or Hierro. Please Read This Thread Qualification Uh, yeah, as an Espada, pick 2 after you've read the thread mentioned above.
Pesquisa/Hierro/Sonido/High-Speed Regeneration/Descorrer -As an Espada, you may only pick 4 out of 5 disciplines -As an Espada, you may pick a total of 4 additional split among the disciplines your character has. -Sentido Arena is a technique that requires the help of an RPC (Tierra) to learn except she's gone inactive so her character has been archived. We may plan to turn this technique into one that anyone can learn in the future, but it isn't available for now.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less. -What is the condition for this ability to activate? Insight can be easily associated to metagaming so this ability will need to be explained in much greater detail and be heavily regulated by the crew. It will need limitations/restrictions.
Profile Quality I'll be honest, I don't think you will make a decent Fourth Espada. The pre-made techniques that were copy/pasted take more room than what you have actually typed out for your character's profile and that gives me a very bad first impression. Power and rank alone won't cut it in this guild. Even if I give you the rank of fourth Espada, I am convinced that your your character will quickly drop in rank should people decide to challenge him. In short, I am rejecting your profile and your application as fourth Espada. Feel free to apply as a fraccion. Promotion is always possible if you improve. Rank only dictates your character's strength at its creation and he can always train to obtain more power, but you will have to work more or at least prove to me that you can do better than that.
I hope I hit all the points u noted. I do apologized for the incompetence in making him. I would like to submit this revision for approval. please do not hesitate to note anything else is wrong. Thanx biggrin
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2014 11:28 am
Phantom Nephilim
Personality 4 words just won't cut it. Not to mention that "Aggressive" and "Reserved" can sometimes be seen and polar opposites. Here are a couple of questions to help you with this section: what are his beliefs? what is his goal in life? what does he like and dislike and why? does he have any special quirks or traits that would help him stand out more than normal? does he have berserk buttons that, when pressed, he will snap? Done though Hueco Mundo doesn't have stars. It's one of its peculiarities.
History Everything's fine though I just want to make sure that we're both on the same page concerning a couple of things: -As an Arrancar, Ignion would have been extremely young (no need to change age since it counts his Hollow years as well) and would have only been turned extremely recently. He would have to either been part of the first batch of Arrancars made (at the guild launch) or freshly out of the oven (Just after Soul Society lost a Rukon district). -Your character would have also been an Adjuchas when he was turned since we are no longer accepting Vasto Lorde
Specialization You can only pick one: Cero or Hierro. Please Read This Thread [Cero. And only Cero. The rest won't have any effect both combat-wise and training-wise.] Qualification Uh, yeah, as an Espada, pick 2 after you've read the thread mentioned above. [If you have read the previous thread, you didn't really understand it. Qualifications that should be listed are disciplines in which your character may potentially create private techniques only he would know. Bukijutsu/Taijutsu/High-Speed Movement/Cero/etc.]
Pesquisa/Hierro/Sonido/High-Speed Regeneration/Descorrer -As an Espada, you may only pick 4 out of 5 disciplines -As an Espada, you may pick a total of 4 additional split among the disciplines your character has. -Sentido Arena is a technique that requires the help of an RPC (Tierra) to learn except she's gone inactive so her character has been archived. We may plan to turn this technique into one that anyone can learn in the future, but it isn't available for now. Done.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less. -What is the condition for this ability to activate? Insight can be easily associated to metagaming so this ability will need to be explained in much greater detail and be heavily regulated by the crew. It will need limitations/restrictions. [What do you mean by stats? This guild doesn't work on stat points. Will he know how fast others are? What their max speed is? What their max Reiatsu power and strength are? From what I understood, it requires a lot of concentration to use it, but once he's done it, he would already have known the opponent's 'stats' and wouldn't need to maintain it so that's not enough as a drawback. I would suggest that he needs to have his opponent in his line of sight for 2 consecutive posts to have enough data and that he would lose his eyesight for the next 2 posts as a drawback. ]
Profile Quality I'll be honest, I don't think you will make a decent Fourth Espada. The pre-made techniques that were copy/pasted take more room than what you have actually typed out for your character's profile and that gives me a very bad first impression. Power and rank alone won't cut it in this guild. Even if I give you the rank of fourth Espada, I am convinced that your your character will quickly drop in rank should people decide to challenge him. In short, I am rejecting your profile and your application as fourth Espada. Feel free to apply as a fraccion. Promotion is always possible if you improve. Rank only dictates your character's strength at its creation and he can always train to obtain more power, but you will have to work more or at least prove to me that you can do better than that. [I am still not impressed, but I am willing to give your character the spot of 10th Espada because you are open to criticism.]
Personality 4 words just won't cut it. Not to mention that "Aggressive" and "Reserved" can sometimes be seen and polar opposites. Here are a couple of questions to help you with this section: what are his beliefs? what is his goal in life? what does he like and dislike and why? does he have any special quirks or traits that would help him stand out more than normal? does he have berserk buttons that, when pressed, he will snap? Done though Hueco Mundo doesn't have stars. It's one of its peculiarities.
History Everything's fine though I just want to make sure that we're both on the same page concerning a couple of things: -As an Arrancar, Ignion would have been extremely young (no need to change age since it counts his Hollow years as well) and would have only been turned extremely recently. He would have to either been part of the first batch of Arrancars made (at the guild launch) or freshly out of the oven (Just after Soul Society lost a Rukon district). -Your character would have also been an Adjuchas when he was turned since we are no longer accepting Vasto Lorde
Specialization You can only pick one: Cero or Hierro. Please Read This Thread [Cero. And only Cero. The rest won't have any effect both combat-wise and training-wise.] Qualification Uh, yeah, as an Espada, pick 2 after you've read the thread mentioned above. [If you have read the previous thread, you didn't really understand it. Qualifications that should be listed are disciplines in which your character may potentially create private techniques only he would know. Bukijutsu/Taijutsu/High-Speed Movement/Cero/etc.]
Pesquisa/Hierro/Sonido/High-Speed Regeneration/Descorrer -As an Espada, you may only pick 4 out of 5 disciplines -As an Espada, you may pick a total of 4 additional split among the disciplines your character has. -Sentido Arena is a technique that requires the help of an RPC (Tierra) to learn except she's gone inactive so her character has been archived. We may plan to turn this technique into one that anyone can learn in the future, but it isn't available for now. Done.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less. -What is the condition for this ability to activate? Insight can be easily associated to metagaming so this ability will need to be explained in much greater detail and be heavily regulated by the crew. It will need limitations/restrictions. [What do you mean by stats? This guild doesn't work on stat points. Will he know how fast others are? What their max speed is? What their max Reiatsu power and strength are? From what I understood, it requires a lot of concentration to use it, but once he's done it, he would already have known the opponent's 'stats' and wouldn't need to maintain it so that's not enough as a drawback. I would suggest that he needs to have his opponent in his line of sight for 2 consecutive posts to have enough data and that he would lose his eyesight for the next 2 posts as a drawback. ]
Profile Quality I'll be honest, I don't think you will make a decent Fourth Espada. The pre-made techniques that were copy/pasted take more room than what you have actually typed out for your character's profile and that gives me a very bad first impression. Power and rank alone won't cut it in this guild. Even if I give you the rank of fourth Espada, I am convinced that your your character will quickly drop in rank should people decide to challenge him. In short, I am rejecting your profile and your application as fourth Espada. Feel free to apply as a fraccion. Promotion is always possible if you improve. Rank only dictates your character's strength at its creation and he can always train to obtain more power, but you will have to work more or at least prove to me that you can do better than that. [I am still not impressed, but I am willing to give your character the spot of 10th Espada because you are open to criticism.]
Thank u. Iv made changes as instructed. sorry for the previous letdown.
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2014 9:36 am
Phantom Nephilim
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less.
Remove one of your Hierro,Sonido,High-Speed Regeneration or Descorrer and I will approve this profile. This is a swap for the Ojo de Dragon. One less technique in exchange for one extra ability.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less.
Remove one of your Hierro,Sonido,High-Speed Regeneration or Descorrer and I will approve this profile. This is a swap for the Ojo de Dragon. One less technique in exchange for one extra ability.
done. biggrin
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2014 4:59 pm
Phantom Nephilim
Feiyimei
Phantom Nephilim
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less.
Remove one of your Hierro,Sonido,High-Speed Regeneration or Descorrer and I will approve this profile. This is a swap for the Ojo de Dragon. One less technique in exchange for one extra ability.
done. biggrin
Sorry, I think i wasn't too clear. You could keep High Speed Regen (it's a discipline) but not the technique (I think you had Solita Vista). Either way, Approved.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less.
Remove one of your Hierro,Sonido,High-Speed Regeneration or Descorrer and I will approve this profile. This is a swap for the Ojo de Dragon. One less technique in exchange for one extra ability.
done. biggrin
Sorry, I think i wasn't too clear. You could keep High Speed Regen (it's a discipline) but not the technique (I think you had Solita Vista). Either way, Approved.
Its ok I got rid of it and placed solita vista back. thank u again. Were should I bein posting to keep the cohesion in the arrancar story
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2014 6:05 pm
Phantom Nephilim
Feiyimei
Phantom Nephilim
Feiyimei
Phantom Nephilim
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less.
Remove one of your Hierro,Sonido,High-Speed Regeneration or Descorrer and I will approve this profile. This is a swap for the Ojo de Dragon. One less technique in exchange for one extra ability.
done. biggrin
Sorry, I think i wasn't too clear. You could keep High Speed Regen (it's a discipline) but not the technique (I think you had Solita Vista). Either way, Approved.
Its ok I got rid of it and placed solita vista back. thank u again. Were should I bein posting to keep the cohesion in the arrancar story
Uhhh, okay, lemme re explain things a bit better sweatdrop arrancars have more 'disciplines' than the rest of the races and what is considered a technique an ability in the canon (high speed regen), is a discipline. Your character should only have High-Speed Regen and not Solita Vista. He would be able to heal himself quickly in battle, but wouldn't be able to do Ulquiorra's eye trick.
As for where to beginn, I think the Genesis Chamber in Las Noches would be a good place (I think the current Segunda is there) or any place in Las Noches.
El Ojo de Dragon -For me to accept a custom ability that could play an important role in battle, you will have to swap it for 1 technique for the previous section. In other words, you will have 1 less.
Remove one of your Hierro,Sonido,High-Speed Regeneration or Descorrer and I will approve this profile. This is a swap for the Ojo de Dragon. One less technique in exchange for one extra ability.
done. biggrin
Sorry, I think i wasn't too clear. You could keep High Speed Regen (it's a discipline) but not the technique (I think you had Solita Vista). Either way, Approved.
Its ok I got rid of it and placed solita vista back. thank u again. Were should I bein posting to keep the cohesion in the arrancar story
Uhhh, okay, lemme re explain things a bit better sweatdrop arrancars have more 'disciplines' than the rest of the races and what is considered a technique an ability in the canon (high speed regen), is a discipline. Your character should only have High-Speed Regen and not Solita Vista. He would be able to heal himself quickly in battle, but wouldn't be able to do Ulquiorra's eye trick.
As for where to beginn, I think the Genesis Chamber in Las Noches would be a good place (I think the current Segunda is there) or any place in Las Noches.
ok I got it now after u dumbed it down for me. lol I apologize for the difficulty
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