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Drakulya666

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Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 8:30 pm

My big sis
Keeps bringing home
All these romance flicks
It's so depressing
Because
I see that look
I see them kiss
I wish I had it
I'm single
Can't date
But long for the look of love
Call me a romantic
But right now
Romance flicks
Are depressing

Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 3:52 am

crying so right!

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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:05 am

Drakulya666

My big sis
Keeps bringing home
All these romance flicks
It's so depressing
Because
I see that look
I see them kiss
I wish I had it
I'm single
Can't date
But long for the look of love
Call me a romantic
But right now
Romance flicks
Are depressing

no offense but i hope this wasn't a poem... it was more of a rant? try putting a flow to it... it just seems like one elongated sentence

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