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 Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 11:14 am
((So I just wrote this as a roleplay opener with someone and I am really happy with how it turned out! Here it is!))
Irony was a funny thing, Roxanne realized. Her days now, spent stealing just to make enough to survive in this impoverished section of the city, on the outskirts of town. In the distance bright, gleaming and clean skyscrapers winked, like some promise just out of reach. She had one hoped to move down town where all of the action was. But since the nuclear explosion, she lost most of her possessions. Her life had not been privileged but her living had been at least a comfortable one overall.
But the irony was that in the nighttime hours, she patrolled the city in a costume she had to make herself (through a great many pains and pricked fingers), fighting crime and saving innocents. She was a hero at night and yet she had to commit crimes just to survive. Roxanne felt a bit like a hypocrite, fighting law breakers at night and yet she was just like the people she busted in the day.
But someone needed to do something.
It wasn't just the slums that were going downhill. With the nuclear meltdown, everyone had felt that it was over, the city officials had pledged to take measures to clean up the damage and nothing was done and the event had slipped from most of the city's mind. But the damage was still there. Roxanne had come into her powers only about five months prior but as of late there has been talk on the filthy streets about others developing unusual powers. And not everyone is using them for nobler purposes. And they were staggered because of the nuclear radiation.
How long would it be before the entire slum was affected?
Looking at Roxanne, you would be unable to tell that she possessed powers. Very much the average woman, she was about five foot seven with a lean frame from her nightly exercise busting crime and many days with little food. Her skin was a medium tone, not exceptionally pale or tan and her eyes were a deep brown. They did not glow in the sunlight nor were they possessing the likeness of chocolate. They were just brown. Her hair was very similar, a dark brown and it tumbled down her back in turbulent rolls until it reached her waist. It did not shine in the sunlight, nor did it seem to glow. While her appearance was average, her personality was full of life, energy and she was not one to back down from the promise of a new day.
She frowned and tugged lightly at her crudely made costume, "Well, time to go patrol. In this atrocity. I should not be allowed to sew. Ever."
But while it did not look that great, it was functional and she found herself climbing out her window, mask on her face, she made it to the roof. The moon was not yet high but it was full, swollen to it's peak where it spilled forth it's silver light. Roxanne chuckled lightly. Hypocrite or not, she did enjoy this part of her life. Brown eyes gleamed with vivacious eagerness and she found herself dashing across buildings, heading towards downtown where she had some things to investigate.
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 11:55 am
Nice start. It has a lot of information in it that people can work off of with their characters. There is an explanation on what's going on and how life is. There is enough openings for people to get their words in and there is enough character being provided to work off of. What rp is this for?
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Queen_EnchantedLuck Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:27 pm
Queen_EnchantedLuck Nice start. It has a lot of information in it that people can work off of with their characters. There is an explanation on what's going on and how life is. There is enough openings for people to get their words in and there is enough character being provided to work off of. What rp is this for? It's a one on one super roleplay I'm doing with someone. Unfortunately I've pretty much sworn off of groups. Too many lousy experiences. Plus with my irregular schedule I can't always keep up so that makes it difficult for me to be a part of one in general. I'm glad you liked it! :3
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:34 pm
Night Kunoichi Queen_EnchantedLuck Nice start. It has a lot of information in it that people can work off of with their characters. There is an explanation on what's going on and how life is. There is enough openings for people to get their words in and there is enough character being provided to work off of. What rp is this for? It's a one on one super roleplay I'm doing with someone. Unfortunately I've pretty much sworn off of groups. Too many lousy experiences. Plus with my irregular schedule I can't always keep up so that makes it difficult for me to be a part of one in general. I'm glad you liked it! :3
Awe. I'm sorry for your lousy experiences. I run group rps so it saddens me to see someone who has had a terrible experience. D: I'm finding out about that kind of thing though. I tried two walk in rps and its been 48 hours and I've still have yet to rp with someone. I eventually tried another one and bam, instant talking to someone. biggrin Thank goodness. No one wants to wait 2-3 days to talk to someone. I'm thinking of just quitting the original two.
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Queen_EnchantedLuck Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:40 pm
Queen_EnchantedLuck Night Kunoichi Queen_EnchantedLuck Nice start. It has a lot of information in it that people can work off of with their characters. There is an explanation on what's going on and how life is. There is enough openings for people to get their words in and there is enough character being provided to work off of. What rp is this for? It's a one on one super roleplay I'm doing with someone. Unfortunately I've pretty much sworn off of groups. Too many lousy experiences. Plus with my irregular schedule I can't always keep up so that makes it difficult for me to be a part of one in general. I'm glad you liked it! :3
Awe. I'm sorry for your lousy experiences. I run group rps so it saddens me to see someone who has had a terrible experience. D: I'm finding out about that kind of thing though. I tried two walk in rps and its been 48 hours and I've still have yet to rp with someone. I eventually tried another one and bam, instant talking to someone. biggrin Thank goodness. No one wants to wait 2-3 days to talk to someone. I'm thinking of just quitting the original two. Those sound like dreams in comparison, honestly. The experiences I had weren't with activity. They were very active (But that was back in a time I had the free time to keep up). The problems were people creating over powered characters, always being able to get the best of mine no matter what, poor literacy even when it was supposed to be a roleplay thread for literates and people who acted childishly in edition to potentially ignoring my characters if I didn't acknowledge how awesome theirs were. This was on multiple accounts. So now I'm out of them. D:
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 2:13 pm
Night Kunoichi Queen_EnchantedLuck Night Kunoichi Queen_EnchantedLuck Nice start. It has a lot of information in it that people can work off of with their characters. There is an explanation on what's going on and how life is. There is enough openings for people to get their words in and there is enough character being provided to work off of. What rp is this for? It's a one on one super roleplay I'm doing with someone. Unfortunately I've pretty much sworn off of groups. Too many lousy experiences. Plus with my irregular schedule I can't always keep up so that makes it difficult for me to be a part of one in general. I'm glad you liked it! :3
Awe. I'm sorry for your lousy experiences. I run group rps so it saddens me to see someone who has had a terrible experience. D: I'm finding out about that kind of thing though. I tried two walk in rps and its been 48 hours and I've still have yet to rp with someone. I eventually tried another one and bam, instant talking to someone. biggrin Thank goodness. No one wants to wait 2-3 days to talk to someone. I'm thinking of just quitting the original two. Those sound like dreams in comparison, honestly. The experiences I had weren't with activity. They were very active (But that was back in a time I had the free time to keep up). The problems were people creating over powered characters, always being able to get the best of mine no matter what, poor literacy even when it was supposed to be a roleplay thread for literates and people who acted childishly in edition to potentially ignoring my characters if I didn't acknowledge how awesome theirs were. This was on multiple accounts. So now I'm out of them. D:
Yeah I see that. I actually have situations were there is a fight going on and of course my character has a sniper, but she isn't firing it because she is seriously effected by the oils that were dropped. But there is an angel that all of a sudden turns healer. She walks in the middle of a fight between a Dragon and a Griffin. And because people don't want to God mod, they can't kill her. I started putting in an attack ability with dice similar to D&D in my roleplays because to be honest, they are up against a Dragon and a Griffin. She would've died healer or not. DX
Also it doesn't help that people will literally cry and scold you for posting a certain way. It is getting stupid. They don't want to include people, they want to restrict the way people post. Or make themselves gods, But they need more people and are always accepting, wondering why no one is joining. DX The lack of ability for being creative is absolutely foolish. I find, unless you are friends with the creator, you are normally ignored or unwelcome.
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Queen_EnchantedLuck Captain
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