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Indian828

PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:10 pm


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(Circus image)
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Name: Landon Russel

Nickname: L (Optional)

Occupation/Role in the Circus: Puppeteer (Acrobat, Stagehand, Ring leader, Concessionaire, etc.)

Age:

Species: Illusionist (can make people see, taste,smell, feel things that aren't there and can control minds. (Demon, Vampire, Human, Angel, Neko, etc.)

Sexuality:Hetero

Date of Birth:Nov 3

Height/Weight:6"1 and 155 pounds (Keep it realistic. Don't make a 5'10" person be 100 lbs. That means that they're scarily anorexic and that's not something I want to promote, even if it's just a character)

Gender:Male

Personality:Quiet, flirtatious, funny, smart, dangerous, hardheaded.

Likes/Dislikes:Music, people, large areas.

Biography:Landons family found out about his powers at the age of 6. He was sent away to a foster home. But not being adopted he ran away at the age of 17. He found this place and is trying to find a happily ever after if you will. But not so much luck so far. AT LEAST FIVE SENTENCES.

Talents/Abilities:Agility, people skills, speed, strength, can control mind (a limited amount of time), and can make people see, taste, smell, and feel things that aren't actually there. (This can be anything from being a really good at something to actual powers like flying)

Other: (Optional)

You bet your petunias!
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 9:19 pm


Well he looks pretty awesome! But there are a few things I'm going to have to ask you to fix for the sake of clarity and avoiding any possible godmodding.

1) You need to go back and read the rules. There's something you're missing on the profile.
2) "Can control minds"? It does not say that in his list of abilities. Could you please put some sort of limitation and weakness to this abilitity? It's just a tad bit OP. And make sure you're listing all of your abilities in the abilities and talents section.

Thank you. smile

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Indian828

PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 6:30 am


Nerdy Oatmeal
Ok i'm sorry I fixed it.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 6:41 am


lightshadow997

Don't worry about it. smile But you're still missing the thing from the rules! (I'd tell you what it is but that sort of destroys the point of making sure your read them) there's something from the rules that says to 'put this in your profile'.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 7:43 am


lightshadow997

Okay, now he's approved! smile
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