Hey guys ! Well I am doing something new and I am in need of a Opinion.

This summer I challenged myself and I am doing a Sailor Moon Challenge until Now to end of August 31. I am going to attempt to make all 88 Constellations in our galaxy a Sailor Senshi as well as some former Constellations that are deemed non Constellations ( I may make this a story) if you don't know what the former constellations are here is a link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Former_constellations

Anyhow I post my first profile and picture of my first Sailor Senshi for my challenge
Sailor Delphinus or the Dolphin Senshi. I want a opinion on her so I know what I need to do for the next few Sailor Senshi. One thing I know I need to work on is my grammar and punctuation. I also tend to repeat things only in different wording .

Here is the link to my first Profile for my challenge .
http://thesilentdreamer26.deviantart.com/art/Sailor-Delphinus-Profile-458237629

If one of you would be so kind as to read this over and give me a review on her I would be so appreciative.