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Spiritfir

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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2014 1:12 pm


This is a random poem that I wrote when a friend chose someone else over me for a little while...
Also, I would love some feedback! ^_^


Wolf Song

It waits in the cold,
Quiet and still,
Elegant and beautiful,
As it stares from its hill.

Snow falls lightly,
Floating about its burning gaze,
Yet its bright amber eyes,
Are filled with haze.

It longs for its pack,
As it sits all alone,
Watching and waiting,
For its friends to come home.  
PostPosted: Sun May 18, 2014 11:55 pm


i like it ^_^

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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2014 3:19 pm


Clockwork_Vixen
i like it ^_^

Thx, I appreciate it! ~(^o^)~
Is there anything you think I can work on?
PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2014 3:42 pm


Spiritfir


i was curious because of the title so i had a gander, then i had the idea to actually try sing your poem while playing my guitar turned out well xd so nice poem smile

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