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Reclusive Incarnation . Chapter 3 is now up =^-^=

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Chris Kitmyth
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:22 am


STOP!!!



The following off site link contains content that some viewers may find offensive.


Do NOT proceed without reading the following information below...




No really....DON'T!




The following novel known as Reclusive Incarnation is my own original novel which I have begun to write as the official stories of my fursona Cj Kitmyth.

Now I have wrote stories before but I have now deemed them as unofficial stories. These new stories beginning with Reclusive Incarnation detail the life story of my one fox.

Reclusive Incarnation begins much like the Star Wars Trilogy did. Half way through the story. References will be given to events that happened in the past and until those stories are wrote, they're up to your speculation.

There is one thing to note about my fox; Cj Kitmyth. Cj Kitmyth is me and I am him. What he is, I am, his feelings I share. The only differences (sadly) you should know would be the physical ones.

Now this story I have rated as UK "18" and USA "R"

Reclusive Incarnation contains:
- Strong use of language throughout
- Strong violence including some gory moments
- Sexual themes and sexual innuendo


By viewing this novel you agree that you are okay to view this novel and that you do not condone the guild or the writer for posting this. I have been given permission to post this story on the guild.

Thank you.


Click Me to Read the Story!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 2:37 pm


well, i like the story. ^^

ChibiBecca
Crew


TilberiosVarkruun

PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:06 am


Aside from the odd spelling and grammar oversights here and there, it's good so far. I like how Cj's character development is coming along so far. Just be careful not to make him too angsty. wink But at the same time, don't be afraid to make him how you want him - he's your character and this is your story after all.

Anyway, like I said: so far overall, pretty good. I'm looking forward to seeing how this all pans out.

~SilverShadow.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 10:13 am


Thank you both for the replies.

Im going to be working on Reclusive Incarnation over the weekend and stories I've said I'll do as gifts in the week days.

I have a request though for my friends who are reading this story,

Can I ask you for some spelling and grammar help please? Somewhat of a proof read?

Chris Kitmyth
Crew


Warnersister
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:37 am


I can do a proof-read for you this weekend if you'd like. Next week I'm on holiday, so I'll have plenty of time to read it through. I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi though, so apologies if I sound like I'm nitpicking. That OK?

DW
PostPosted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 10:31 am


Thank you a lot, I really need all the help I can on spelling and grammar. My lack of variety in my sentances also irks me, because I repeat the same lines over and over, particually in explaining how people speak and or reply.

Thank you though, this weekend, chapter 3 will be wrote up

Again, thanks = 3

Chris Kitmyth
Crew


Crimson Darkwolfe

PostPosted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 8:46 pm


T'is coming along awsomely my friend=D I can't wait till the next installment, but suffice to say, I'm liking it so far. Though I already told you that ^^;

I'd offer to help with proof-reading and such, but my spelling and gramma a aweful anyway, I'm afflicted with ballistic commas ;P
PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 1:09 pm


*awaits next chapter with interest* Are you going to post here to notify us when it's updated? That'd be great smile

And I'm happy to continue to proofread for you if you'd like.

DW

Warnersister
Vice Captain


Chris Kitmyth
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 1:41 pm


Aye, when its updated I'll post an acknowledgement and advertise in the title of an update.

None yet though as I went to a wedding yesterday and was kinda out of it today....

too...much...martini
PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 1:04 pm


Chapter 3 is up

Let me know what you think

The story will warm up though, trust me

Chris Kitmyth
Crew

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