I'm newer to rapping and everything and I wanna know if i'm good so if anyone tryna give me feedback or criticism good or bad please do so.

I'm looking for emcees to wreck and disconnect there spinal cord from there neck,
Im new to this rap game s**t, but I spit, more than a retarded kid throwing fit. I'm full of more bars than the jail cell yards and harder than the hard I flood to the cities and boulevards.
Im more sadistic and drop more bombs than Suddam, ill slap your girl with my palm until her lipstick aint on.
Mess with me your left with blood leaking out your side and your brain on the outside, your mouth wide.
I'll flood your block with gunshots until your body drop, my heater is my gun and it still works the same even if it's sticky from the rum.
We both know you dont handle the heat, you'll be on opposite side snitching in the court seat.
You'd be afraid to even touch the glock even if mine was cocked and you was shaking like Michael J Fox
I'd hit you from a 20 block distance you'd have no time to be dipping, even though i'd rather be cooking rock in the crack pot at the crack spot




This was just a little bit barely nothing but i'll come back in this thread a little later and drop a lot more. I just started battle rapping kids in my school and I haven't taken a L yet so i'm tryna improve. Being one of the few white kids I feel I need to prove myself so I wanna be able to shut kids down so this is a little bit a practice. Anyone tryna battle or give me any tips or advice?