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little mintchan

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 12:30 pm


Luciano
Bubble Gum


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[ P e r s o n a l - D a t a ]

Full Name: Luciano Bayne


Famous Shinobi Name: Bubble Gum


Gender: Male


Age: 15


Birth Date: May 10th


Loyalty: Unknown


Goal: To become Fabulous (Until I find a better goal for him.)


Nindo: "Listen to the voices, they will set you free."


Homeland: Yukigakure


Current Residence: Kumogakure


Title: Genin

Clan: N/A

Kekkei Genkai: N/A

Personality/Mannerism: Quiet but when Voices speak, then he repeats. He has some manners until he speaks his mind...


Facial Features: He's cute like bubblegum. Baby face, pink hair with hazel eyes.


Physique: He's a twig.


Height: Short. 5"


Weight: Skinny. 134 lbs


Personal Skill: Talking to himself, dressing like a female.


Favorite Food/Drink: Icecream...and tea


Least Favorite Food: sweets ( especially bubble gum, because he believes he is eating himself )


Likes: Girls, puppies, fish, watching paint dry.


Dislikes: Rats. He'll piss himself if he goes near one.




[ C o m b a t - D a t a ]


Special Tactic/Skills: Use of Medical equipment in battle [ IE: Scaples ]


Battle Strength: Ninjustu, Medical


Battle Weakness: Taijustu


[ T e c h n i q u e - D a t a ]


Chakra Color: Sky blue

Elemental Alignments:

Raiton
Katon



Jutsu Knowledge:

Primary Type: Ninjustu / Medical


Secondary Type: Bukijustu / Summoning


Tertiary Type:


Total Jutsu Points: 25
Each Rank Has a Number Value. Add them all up (or a mod can).
E: 1 Point
D: 2 Points
C: 3 Points
B: 4 Points
A: 5 Points
S: 8 Points
SS: 12 Points

Ninjutsu: 5 points
• Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique ~ E Rank
Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

• Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique ~ E Rank
Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

• Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill ~ E Rank
Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

• Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing ~ E Rank
Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

• Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking ~ E Rank
A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Katon: 5 points
• Ichi [ One ]
Rank: E
Description: The basic building block of a great many techniques down the line, this is presumably the very same skill that began the study of Katons. Molding their Chakra through a simple seal of any choice, the user is able to focus it onto the tip of their index finger in the form of heat. With this, they can cut through things such as glass and rope with some difficulty. However, at this stage, control of one’s Chakra is so minimal that this technique can only be used by one finger and essentially has no combat use.

• Ni [ Two ]
Rank: D
Description: This technique makes it so that after a user has molded enough Chakra to gather heat into their finger they can now distribute it to both the index and middle finger (one hand), making it a somewhat viable option in combat now. However, jabs and strikes made through this method would simply burn through clothing and wouldn’t cause any substantial thereafter. In terms of raw searing strength, though, it allows the user to cut through even metallic string now.

• Bounetsu no Jutsu [ Flame-Resistance Technique ]
Rank: D
Description: This is a passive Jutsu that is the first in two steps to protect the user from damaging themselves with their very own techniques. Although not necessarily mandatory to learn the finer points of the tree, it does provide a buffer against self-inflicting injuries. For example the user is able to withstand increasing amounts of heat and can even withstand certain techniques aimed at them. Withstand, however, does not translate into invulnerability as there are general flaws to this Jutsu as well

• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Fire Release: Instant Movement Technique ]
Rank: D
Description: Nearly akin to the Maruton version of Shunshin, this version leaves a flame wake-trail behind the user while they travel.

Raiton: 7 point
• Teikou no Kuntou [ Electrical Resistance Training ]
Rank: E
Description: A passive skill that prevents the user from being harmed inadvertently from the creation of the Raiton Chakra used in his or her own techniques. A person who doesn't learn this skill will generally feel pain when performing their own Raiton techniques, whereas one who learns this ability tends to notice that minor shocks generally do not hurt them as badly.
• Dendou Karyou no Jutsu [ Electric Overdose Technique ]
Rank: C
Description: The user takes one post to channel a large amount of electricity into a limb, making the Chakra visible. Upon contact with the opponent, the electricity is shot into him or her and the target’s weight doubles, making it harder for the victim to move.
• Seishuu Sonshitsu no Jutsu [ Control Loss Technique ]
Rank: C
Description: After forming electricity into the dominant hand, the user delivers a palm strike to the target’s body. The voltage of this particular technique is high enough that the target loses control of the bowels and bladder, causing a rather distracting mess in the undergarments.



Kenjutsu:





Eiseijutsu: 5 points
• Shindan [ Diagnosis ]
Rank: E
Description: The first step in treatment is understanding the problem. With this skill a shinobi uses their hands to carefully probe a patient for problems. This technique is preformed by kneeling over a patient and slowly running both hands over their body, looking for signs of injury that may not be visible to the naked eye. It can detect things such as internal injury, improper heart rate, non-apparent bone fractures, poisoning, and disease. A ninja of higher rank has learned to use this technique to perform a rudimentary examination of a body to determine cause and time of death. A Genin using this skill takes several minutes of work to determine the nature of a problem, a Chuunin takes less than a minute and a Jounin requires only a few seconds.
• Kiyomaru [ Cleanse ]
Rank: E
Description: It is not always possible for a medical nin to practice basic hand washing and other procedures. This technique has the effect of instantly removing bacteria, dirt, blood, and other contaminants from the user’s hands, lower arms, and face. It also insures that any breath that comes from the user’s body will be free of any bacteria or infectious disease. This technique can also be used to clean the wounds of others in order to prevent infection from bacteria. In the event that the medical nin is using this technique to prevent infection of an injury that has been inflicted upon them, it is used in the same manner as if the shinobi were using it on somebody else.
• Shiatsu [ Massage ]
Rank: E
Description: For a variety of reasons, muscles, tendons, and ligaments can become overworked and painful. This may be because some type of injury occurred or it may simply be the result of too much work without enough rest. By applying the proper amount of pressure at the right pressure points, and using small amounts of chakra, a medical nin is able to relieve pain and help a patient's body recover more quickly. A strain or sprain can seriously hinder the effectiveness of a shinobi and as such this technique really can make a difference.
• Teikouryoku [Power of Resistance ]
Rank: E
Description: A medical nin must always be aware of becoming a victim of whatever their patient is suffering from. With this technique a medical shinobi temporarily increases their resistance to diseases and poisons. It has no effect on diseases or poisons already effecting the medical shinobi, however. This technique improves as the medical nin grows in power and affords greater resistance to a wider range of diseases and poisons.
• Tekishutsu [ Extraction ]
Rank: E
Description: When a patient's body has a foreign object in it, such as the point of a shuriken, a senbon needle, or an arrow, it is important to remove the object without further harming the patient. Using this technique the medical nin places their hands on either side of the injured area and uses chakra to very carefully manipulate the surrounding tissues in order to remove the object without causing any further damage. Depending on the severity of the wound and nature of the object, it can take anywhere from a few seconds to a few minutes to remove it.


[ E q u i p m e n t - D a t a ]

Headband Location: Upper Left Arm

Headband Style: Smaller size.

Clothing: Without sleeves and scarf

Cherished Items: His hair. Two daggers.



Special Weapons:

Shinobi Weapons: Dragon Mutilator / Info

Equipment: Normal Shinobi stuff.




[ H i s t o r i c a l - D a t a ]

Family Member(s): None


Friends: Soon.


Enemies: Soon.


Romantic relationships: Never.


Religious philosophy: Explain?


Political/social philosophy: He believes everyone is dumb in politics, social though, everyone is just something to look at and examine.


Background: Luciano was born in the harsh enviroment of Yukigakure, his parents were both clinically insane and traitors to nearly every village for murder. They both seemed to calm down once their only son was born, it didn't last long before they went back to their killing ways, Luciano watched his parents up to the age of five commit murder day after day until finally his parents met their match again a couple jounin and one kage who murdered them for revenge and finding the adorable little Luciano sitting by a tree with a stuffed pink bear. They older men could not stand seeing this child be so happy even though he saw murder and his parents dead, so they sent him to Kumogakure and to a foster home which he later killed on 'accident' for feeding him candy. He was born with bright pink hair but soft hazel eyes, he had lost his teddy bear since he was younger but he has a new love which is his special daggers.



Theme Song: Sugar Jesus | Get a hold of yourself
PostPosted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 1:51 pm


What exactly do you need help with on your profile? Also, I think if you're going to ask for help, you shouldn't put in your clan about comments for our forms, especially since applying for a clan takes no effort .-.

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little mintchan

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 2:00 pm


Anything that is blank I need help but what village is available?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 4:58 pm


Well, you can look under the Village Application Subforum and figure out what villages need members. As for what you need help with, the special tactics/skills category is what your character is really good at. For example, if your going to be a medical ninja, perhaps when using scalpels during combat you can strike more accurately at your opponents.

Your Jutsu knowledge isn't a proper mastery set-up, you can fix that easily by looking under the new members subforum and going to Jutsu Systems and Limitations. As for your Dragon Mutilator weapon, you should rank it if it's something special, along with explain what it does in detail.

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little mintchan

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:10 pm


Some Witty Name
Well, you can look under the Village Application Subforum and figure out what villages need members. As for what you need help with, the special tactics/skills category is what your character is really good at. For example, if your going to be a medical ninja, perhaps when using scalpels during combat you can strike more accurately at your opponents.

Your Jutsu knowledge isn't a proper mastery set-up, you can fix that easily by looking under the new members subforum and going to Jutsu Systems and Limitations. As for your Dragon Mutilator weapon, you should rank it if it's something special, along with explain what it does in detail.


I didn't get the mastery set up very well...
and is it ok if his blade stays the rank he is? Like right now he is genin so his blade's strength and stuff is genin until he ranks up then it becomes chunin with him?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:20 pm


little mintchan

It's basically our old mastery setup, so I don't know how you can't get it .-. There's just more options of what you can do...

No, you cannot have your blade increase in rank with you. You can blacksmith your blade to get it higher ranking though, so if it starts at C ranking, you can post the word count to get it to B ranking and upgrade it.

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little mintchan

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:27 pm


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little mintchan

It's basically our old mastery setup, so I don't know how you can't get it .-. There's just more options of what you can do...

No, you cannot have your blade increase in rank with you. You can blacksmith your blade to get it higher ranking though, so if it starts at C ranking, you can post the word count to get it to B ranking and upgrade it.


So can I put it at chunin rank and once I become chunin i can blacksmith that bad boy up to B ranked?
PostPosted: Thu Jun 20, 2013 11:03 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:31 pm


Profile not approved, most Elemental ninjutsu are at least C-ranked. And there is really no point to a fire version of Shunshin no Jutsu when the normal one is perfectly fine.

Also, your technique Dendou Karyou no Jutsu [ Electric Overdose Technique ] doesn't make sense. How can electricity double a person's weight?

As for your medical stuff, I dunno much about it, so another mod will have to look at it.

Sorry, but your techniques need to be redone.
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