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Marinka-ko-shikara

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PostPosted: Sat May 25, 2013 9:49 am


again, I know there are problems with this. I'm not too good on poems and such xD

Tonight I feel alive!
My heart's burning,
My eyes shine!
Will this last the night?

Tomorrow comes soon
I welcome the change
Tonight's the time, though
For fun and feeling free!

For now I'll accept this freedom,
And fly higher than ever before!
Tomorrow will have to wait
I'm ready to soar!
PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:03 am


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Great work! Not too good at poetrty myself but really good job! Hope to read more by you!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 11:11 am


thanks much biggrin
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