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PostPosted: Tue May 21, 2013 1:01 am


this is a poem that means a little to me, I know it's not perfect...




when I'm alone I hear things
voices in the night
teasing me from the dark
til morning's light.

When I'm alone I see things
shadows in the day
blurred forms in the night
my mind will stray

when I'm alone I feel things
like a crowd of shadows bumping me
I'm unable to breath
and it frightens me

when I'm alone I fear things
the things said
the things felt
the things seen.

when I'm alone
I need help
but I'm alone
there's no hope.
PostPosted: Tue May 21, 2013 10:58 am


It speaks to me of fearing something. Is that what you are trying to say through the poem?

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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2013 4:42 pm


pretty much. I fear being alone so bad i get panic attacks>>;
PostPosted: Sat May 25, 2013 5:18 am


Umm this poem is just ine that i made so i could finally post something so here goes.

You shine so bright that you could light up the sky
And Columbus with a compass would get lost in your eyes"
But her reaction was absurd
All she did was stare back without sayin' a single word
And gave him a weird look
She tried sayin' something with her hands but she couldn't
Cause she was carryin' books
But that was all that it took, Billy was too crushed
Had to run away so nobody would see the tears rush
And for the rest of the week, he locked himself in his apartment
Cause he didn't have the strength to face the world so broken-hearted
After seven days of darkness, got a letter in the mail
But before he even looked at it, he let that ship sail
He was too concerned with all the sadness in his life
So instead of a letter opener he grabbed a kitchen knife.

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PostPosted: Sat May 25, 2013 9:24 am


Bella_Karen_Winchester
Umm this poem is just ine that i made so i could finally post something so here goes.

You shine so bright that you could light up the sky
And Columbus with a compass would get lost in your eyes"
But her reaction was absurd
All she did was stare back without sayin' a single word
And gave him a weird look
She tried sayin' something with her hands but she couldn't
Cause she was carryin' books
But that was all that it took, Billy was too crushed
Had to run away so nobody would see the tears rush
And for the rest of the week, he locked himself in his apartment
Cause he didn't have the strength to face the world so broken-hearted
After seven days of darkness, got a letter in the mail
But before he even looked at it, he let that ship sail
He was too concerned with all the sadness in his life
So instead of a letter opener he grabbed a kitchen knife.


hun, you're supposed to make your own little topic when posting poems and such.
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