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 Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2004 2:48 pm
You're standing in the spotlight,
Stripped of your virginity
Everyone is watching
And you know they know
This is your first time
Your palms are sweating
Your hands are shaking
You feel like you can't go on
But the pleasure underneath it all
Makes everything worthwhile
People tell you stories of
Life on the other side
But you had to know it first hand
All you have to do is raise your voice
And soon you will be ready
To surrender to the spotlight
And you don a mask, a cool chararde
And everything changes
The way you speak and move
You're someone you've never been before in your life
Your voice will shake,
As the rush comes up
And you waver on the edge
And you ask yourself as you come down
"Could this be the end?"
There is more than just the first time
And even though you tried
You know you can do better now
Now that you've been on stage under the lights
Now that you've travelled to the other side
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Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2004 5:57 pm
That is a nice topic for a poem, but there were many typo's. Read through your poem and find the petty mistakes, touch it up a little, and you have yourself a nicely written poem! 3nodding
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