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PostPosted: Wed May 01, 2013 3:44 pm


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☽ Drake Ironsoul☾
ブラック·ムーン☽The Black Moon ☾ブラック·ムーン


Master of Darkness


Full name Drake Ironsoul

Nickname

Birthday December 16, 1997

Age 16

Gender Male

Sexuality Straight

Height 6ft 4in

Weight 164

Nationality Japanese American

Homeland New York City, New York, America

Accent American

Personality/Mannerism Calm but rages at time in battle

Personal Skill Drawing, and Fighting

Occupation DWMA Student

Rank

Star Two star

Family Members
Father (deceased)
Mother (deceased)
Sister (deceased)
Aunt (deceased)

Friends None so far

Enemies Anyone who stands in my way.

History/Background

As a young child Drake led a happy life until he was 10. His family loved him and they took care of him. His father was a stock broker and his mother was a nurse. They were happy until one faithful day his father came home from work scared for his life. He said that he had seen what looked like a witch. He said that the witch wanted to kill him because he saw what she was doing. Apparently she was taking the souls of human and trying to create a kishin. He tried best to hide his family but in the end his father could not protect his mother and sister. The witch left Drake alive so that he could get strong and come after her. She told hi that when he was strong enough she would feed his soul to the kishin she was trying to create. Drake vowed never to forget her. The witch then put a spell on him to make him go to sleep. The next day he awoke and found himself in his aunt's house. She took care of him and never spoke to him about his parents death. Drake took some martial arts classes. He mastered parkour, and became an expert in taijutsu and a practitioner of kickboxing. During the time when he was taking taijustsu. His aunt had a contact that she knew would help him to become stronger. Te teacher's name shall be left unmentioned but here is one thing that you should know. He help forge one of the greatest users of taijustu. He was the one who told Drake that if he wasnted to be stronger that he would have to wear the weights. For once Drake felt a sense of happiness bbut it wouldn't last for long.At the age of 16 another tragedy happened in his life. His aunt was killed by another witch. Right before she died she gave him the address to DWMA. He left that night and made a 5 days journey to DWMA. He arrived at the steps of the school and knew instantly that this was the right place for people like him.

Appearance See above

Partner

Soul Color Dark Purple

Clan

Meister Type He fights like a ninja using the fighting styles he learned.

Abilities

Ironsoul Taijutsu : Hanging Presence- Drake wears 100lbs weights on his legs. Whenever he takes them off his speed increases greatly giving the illusion of a lag since the eyes cannot keep up with his speed.

Ironsoul Destruction: Core Breach - This is Drakes own form of soul menace. Drake concentrates his soul into the palm of his hand. He then combines it with Hanging Presence and hits you wherever that is open.

Hobbies

Drawing
Fighting
Training

Flaws

His anger is hard to contain.
He over works himself and can cause himself injury.
Scums to madness quite easily.

Weaknesses

His left leg has an injury from fighting. The doctor did what they could but it isn't the same. A hard hit can cripple him or even kill him.

Madness

Likes

Moon
Wolfs
Fighting

Dislikes

Witches
Kishins
Evil People

Theme Song Cry

Interesting Facts/Trivia

Kind person on the inside but cloaks it with being an arse hole



Finished
PostPosted: Thu May 02, 2013 12:41 pm


Done with profile.

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PostPosted: Thu May 02, 2013 9:00 pm


Tatsuya Okami

Alrighty then... Out of what I can see there are just a few tidbits here and there that don't make sense. First off your character is only 16 and has already "mastered" 5 different martial arts along with being a veteran at Parkour? I'm sorry but that alone is just physically improbable, let alone being over 6ft? The point I'm getting at is to just tone down your character's specs to an appropriate lelvel. Another thing I saw is that if he were to be like a "ninja" he would have needed training in nintaijutsu since the profile states that he uses a 'ninja'-like fighting style yet nothing stated in the history of 'ninja' training.
Moving along the ability of dropping off 200lbs total from his legs would cause him to move hella' fast, but not so much that his image would just be left behind. If anything it would slightly lag behind him in perspective to an opponent since their eyes would have trouble seeing the image in real time in accordance to the movement. Other than that the rest of the profile seems fine, save a little tweaking to the history to make it a little more interesting.
If any other crew member sees something I missed feel free to jump on it :T
PostPosted: Thu May 09, 2013 2:13 pm


Xair The Spitfire


Ok I fixed everything else except for the height. I am 16 and I am 6 ft 4 in. , so i don't think there's anything wrong with being that tall.

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PostPosted: Sat May 11, 2013 2:57 pm


Tatsuya Okami

K then... I looked over everything so far and the only discrepancy I see right now i the taijutsu thing. If you did your research you should understand that there is a difference between taijutsu and nintaijutsu. Nintaijutsu is the official name to the teachings an technuiques actual ninjas used. Its full of dirty fighting techniques and deceptive fighting styles. Just fix that up and please try your best to clear up your character's backstory since things look a little rushed. Once you get that done your profile should be approvable.
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