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 Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:51 am
 Character's NameAkuto nakama What Type of Meister? Sword menace meister
NicknameWolf menace
BirthdayJune 19
Age15
GenderMale
SexualityHetero
Height6'1
Weight152
NationalityJapanese
HomelandJapan
AccentThe link will show you http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0UkQurA5gQ his voice
Personality/Mannerism .Akuto prefers to keep his distance from others, so he often comes across as aloof and elusive. He is relatively tactician with his only flaws is that he cannot stay still for long periods of time without moving around. As a fighter, Akuto is very unbiased when it comes to his enemies. He shows the same degree of ruthlessness to his opponent regardless of age or gender.He is able to carefully look past his feelings and see the real situation at hand no matter his emotions about the target or opponent. He does not want forgiveness for whom he kills but they haunt his actions. His natural battle instincts are finely tuned and when in battle his sadistic nature breaks through. He is extremely sadistic in battle and is protective of the ones he cherishes.
Personal SkillAkuto has a proficient fighting skill with hand to hand fighting and using a sword or a kusarigama. His skills using his soul menace needs practice but he is still good with it.
OccupationMeister
RankSword menace meister
Star1 star
Family MembersTwo older brothers Jaice and buster
FriendsNone yet
EnemiesKishins and people he hasn't killed in battle
History/BackgroundAkuto was born in a pool of blood. While giving birth his mother died so his father thought of giving him that meant curse but his mother's dying breath was his name "Akuto". To honor his mother last words his father stayed with that name though he hated Akuto greatly and blamed him for his wife's death. As the years went on he kept a fake smile towards akuto but hated him and loved him at the same time. His mother had been his fathers weapon partner and had risked her life for him and would comfort him. That drove them to get married and have him two older brothers, but akuto was different in his eyes. Akuto had killed his wife as a baby and was drenched in her own blood coming out. Ten years had passed and Akutos father just gave Akuto to his brothers when he was asleep and said "Take him to the DWMA." His brother Jaice was a bookworm but was more sinister and wanted to keep his family safe being the oldest out of the twins. He just would take time to kill any enemy he had if he was bored and scared Akuto a little while his twin and weapon Buster was more calm and concise where he would prefer to kill his enemy fast and eat their soul. He is somewhat impatient and protective of his brother Jaice and Akuto. He is a kusarigama and Jaice's partner and tries his best to keep him out of trouble at all times. Without question they took Akuto there and enrolled him at the DMWA. DWMA officials asked them why they were dirty and wanted to suddenly join the DWMA and Buster and Jaice just said that their parents were gone and they needed a place to live and harness their power. When Akuto woke up his brothers told him that his father was on a mission and had to leave. Akuto was sad at first trying to adjust to life at the DMWA but after awhile he grew accustomed to life at the school and now strides to be the best he could possibly be and to find his father.
Appearance
PartnerNone yet
Soul ColorCrimson and silver
ClanNone
Meister Type How you fight? Do you fight like a samurai or something?
With his hand to hand fighting he strikes fast and hard then he will go calculated and strikes with different attacks each time. His weapon skills are like a samurai but with some skills of a ninja in his strikes.
Abilities (What are the abilities of your Meister?)
1.Soul menace
2.Acceleration-Akuto's speed increases greatly for a short period of time.
3.Soul perception- limit on time is 4 meter radius. Can tell where the soul is, what shape it is, and its personality but looking at its personality is hard for him.
HobbiesTraining, Reading, Writing, or keeping the peace within the school
Flaws1. He isn't good at talking with others.
2.At the most he will go over board with his fighting and take it too dar and tire himself out.
3.He can't stay still too long
Weaknesses1.He isn't a quick thinker so in battle he is vulnerable to surprise attacks
2. He cannot fight long range battles
LikesSpicy food, Meat, His friends, wolves, fire, and flying
DislikesKishin,Sour food, his enemies.
Theme SongBirthday massacre by straight to video
Interesting Facts/TriviaHe sleeps with a sword like it's a teddy bear to keep him safe incase someone sneaks into his room.
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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 5:05 pm
"I'm late! I'm late!
For a very important date!"
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This is some corrections that needs to be made in your profile.
A somewhat lack of capitalization, please fix that, your bio of your character, who is "he", his father? If so, please change "he" to "father". Can we also have some background story of his parents, brothers, and what made his father hated/ loved him other than his wife's death.
Abilities, I'm a bit confuse on... what is his abilities called and how can he use it? Also, Soul Perception, put a range on how long he could sense a soul.
Make these corrections and quote me once you're done. If any crew member notice anything I miss in the profile, please do tell him.
°⋆°⋆°ɢяɛɛиɢʋммʏ10°⋆°⋆°
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*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*
"No time to say "Hello, Goodbye"!
I'm late, I'm late, I'm late!"
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Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 5:36 pm
GreenGummy10 "I'm late! I'm late!
For a very important date!"*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*
ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ
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Min- - - - - - - - - - - -●Max
This is some corrections that needs to be made in your profile.
A somewhat lack of capitalization, please fix that, your bio of your character, who is "he", his father? If so, please change "he" to "father". Can we also have some background story of his parents, brothers, and what made his father hated/ loved him other than his wife's death.
Abilities, I'm a bit confuse on... what is his abilities called and how can he use it? Also, Soul Perception, put a range on how long he could sense a soul.
Make these corrections and quote me once you're done. If any crew member notice anything I miss in the profile, please do tell him.°⋆°⋆°ɢяɛɛиɢʋммʏ10°⋆°⋆°ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ
*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*"No time to say "Hello, Goodbye"!
I'm late, I'm late, I'm late!" I have fixed what you've told me to fix
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Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 5:51 pm
"I'm late! I'm late!
For a very important date!"
*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*
ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ
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Please do not delete your post and requote me as I am already aware of that.. I can't simply approved of your profile when you quote me, due for me being quite busy in my life and school, do that again and I will ignore you..
Still a lack of capitalization in some of the words and names, so much sentences stating his father's hatred to him and back to back about his parents then to Akuto, please combine some sentences together as there are so many sentences that starts talking about his father's hatred then the next sentence about his father, back to back. Fix it!
Abilities. I said in my last post to put the range of his Soul Perception, not how many times he can use it in a post and cooldown. How long can he sense a soul?
Flaws. What do you mean he can't stay still too long?
Fix all these things that need to be corrected and do not.. and I mean do not delete your post and requote me, as I don't need notices of your profile already fix, one is enough for me. If I don't say anything, that means I'm busy..
°⋆°⋆°ɢяɛɛиɢʋммʏ10°⋆°⋆°
ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ
*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*
"No time to say "Hello, Goodbye"!
I'm late, I'm late, I'm late!"
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 5:55 pm
GreenGummy10 "I'm late! I'm late!
For a very important date!"*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*
ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ
♫ ♪ ♫ ♪♫ ♪ ♫ ♪♫ ♪
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Min- - - - - - - - - - - -●Max
Please do not delete your post and requote me as I am already aware of that.. I can't simply approved of your profile when you quote me, due for me being quite busy in my life and school, do that again and I will ignore you..
Still a lack of capitalization in some of the words and names, so much sentences stating his father's hatred to him and back to back about his parents then to Akuto, please combine some sentences together as there are so many sentences that starts talking about his father's hatred then the next sentence about his father, back to back. Fix it!
Abilities. I said in my last post to put the range of his Soul Perception, not how many times he can use it in a post and cooldown. How long can he sense a soul?
Flaws. What do you mean he can't stay still too long?
Fix all these things that need to be corrected and do not.. and I mean do not delete your post and requote me, as I don't need notices of your profile already fix, one is enough for me. If I don't say anything, that means I'm busy..°⋆°⋆°ɢяɛɛиɢʋммʏ10°⋆°⋆°ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ.∙: *∞* :∙.ღ
*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*∞:∙.ღ.∙:∞*"No time to say "Hello, Goodbye"!
I'm late, I'm late, I'm late!" Sorry it took so long but i've finished
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 5:30 am
Lemme just add that, while I have no impact on the decision making process, your main ability, "Soul Menace", as you call it, has absolutely no description.
This seems to be the centripetal point of your character, so I'd suggest you clear up on what that is, what it's functions are, etcetera. Also, your weakness to it is somewhat vague.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 7:57 am
The Stories Never Told Lemme just add that, while I have no impact on the decision making process, your main ability, "Soul Menace", as you call it, has absolutely no description. This seems to be the centripetal point of your character, so I'd suggest you clear up on what that is, what it's functions are, etcetera. Also, your weakness to it is somewhat vague. Uh soul menace is the technique blackstar and stien use to shoot their soul wavelength at a target like blackstars big wave or stiens soul force and thanks for your input ill work on it
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