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 Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 7:50 pm
இ The Basics____________________
Name : Asia
Nickname(s) : A.M.F.
Age : 21
Gender : Male
Sexual Orientation : Straight
Stage : (Witch, Blackheart, Dragon Knight, etc)
Faction : Rune Knight
Race : Human
Magic Theme : (Not applicable)
Abilities :
+ Extreme conditioning - A life of experimental training/conditioning has left Asia with a near impervious physical structure and fortitude.
+ Rehabilitation - Enhanced recovery time.
+ 'Kill Switch' - Psychological trigger caused by music played through his headphones.
Occupation : Vanguard
Battle Style:
+ Infighter - Extremely close-ranged combat. Bboy-styled mixed martial artist. The flow of battle determines the type of musical trigger.
Alchemy:
+ Forge - In order to create truly independent soldiers, they have been taught from an early age to create and maintain their equipment with the strongest and lightest of alloys. In-depth knowledge of high-heat smelting/smithing techniques.
Favored Weapon/Item: Gilgamesh [Gaunlets and Sabatons/Greaves infused with the element lightning]
Notable Skills: Asia uses Gilgamesh to infuse his entire body with lightning; enhancing his physical speed an reflexes and instantaneously tensing his muscles/body upon impact. He can use the lightning to cauterize all major wounds.
Quote: "No worries." Before initiating the 'Kill Switch'
இ Physical Description_____________
Eye Colour : Green with a white medical patch over the left eye
Hair Colour : Black
Hair Length and Style : Silken and straight, a little below the ears and easily covers the eyes.
Skin Tone : Tan
Body Build : Lean and muscular. An upside-down pyramid from the waist. 5'6"
Fashion : Similar to Cloud's in 'Advent Children.' Eye bandage like Agito in 'Air Gear.'
Extra : A family crest on the right shoulder and an 8-rayed star(shield) on the left shoulder. Always has a pair of headphones on. (DJ Studio Headphones style)
Personality : Secretive and misleading. Happiness can be deceptive. Soft-spoken.
Strengths : Acts as a shield. [Endurance,Stamina]
Weaknesses : Acts as a shield. [Stubborn]
Talents/Hobbies : Breaker.
References Images : (Optional)
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:01 pm
History: During the war there have been stories of other such units, but all knowledge of them were lost. Asia is the last A.M.F. Plots: He will die.
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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:07 pm
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Hiyo~ So, some critique! Your fella should still have abilities they can do, and you should elaborate more on their type of alchemy. I'm not really sure what you mean at all when you say "infighter "killswitch". You should say something about how they fight, or what they use. Like... "Uses a giant alchemical hammer that can cause dimensional rifts when hit against things!" or something, you know, something to get us to really understand how this character would "be" with their skills. c:
As for the history part: You should explain how this organization in your character's past fits into the world and storyline. At the moment, the only human soldiers /knights are the Rune Knights, so if possible, it'd probably be better to try to work it into something that they are. c: (they are kind of notorious for being powerhungry and doing some nefarious deeds)
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 7:42 pm
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Approved with the changes~
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