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Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 9:09 pm
Groganofthewasteland I'm sorry but I am going to have to deny your application for Jounin or Chunin. Your post was a big wall of text with many grammatical and spelling errors. You should of separated your post into separate paragraphs so people can follow along with ease. As it is right now, I'm not sure if the students I would of given you would be able to follow what you are saying. Nice try, but I would suggest being a genin for a little while before you try again. The idea was to be telling a story(can be confusing in Rp) but I do understand, I put more effort in the story itself than the sample as a whole. I will take your suggestion and fettle around as a genin for a while before I try again. Hopefully next time ill put less effort in the story and more to the sample. Lol.
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Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 5:49 pm
Username:Ib Goblin Tactician Are you ready?: ie ie captain ! Are you sure?:ie ie captain! Let's go then! OHhhh~ who lives in a pine apple under the ... wait.. sorry. xD What Rank are you applying for?: Chuunin/Jounin What do you believe personally is the role of a Shinobi of your desired Rank? Jounin: Using my super mega awesome creativity gushing rain-boom smash!! I will take the roll to be a Jounin ninja in the snow village . While I am a jounin in the snow village it would be my job to guard the village with ones life, training the genin and chunin to there fullest, and help the kage when it is needed or requested.
RP Sample: Chuunin = Minimum of 500 words Jounin = Minimum of 750 words
If you are applying for Jounin, can you be active enough to benefit your squad? Now that my job is smoothing sailing I will be able to be online if the activity follows it. This would be my second profile and that means there will be plenty opportunity to stay active. :3
If you are applying for Jounin, how will you get the best from your squad and how will you train them? I will be like Ash;the best there ever was. Lawl well I plan on training my students using a older man profile in the ages of 60+. Using a Back ground in summons I will be able to teach the students skills and battle training to allow them to grow to be something great. __________________________________________________________ Role-playing sample : Scenario/environment/setting. Within a snow covered forest in the season of winter sits a elderly man who looks to be meditating on a cut tree stump. The mans eyes are close and he continues to be as still as the tree that once occupied the stump where he sits. Soundless and still but the air feels as if one is watching uninvited, a rouge ninja who is known for robbing travelers.
Up top a large tree stump sits a elderly man in his 70s dressed in a white coat with a soft sea blue underclothing. With in his untouched surrounding the very faint sound of snow crushing made his gray fuzzy brow to twitch as he nodiced it. The elderly man eye brows raised to reveal a pair of soft brown eyes that shifted to the direction of the sound. Kiko watched the area in that direction as he tried to spot the reason for the sound. From behind like a flash a man in his 20`s swooped in silently and swiftly as to make a assassination attempt of the elderly man Once the strike looked to hit a puff f smoke and revealed a log. The unknown man yelled out to himself as his blade hit the log" s**t ! " The younger man jumped a good ways away and took a defensive stance as he scanned the area for the old man.
The elderly man walked out from behind a tree that was located behind the assassin and coughed to get the mans attention. The sound of the cough caused the man to jump and turn around with a look of shock on his face. " That was a good attempt , but you made it to obvious and to predictable" Kiko said with a scratchy voice as he watched the man carefully. The assassin spoke back to kiko with a aggressive tone in his voice." Give me your money and all your valuable old man, or die !" Kiko smiled slightly and responded to the mans threat with a calm tone. " I would rather not, but It would be interesting on how you try to kill me." The comment was a honest one but was oh most like he was 'egging'(get it Easter xD) him on. A failure to assassinate him and with such bold words only questioned if this man is some one to worry about or a simple mugger.
The assassin gritted his teeth and charged in at great speed to slash at him with his dull colored katana , yelling to the old man." Then watch me !" Before the assassin closed a good distance kiko rises his left arm and opened his palm in the direction of the attacker and said." summoning jutsu- Strife !" with a summoning marking that seemed to form on the falling snow appeared and with a large burst of smoke out ran a a big bear covered in armor and razed claws. The bear was named strife a summon of the older man that he has used for 30 years, so there connection was a strong one. " Rawr!!" yelled strife as he charged at the assassin ready for blood. The assassin eyes grew wide as in a second a war ready bear appeared from smoke and was heading for him, the assassin quickly took footing on the ground and darted to the right as he evaded the razer like claws that swung at him. While evading he tossed kunai at the elderly man. Kiko saw the kunai coming so he just took a skip back to evade them and watched his bear summon/friend relentlessly charge the assassin. Attempt after attempt the assassin tried to attack the elderly man while evading the berserk bear and each time kiko evaded the attack with out problems that would normally make it self apparent for his age. Kiko spoke out the man after at least a dozen attempt and he said." Your not going to hit a wale in a ocean if you keep trying the same kind of attacks. why not come closer and try your luck? or is my friend keeping you busy?" Kiko was mocking the assassin like he normally did when training his students back in the day. It was fun to watch but it gave him some insight on what changes or skills needed work when it comes to students, but for opponents it was for the humiliation and to trick them to come close where kiko calls ' the danger zone'(hahah). After a good while of living on the fine line the assassin started to struggle to keep safe from strife and his attacks plus trying to attack kiko was ever getting harder, soon enough he yelled out to the old man before he retreated and no longer test his own luck . " You will not be so lucky next time old man ! I will get you some day when you last expect it !"
Kiko payed no mind to the assassin`s words and watched him run away, he then turned his attention to his friend/summon strife and said to him. " are you ok my old friend ? " Strife only grunted to signal that all was well. Kiko nodded back and smiled as he released him thus sending him back to the summon world where he came from. " I should return to the village as soon as I can, the kage could need some help with things. plus I need to report this event." Kiko said to himself as he made his way through the snow covered forest leaving foot steps behind him as he made his way back to the village hidden in the snow.
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Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 7:17 pm
Username: Blueberry Blossoms Are you ready?: I was born ready. Are you sure?: Sure as sugar! Let's go then! Let's! What Rank are you applying for?: Chuunin/Jounin What do you believe personally is the role of a Shinobi of your desired Rank? Jounin are the structure of younger ninja. They teach the lessons that are vital to the little ones in training. These lessons usually consist of experience-type activities and lectures. Jounin can serve as guardians and as friends. Of course, the learning comes first, but the genin can certainly have fun while growing!
RP Sample: The sun was shining directly in the middle of the sky and the birds were chirping with glee. Beneath the blue sky lay a single dirt road, and on either side, a forest was bustling with little critters. It was quite the peaceful day, until Squad Two of Yukigakure Village arrived at the scene. A man with black hair was walking in front of three children with his hands in his pocket and a cigarette hanging loosely from his lips. There were two girls and a single boy in his squad, so the Jounin was having a hard time keeping the girls in check. The two girls were bickering over who would get the first shower when they made it back to their village, while the boy was yelling at them to stop freaking out over such a stupid thing. Zael, the Jounin leader, was finding it increasingly difficult to keep his squad in order, and with the sun beating down on the four of them, attitudes were only getting worse.
“Would you guys shut the hell up?!” The words flew out of Zael’s mouth faster than he could catch them, as did a flock of birds hiding in the trees. He regretted it immediately after he yelled it; he didn’t mean to sound so pissed off, despite the fact that he was. A red vein was viciously pulsing on his forehead and he nearly bit his cigarette in half. The children stopped fighting almost instantaneously, staring at their Sensei with wide, surprised eyes. Zael was just as surprised. He didn’t expect his squad to stop just because he asked them to. They were the type of kids that only enjoyed rebelling. Zael turned back around and continued walking, a sense of pride slowly etching its way into his mind. Perhaps that was the way with dealing with his squad; yelling.
”You’re so mean, Sensei!” A cry burst from the silent squad. Zael froze mid-step and found his skin turned blue on the harsh words. The words echoed in his mind for what felt like minutes on end. The hesitant Jounin pivoted to see the girl with pink hair covering her face. It came to Zael that she was hiding tears.
The boy in the squad patted her back and comforted her, ”There, there.” Then the boy sent a menacing glare towards Zael and the Jounin’s frozen body cracked a bit near his forehead. The quieter girl with green hair crossed her arms and let out a haughty huff. ”Wow. Making a girl cry. You should feel bad.” The once small crack split down Zael’s body and sliced it clean in half. His squad hated him. What a great way to finish a mission. Zael let out a heavy sigh as the color returned to his body. He returned to his cool demeanor and found that it was easier to cope with the fact that kids loathed him if he just didn’t care. Zael angrily threw his cigarette on the ground and stomped on it.
”We’re almost back,” Zael informed in a low tone of voice. ”Finish crying when-!”
In a single moment, a lot happened. Zael’s eyes were fast, but the figure that appeared was much faster. The silhouette, in an instant, had appeared from the trees and taken the crying girl hostage nearly ten meters away. The figure was garbed in a cliché ninja outfit; all black, from head to toe, excluding the eyes. However, this man had a small dagger in his hand and the tip of it was touching the girl’s throat. The remaining squad members were much too surprised to get to a fighting position. Surprised might’ve been the right word, but another word would be frightened. Zael noticed how his remaining two squad members were shaking, but determined. Zael was a harsh teacher; making them run laps, lecturing them about important things and then quizzing them immediately, fighting even himself, but it was all for moments like these. You don’t expect everything that happens in life. What you can expect is the unexpected.
“Don’t falter!” Zael’s words were so loud, they even made the enemy jump. Zael expressed something close to a determined look on his face, but something much darker was lurking behind his gleaming eyes. He was teaching these kids how to kill. In order to teach to kill, you must be a killer yourself. His squad, even the crying girl, stopped shaking. The two who were free retrieved kunai from their satchels and stood in a fighting stance, looking nervous, but prepared. Zael’s words were like ice, piercing and cold, ”Someone you care about may be killed! Shinobi cannot hesitate on the battlefield! One hesitation can end a life! Do you understand?!”
“Yes, Sensei!” Both squadmates yelled in unison. It was quite obvious they had learned an important lesson during training. They were the marble that Zael had etched the Words of Knowledge into. There was a brief silence when Zael thought he should intervene, but he got a look on his squad’s faces; prepared, determined, courageous… There was no way in hell he would get in their way. They wanted to save someone close to them and Zael knew they could do it.
A smirk rose on Zael’s face, a prideful smirk, and with that smirk, he yelled, ”Go!”
Jounin = Minimum of 750 words Word Count = 889 words
If you are applying for Jounin, can you be active enough to benefit your squad? I am that person that is constantly active. I'll need to go to school, but normally, I am very active. I can probably be online for more than enough time to teach the young’uns.
If you are applying for Jounin, how will you get the best from your squad and how will you train them? Good question! My roleplaying character is quite the... character. He is strict, harsh, and cruel, but his lessons will never cease to teach his squad. He will create a series of relay races in order to improve teamwork and individual activites to increase the squad's seperated skills. Despite common knowledge, being on my character's squad would not be so... un-fun. He's a funny guy, who normally plays the straight man, but can be silly when the time calls for it. Three genin could certainly get a lot out of this Jounin.
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Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 11:04 pm
Your sample was good and went beyond the required limits. It was also well made and very fun to read. I am going to award you the second Jounin Spot Blueberry. I'm sure your regular posts will be as well made as this one. I like your sample too, but the simple thing was you missed a couple things on the profile talking about how you would teach the Genins and how active you will be. Now I don't doubt your activity, but I have few Jounin spots to award and unfortunately, you didn't get it.
However, I will allow you the option to make a Chunin. Even have him assigned to Ruri'iro as a secretary/bodyguard, if you are willing to accept,
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Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 3:17 am
Thank you so much! I'll be done with my profile later today! But before I start, does my character have to have Snow jutsu as his main jutsu style? I know he lives in Yukigakure, but snow just doesn't seem to fit him.
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Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:36 am
Well s**t Blue beat me to the punch, but all is well and no hard feelings. I will happily accept Chunin rank and your offer to be a secretary/bodyguard. It will be fun working with you. :3
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Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:07 am
Blueberry Blossoms Thank you so much! I'll be done with my profile later today! But before I start, does my character have to have Snow jutsu as his main jutsu style? I know he lives in Yukigakure, but snow just doesn't seem to fit him. No, any Jutsu will do
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Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2013 9:27 pm
Username: Midnight_Euphomy Are you ready?: Yes Are you sure?: Yeah, I'm pretty sure. Let's go then! ok. What Rank are you applying for?: Genin What do you believe personally is the role of a Shinobi of your desired Rank? As a Genin, it's my job to learn from my sensei, and further my knowledge. It is my goal to keep training and better myself not for my needs or wants, but for my team. And to attempt to get the jutsu correct when I use it.
RP Sample:
Another day passed by with Dusk just sitting around thinking. He enjoyed his quiet time when he wasn't training. It was as if for that split moment he could forget the past. "You'd forget me Dusk?"
Dusk shot up from his relaxed position, it seemed as if the very thing he was trying to push back had jumped to the very front of his mind. Looks like it was time to go back to training. He got up and jumped down from his perch high above the tree line and breathed deep as the snow accepted him. He smiled before thinking to himself, 'Well, it's time to go back to work I suppose.'
While Dusk isn't quite a normal name for somebody neither is Twilight as a family name. So here he was, this strange boy, Dusk Twilight practicing everyday to try and learn the ways of changing his chakra nature so he could use new jutsu. He tried so hard for this so that way he could stand out and help his friends instead of messing up and letting them down like every other time. He sighed as he sat down and began to take his shirt off. He remembered the things his sister had told him before she had disappeared on him. He thought hard about it and her voice came to his mind.
"Dusk, to learn any strong jutsu you must have first a strong will, after that you must find where your natural nature resides. Our family is naturally skilled in water jutsu, however we've slowly started to merge it with wind chakra and get the very feeble Ice jutsu that we have. To master Ice, you must learn water and wind, to understand them. Feel the water against your skin and the wind blowing through your hair. This was Dawn, his elder sister's, voice. She was the smart one that could learn jutsu like nothing, however she wasn't too strong physically. That was Noon, the middle sibling's forte.
Remembering this, Dusk sat shirtless in the snow trying to feel the wind that came by, to become one with the element he was trying to call forth. He focused hard, intently, on the change, of the sharpness of wind, and the fluidity of water, trying his best to put them together. Finally he clapped his hands together and performed the hand seals his sister had taught him, shouted "Ice Pillar Jutsu!" and felt a lot of his chakra leave him. He opened his eyes to see what he had mustered and sighed even deeper than earlier. "Seriously, only a foot tall? What's this pillar going to do, trip me?"
"Wow Dusk, that's pathetic. You're like the worst at multi-element jutsu out there aren't you?" A voice came from behind him, Dusk turned to see his friend Luna Gravesin standing there trying her hardest not to laugh.
"Shut up...." Dusk said embarrassed. He hung his head in shame and plopped back down in the snow.
"Hahaha, well you might want to get up and put your shirt on, we're going to be late." Luna said and tossed him his shirt.
"Late? Late for what?" Dusk asked shoving his head into the shirt and following after her. "Hey! wait up!"
If you are applying for Jounin, can you be active enough to benefit your squad? Activity. well, I'll be on as much as possible but seeing as I have a job in the military that restricts how much free time i get I cant guarentee much. As such, I've applied for a Genin rank.
If you are applying for Jounin, how will you get the best from your squad and how will you train them? Start with the basics and move up, starting with a strong foundation is the key to success.
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Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:29 pm
Midnight_Euphomy Username: Midnight_Euphomy Are you ready?: Yes Are you sure?: Yeah, I'm pretty sure. Let's go then! ok. What Rank are you applying for?: Genin What do you believe personally is the role of a Shinobi of your desired Rank? As a Genin, it's my job to learn from my sensei, and further my knowledge. It is my goal to keep training and better myself not for my needs or wants, but for my team. And to attempt to get the jutsu correct when I use it.
RP Sample:
Another day passed by with Dusk just sitting around thinking. He enjoyed his quiet time when he wasn't training. It was as if for that split moment he could forget the past. "You'd forget me Dusk?"
Dusk shot up from his relaxed position, it seemed as if the very thing he was trying to push back had jumped to the very front of his mind. Looks like it was time to go back to training. He got up and jumped down from his perch high above the tree line and breathed deep as the snow accepted him. He smiled before thinking to himself, 'Well, it's time to go back to work I suppose.'
While Dusk isn't quite a normal name for somebody neither is Twilight as a family name. So here he was, this strange boy, Dusk Twilight practicing everyday to try and learn the ways of changing his chakra nature so he could use new jutsu. He tried so hard for this so that way he could stand out and help his friends instead of messing up and letting them down like every other time. He sighed as he sat down and began to take his shirt off. He remembered the things his sister had told him before she had disappeared on him. He thought hard about it and her voice came to his mind.
"Dusk, to learn any strong jutsu you must have first a strong will, after that you must find where your natural nature resides. Our family is naturally skilled in water jutsu, however we've slowly started to merge it with wind chakra and get the very feeble Ice jutsu that we have. To master Ice, you must learn water and wind, to understand them. Feel the water against your skin and the wind blowing through your hair. This was Dawn, his elder sister's, voice. She was the smart one that could learn jutsu like nothing, however she wasn't too strong physically. That was Noon, the middle sibling's forte.
Remembering this, Dusk sat shirtless in the snow trying to feel the wind that came by, to become one with the element he was trying to call forth. He focused hard, intently, on the change, of the sharpness of wind, and the fluidity of water, trying his best to put them together. Finally he clapped his hands together and performed the hand seals his sister had taught him, shouted "Ice Pillar Jutsu!" and felt a lot of his chakra leave him. He opened his eyes to see what he had mustered and sighed even deeper than earlier. "Seriously, only a foot tall? What's this pillar going to do, trip me?"
"Wow Dusk, that's pathetic. You're like the worst at multi-element jutsu out there aren't you?" A voice came from behind him, Dusk turned to see his friend Luna Gravesin standing there trying her hardest not to laugh.
"Shut up...." Dusk said embarrassed. He hung his head in shame and plopped back down in the snow.
"Hahaha, well you might want to get up and put your shirt on, we're going to be late." Luna said and tossed him his shirt.
"Late? Late for what?" Dusk asked shoving his head into the shirt and following after her. "Hey! wait up!"
If you are applying for Jounin, can you be active enough to benefit your squad? Activity. well, I'll be on as much as possible but seeing as I have a job in the military that restricts how much free time i get I cant guarentee much. As such, I've applied for a Genin rank.
If you are applying for Jounin, how will you get the best from your squad and how will you train them? Start with the basics and move up, starting with a strong foundation is the key to success. You don't have to submit an RP sample for a Genin ranked shinobi
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Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2013 9:45 am
Groganofthewasteland You don't have to submit an RP sample for a Genin ranked shinobi I know, i just chose to smile
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