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Ikoi Hanakari

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 8:35 pm


When the sun is low
people beg to know
that I am there, that someone cares
When the sun lights the sky
I'm left high and dry
without so much as a whispered goodbye
alone, isolated, abandoned, dead
A fraction of the thoughts swirling through my head
always reaching out, even with eyes full of doubt
now as I lay down to and go to bed
I realize no one cares unless you're pretty or dead
The sun is low, the sun is gone
I need to leave, I need to move on

-Ikoi Hanakari
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 8:43 am


It's sad but I can understand the kind of thoughts that it's expressing. I think everyone feels this way at some point or another.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:43 pm


Quite sad. I enjoyed reading it and would like to read more.
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