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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 7:27 am


Scarlet ribbons wept from her wrist with each beat of her heart. Puffs of red faded into the water, slowly turning the pure thoughts to sinful acts.Her breath slowed with every drop that faded into oblivion. A smile blossomed as all her pain, fears, and sadness melted from her body. Her mind faded into darkness as her eyes shut one last time. The razor clinked against the tile, blood sprinkled the floor and tub as the blade struck. Her chest fell still.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 2:16 am


Oh that is beautiful. I love your diction, quite vivid. Stunning. Just stunning! heart

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