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13snowleopard13

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:00 pm


I was dead
You came to me
Now I live
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 8:52 am


Well it gets the point across but it's so short I don't know what to say. Ever thought of doing haiku? I think for haiku it's like 5,7,5 syllables isn't it? I don't write them much but if you like writing poems that are short, sweet, and to the point, you should give it a try.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 12:17 am


I actually reeaally love the shortness of this poem. It shows how simple but desperate this aspect of love is ~ or maybe I'm reading a bit too much into this whee
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:34 pm


I am thinking minimalism right now. It gets the message across plain and simple but maybe it could be a little longer?

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