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Personal
Name: kim evergrow
Alias: white rose
Nick Names: rose
Universe: (dc)
Alliance: (hero)
Age: 17
Height: 5'4
Weight: 125
Physical Characteristics: she has light brown hair and light blue eyes
Personality: she is fun loving caring and love to be around people
Likes:pizza, guys, her bestfriend, nice people, nut
Dislikes: mean people losing her friends
Fears: losing her sister, human will ruin the earth
Bio: Kim is from the year 2033. she has a sister named____________ when they were about 10 years old they found out the had power. but the were opposite to each other. Kim told her sister that they should not tell their parents so they did not. but when the parents found out they throw them out and they went to find a home that when the justice league found them . for 7 years the justice league train them to use there powers.

Powers/Abilities
Powers: Animal control:Ability to communicate with animals, birds and even aquatic creatures and get them to perform tasks on command. She can control up to 4 animals at once
Plant manipulation:ability to control, manipulate or animate plant life.
Animal Mimicry: Ability to take on the abilities of certain animals Pheromone manipulation:Ability to generate and control pheromones which may have various effects.
Poison Generation:Ability to assault others with one or more varieties of toxins, with widely disparate effects.
Water and moisture manipulation: Ability to control, generate or absorb water.
Weakness(s): she can die like any normal human
Abilities: can find her way around any area of land
Skills: she good at tracking

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i need a sister from 2033

Ok, the bio's a little skecty, and there are so many grammer and obvious spelling errors that it makes my head hurt. Those I can ignore, I'll just ask you to fix the grammer so it's legible.

But what I can't ignore is the powers and weaknesses. What's suggested with that is desribing what each power is- as many people don't know what a mimicry is, and explaining to what extent she can use it to.

i.e: Animial control: How many animals can she control at once? Are some harder to tame than others?

You need to put a limit on things like that to avoid god-moding.

Also, with that age and bio, she doesn't appear to have much expierence. Believe it or not, that is a major weakness. She seems to be pretty much minor sidekick level. If you want her poer level to be a bit higher than that, say Young Justice main character's level. Then I suggest editting her bio to include some training and expierence. This can be a futeristic school similar to Sky High or the X-Mansion, or a League mentor.

Please note that I am trying to help you aviod problems later, some people really, really hate it when people try to make their characters seem all mighty and powerful with very little reason. I'm generous when it comes to things like this, but most people I know would be chewing you out riht now.
I'm not saying you'd do that, but people would assume that you would. I'm here to help for as much as you need it. Please don't feel shy to ask for help in details.

Much better! Accepted!

Spiderman and my character, Aquagirl are in New York. But if you want a one-on-one to start, Surfer has five-in-one characters at the asylum. You can start in either place if you want an immediant response, or you can start in a public area and I'll try to bring in another one of my characters. Untill next time, see you in the forums!

(Also, a warning:Try to aviod Oncaro, I don't think he likes you... Then again. he never posts here anymore anyway, so that should be pretty easy to do. ^^)

Aw sh*t, son. Actually, if you look back over the characters in the good old forum section, you'll see I was actually the one with the complaint about acewonder here. By complaint, I mean a massive rant, of course. But since then, I've tried being less of an a**, so I'm ignoring this sort of thing now. I just felt I should clarify so things don't end up all sticky.

I'm not flaming or anything, I just don't appreciate you saying stuff and thinking I won't notice just because I haven't been posting. Anyways, I'm outta this thread.

Temperary RPer Probation

Ace, I have recieved several compliants from at least three different people. I have been waiting for to to respond in school as well..

It seems you have a lot to learn about Gaia Ettiqute, and your lack of knowledge is causing problems with some members. So I have come down to no choice but to put all your characters on Probation.

This means that untill you have proven to me that you can use all of your characters in a way that doesn't cause problems for everyone, and has properly learned Gaia Ettiqute, you will not be allowed to Post any of your characters. You can still post in non-RP parts of the guild, but other than that, no. When you see this, I want you to immediantly post in the School for Gaia Ettiqute. There is a lot I need to teach you, and I'd like the other mods to help.

If you are not really serious about being part of this guild, feel free to quit. I'm not forcing you to stay here. And please note that I really did have to do this. Three people have asked me to remove you from the guild. Fortunatly for you I only want to do that if measures are made extreme. Unfortunitly you are about to cross that exreame. Please qoute me here whatever your decision is.

-The Kidnapper of Fish-People

I understand that, that's why I need to teach you about Gaia Ettiqutte. I'm not at all trying to be mean, I'm trying to prevent fights between you and other players. People like Prax and Oncaro are *very* serious about roleplaying.

There are two lessons in Ettiqute that I need to teach you. Actually three, one of them is about the proper way to quote someone. But I'd preferr to do this in the school, so it can be accessed by people with similar problems.

I've asked other mods to help me with this, and most have agreed. This actually includes Oncaro. Please note, I'm rtying to help you, but you haven't even responded to the first grammer lesson.. Or if you have, then I didn't see it before I'm far too busy these days to check topics everyday... Which remindes me about the quoting thing... Anyway, meet me at Ettiqutte and I will come. No, you don't have to quote me there, I'll explain why later..