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 Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 4:52 pm
Severity Protocol Welcome to Severity Protocol! SP for short, this is where you can read stories of various entries that I, Cyrusfarre, will put exclusively for Brofist until I decide whether or not to expand owo Continue reading below!!! ~Stories In Progress~....~Type~1. Star-tied Princess...........Fiction----> Star-tied Princess is a story of fate where a young commoner girl wishes to change her sorrowful life around with the help of a spell from a banished mage of the Velus of the 9 Order, an organization based upon the central government of this fictional world to oversee 9 different districts of life as it goes by. 2. Awkward Love...............Romantic Fiction----> Awkward Love is a story of love between two boys and how they can't tell if they really love each other or if they're just doing it just because. How is this awkward? I dunno~ I think it's pretty awkward, lol x3 Not that I don't like bi/gay people, just the way how they're together is awkward owo -> Chapter 1, Part 1: The Boy in the Closet ->>> [Click to Read]3. Coming Soon!!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 10:33 pm
Eeek~!!
Not only the characters sound and look cute, but the whole acting and story ish also cute ^o^
Part two? o.O
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jaqueline101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 10:53 pm
jaqueline101
Eeek~!!
Not only the characters sound and look cute, but the whole acting and story ish also cute ^o^
Part two? o.O Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 10:57 pm
Cyrus Farre jaqueline101
Eeek~!!
Not only the characters sound and look cute, but the whole acting and story ish also cute ^o^
Part two? o.O Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
Awe...
Alise for the mom's name?!
Never mind....
It would've been nice to have a second part though ^^
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jaqueline101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:11 pm
jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101
Eeek~!!
Not only the characters sound and look cute, but the whole acting and story ish also cute ^o^
Part two? o.O Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
Awe...
Alise for the mom's name?!
Never mind....
It would've been nice to have a second part though ^^ D: I'll write a second part >X< hopefully I don't make any mistakes Q~Q or someone help me fix my major errors, lol x,x
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:15 pm
Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101
Eeek~!!
Not only the characters sound and look cute, but the whole acting and story ish also cute ^o^
Part two? o.O Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
Awe...
Alise for the mom's name?!
Never mind....
It would've been nice to have a second part though ^^ D: I'll write a second part >X< hopefully I don't make any mistakes Q~Q or someone help me fix my major errors, lol x,x
Mkay~
And if i'm not busy, i'll be willing to do the editing, if you like.
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jaqueline101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:17 pm
jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101
Eeek~!!
Not only the characters sound and look cute, but the whole acting and story ish also cute ^o^
Part two? o.O Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
Awe...
Alise for the mom's name?!
Never mind....
It would've been nice to have a second part though ^^ D: I'll write a second part >X< hopefully I don't make any mistakes Q~Q or someone help me fix my major errors, lol x,x Mkay~
And if i'm not busy, i'll be willing to do the editing, if you like. Aww, okay ^^ and just to be on the same page of how I'm writing these stories, they're written informal. Not formally with all correct/complete sentences and complete grammar sense.
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:21 pm
Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
Awe...
Alise for the mom's name?!
Never mind....
It would've been nice to have a second part though ^^ D: I'll write a second part >X< hopefully I don't make any mistakes Q~Q or someone help me fix my major errors, lol x,x Mkay~
And if i'm not busy, i'll be willing to do the editing, if you like. Aww, okay ^^ and just to be on the same page of how I'm writing these stories, they're written informal. Not formally with all correct/complete sentences and complete grammar sense.
Then you don't need editing.
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jaqueline101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:24 pm
jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre Part two, is going to be hard~ lol, i dunno what to call the mom x3 and other little stuff ^^"
Awe...
Alise for the mom's name?!
Never mind....
It would've been nice to have a second part though ^^ D: I'll write a second part >X< hopefully I don't make any mistakes Q~Q or someone help me fix my major errors, lol x,x Mkay~
And if i'm not busy, i'll be willing to do the editing, if you like. Aww, okay ^^ and just to be on the same page of how I'm writing these stories, they're written informal. Not formally with all correct/complete sentences and complete grammar sense. Then you don't need editing. Yes I do ^^ lol, even though it's informal, i at least need a reader's opinion on if they can follow the story line and what they think the characters are doing, and where they're positioned. :3
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:30 pm
Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre D: I'll write a second part >X< hopefully I don't make any mistakes Q~Q or someone help me fix my major errors, lol x,x Mkay~
And if i'm not busy, i'll be willing to do the editing, if you like. Aww, okay ^^ and just to be on the same page of how I'm writing these stories, they're written informal. Not formally with all correct/complete sentences and complete grammar sense. Then you don't need editing. Yes I do ^^ lol, even though it's informal, i at least need a reader's opinion on if they can follow the story line and what they think the characters are doing, and where they're positioned. :3
Mkay >~<
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jaqueline101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:33 pm
Am I being very confusing? D: if i am, just tell me x,x lol, but if you understood, did you get where the people were moving and doing things in part one? ^^"
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:37 pm
Cyrus Farre Am I being very confusing? D: if i am, just tell me x,x lol, but if you understood, did you get where the people were moving and doing things in part one? ^^"
Erm...
The boy is a sophmore~
His mother plays like a teasable friend towards her son~
Asher started to get emotions towards a boy that was teleported in his closet o.o
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jaqueline101 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:41 pm
jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre Am I being very confusing? D: if i am, just tell me x,x lol, but if you understood, did you get where the people were moving and doing things in part one? ^^" Erm...
The boy is a sophmore~
His mother plays like a teasable friend towards her son~
Asher started to get emotions towards a boy that was teleported in his closet o.o ah, so close x,x lol, Terrance has emotions towards Asher, who teleported in Terrance's closet, not the other way around x3 so it seems I might've made something very confusing at one point...got to see what i did wrong then x3
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:42 pm
Cyrus Farre jaqueline101 Cyrus Farre Am I being very confusing? D: if i am, just tell me x,x lol, but if you understood, did you get where the people were moving and doing things in part one? ^^" Erm...
The boy is a sophmore~
His mother plays like a teasable friend towards her son~
Asher started to get emotions towards a boy that was teleported in his closet o.o ah, so close x,x lol, Terrance has emotions towards Asher, who teleported in Terrance's closet, not the other way around x3 so it seems I might've made something very confusing at one point...got to see what i did wrong then x3
Or maybe it was me .~.
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