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Milpheeo

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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:42 pm

Here is a pic I did as a super hero names the Hextress. I need criticism, but please do me a favor and also tell me what you like about it. I will take the Criticism better that way.
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:45 pm

Here is another super hero called "Lady Luck" I need criticism.
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Milpheeo

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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 4:27 pm

You need to practice anatomy and perspective. First thing I noticed is how skinny and thin they are. It makes them look a bit unproportioned. The hands and feet are also a bit to small. The fingers need to be a bit longer. The fingers on the second picture don't look to bad they just need to be a little longer. The fingers on the first one how ever are a mess. They're all different sizes and the perspective is wacky looking. They're far to straight and stiff. If your going to do a pose with her hand like that then they need to be bent more. I also noticed problems with her ear. Honestly, I can't tell whether she's human or an elf. Her ear looks to pointed it needs to be rounded out more. If shes supposed to have pointed ears then it's fine. The first pictures hair could use a little work with perspective, but I'm not to good at hair. So, I can't really critic it that much. I'd also like to point out that her torso is way to thin. Her boobs shouldn't be bigger than her torso. Well, that's all the critic I can supply. I hope you found some of it helpful. If you couldn't already tell I'm not much of a critic.

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