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 Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 7:17 pm
Time after time
I see your heart get broken.
Time after time
Those hateful words are spoken.
Time after time
I want to share your pain
Time after time
Neither of us gain
Time after time
I'm there for you with all my heart.
Time after time
I watch and simply fall apart.
Time after time
My world comes crashing down.
Time after time
You miss the secret frown
Time after time
I long for you
Time after time
You miss my subtle clues
Time after time
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 3:42 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 2:13 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 11:36 am
Drakulya666 Time after time I see your heart get broken. Time after time Those hateful words are spoken. Time after time I want to share your pain Time after time Neither of us gain Time after time I'm there for you with all my heart. Time after time I watch and simply fall apart. Time after time My world comes crashing down. Time after time You miss the secret frown Time after time I long for you Time after time You miss my subtle clues Time after time
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 12:19 pm
Yes, this structure really appeals to me. You are a genius!! You can rhyme and not sound corny!! I bow to thee.
(that means I like da poem)
-Sakura
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 1:52 pm
thanks but actually most of my ryhming poems sound corny this one was just luck
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