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 Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 7:10 pm
You may not be mine
You may not know
You may not understand
You may only be a dog
You may be in pain
But I'll miss you
I cared for you
I helped you
I watched you when no one else could
I fed you
You were mine
You knew me
Unlike many others
I cared for you
So now that you are leaving me
My four legged friend
I pray for you
You were good
You were loved
I want to see you again
In another world
In another life
In some other way
I want you to make the journey safe
Take Cheron's boat
Across the river Styx
To the place where you cross over
Where you cross from the underworld
To the cloudy sky
Where we will one day meet
May you be protected
And may your soul be reborn
Let me see your smile
Even after you have left this world
May you always know
That I cared for you
Like you were my own
Because to me
You were
You licked the tears off my face
When I was sad
But now you cannot
So I say to you
You deserved more than you had
So goodbye crying
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 2:58 pm
aww yeah... i lost my doggy last summer =... but as for the poem, i think that it was a little lengthy, i think you could slim it down some, and still get your point across
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 6:33 pm
The dog wasn't really mine she was my neighbors but I took care of her a lot when they went out of town. I went for lengthy cause I was sad and wanted to get it all out. (plus I like getting the point across repeatedly it's just how I write)
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 10:13 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:15 pm
i've never read anything by you i didn't like, Drakulya. 3nodding
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