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thehillbillyking

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:58 pm


At the beginning of time there was two entities whom both heated each other for a simple reason. One loved to create and the other love to create the complete opposite of the other entitie, and in doing so destroys everything. The 'Holy' entitie decides that it has had enough of this other and challenges him to a duel. It took them 1 million years of them fighting to realize that they could not kill each other because if one were to die the other would meat the same fate. So the 'Holy' decides to imprison 'Deymone' into the ultimate cage of earth. Not knowing it 'Holy' made 'Demone's' powers weaker. 'Holy' looks at this cage and creates nature on it. 'Demone' how ever will not have any of this, because he is weaker he creates others like him and he names them Demones. 'Holy' is over whelmed by the amount of Demones that 'Demone' has sent after his creations. So 'Holy' creats his own soldier, the Angedrick. Because 'holy' has all of his powers his soldier Angedrick was only 2 foldes weaker than 'holy'. So the Angedrick takes over this cage as 'holy' begins to create everything he wants to. After a cople of years the Angdrick runs into a little problem.... the cage has become over grown on the account that he can not destroy. So 'holy' creates death. When this death is manifested on the cage it is a lifeless skeleton and the cage is still becoming over grown. The Angdreck tells holy that death may need some life in him. So 'holy' creates life, and as predicted death stands up and the cage becomes under control.

This is were out story begins
 
PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:49 pm


Scene one, act 1:
Since the creation of death and life all three have been working together to keep the cage in check. "Life, death, how are you this morning?" the Angedreck is a human like man who stands at 6"5. He wears a white clock that raps around his body with a cross on the front and back. Before the Angedreck lays a great round stone table that has a seats all around. Tall trees are growing all around the stone table. The Angedreck is already seated when they arrive, "Hello" they say in unison. Life wears the same garment as the Angedreck while death wears a clock that sucks all light that gets to close to it. Death is the only one who carries a weapon with him, it is a scythe, the blade shines with what seems like stars, the wooden staff is warped such that no one should be able to use it comfortably. Life takes his seat first "I am fine, the Demones are in less numbers than usual though, it worries me." when he says Demone all three of them spit at the ground, as it is their tradition, and the planet seems to shiver. "What about you.... death?" it takes death a while to site down, he doesn't answer until he is seated "I am Death, I have no feelings my ledge." Both Life and the Angedreck shift uncomfortably in their stone chairs. "I see, well how goes your responsibility's?" Life answers first as death takes very long to speak or do anything. "Because of the lack of Demone around it has been very easy to keep things in line" he shoots a quick look at death than back to the Angedreck. "Everything is coming to a end when they need to be, their screams still do not stop how ever." There is a long silence. "So... How little have the numbers of the Demones been of late?" Life takes a bit to think and is about to answer when death answers for him "under 5 million to our last meeting." he slowly nodes. The Angedreck sits back in his chair, "That is odd, do any of you two know why they would be holding back?" once again Death speaks "The destroyer could be trying to save his power. Why else would he be holding back his hordes?" "How could you posibly know this? You are only good at killing what could you...?" The sky darkens as the Angedreck shoots a look at Life, "He is your equal, watch your tongue!" his voice thunders across the planet. "Sorry..." the sky turns back to a light blue "Do you have proof Death?" He shakes his head no. "I see, I called you here today for two reasons, one, I need you Life to check the sea of life, my vision of it has become blurry, Death I want you to check the screaming waters, as of today my vision of those horrid lands have vanished, if what you say is posible than I fear what can happen when my vision is gone. Go now." the Angedreck stands and bows to both Death and Life, turns and four massive wings spread out of his back and with a twitch of the wings he sores into the sky. "Well then, good day to you... Death, and please try to hurry to your home. I know you like to hear the screams of all things living vanishing into what you call implement." Death slowly stands takes a low bow and bursts into a death of crows and flies off. Life shivers, "how could something be as twisted as him if he was created by the first in command I will never know." Life bursts into hundreds of doves.

(I am aware that my spelling could be less than good and my grammar may be just as bad but please keep in mind that I keep mixing my French with my English. Because of this I do have the spelling of a.... 5th or 6th grader.... it's so much 'fun' when you have a L.D.... I hope you like my part one smile )

thehillbillyking


thehillbillyking

PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 10:03 pm


scene 1 Act 2; The forest of death is Deaths domain, it is a place that if anything or anyone were to enter would die in a mater of seconds in screaming agony. This is were the forest gets it's name, when someone dies their voice carries on only to be heard by death. The forest trees carry the last thoughts of the living creature. It is a swamp of sorts, once your in, you never get out. This second scene is placed in the very middle of this forest were the death is so strong that not even the trees grow. The forest only has one path that leads to the middle, this path is said to have creatures that have been twisted by the thoughts of Death and the Demones.
The screams seemed louder than before, more sad and longing for life again. Death reemerged in the middle of his swamp believing that if he started looking in the middle he may find what is holding back the second in commands vision. He looks around the clearing but doesn't sense anything wrong. All the trees are black and twisted, crying black ink out of its bark. The trees form a circle around the clearing. Death begins to move to the north end of the forest when something very odd happens, the screams, they've stopped. Death is immobilized by this. Since the creation of his beaing he has always heard the agonizing screams but now they have gone, except for one voice. This one voice isn't like any other he has ever heard before, it seems reckless and wanting but not for life nor death. Death slwoly turns to were this lone voice is coming from and what he sees almost makes him scream him self. A baby boy lays crying in the very center of the clearing were nothing truly exists, but here lays a nude babe.
It takes Death a long time for him to get close to the baby "Are you the one who has done this? No one should be here, sorry boy but you need to die" he lifts his scythe in the air and readies to strike. As his blade gets closer and closer the other voices come back louder and louder than before until it is like the voices are fighting each other just to be heard. It gets so loud that Death stops his strike only inches away from the boys head and the voices stop again. "What is the meaning of this?" his voice is full of panic. He isn't sure that he should be afraid of the fact that this boy seems to be the reason why the voices are being held back but that he is feeling something instead of nothing. The little babe stops crying and reaches out to touch his blade and starts playing with it. "You can touch the blade of fate?" he slowly retracts the blade because no one but death is capable of touching it. "Why me? Why are you silencing all the screams? Why. Why. WHY!" A whirl of emotions wash over Death, anger, sadness, curiosity, and jealousy. The babe looks at death with wondering eyes and mutters only this "Why not?"
Death can't remember how long he sat there looking at the babe wondering over it's words that seem earth shattering. But he knows it must have been a while because a white dove purches it's self infront of him with a note in it's mouth. It reads "Death. It is your 2nd commander, come to the round table this instant, you have gone missing long enough." death shoots a look at the babe and realises it is no longer a babe. It's a boy about the age of 11 "About time you woke up dad. You feel asleep, you ok?" Death sharply raises and glares "I was not sleeping and I am not you father!" he takes a step back and this is when he sees the single most terrifying thing he could passably imagine, the boy is holding his weapon, the scythe of fate. "Here, someone had to take it up to keep the balance" Death snatches it out of the boys hand and when he does the boy smiles and Deaths vision fades to black and he reemerges in the light of the round table "how did..." "Death! so nice of you to join us." Life interrupted his thoughts "The screams can't be that distracting that it took you 1,000 years to answer, I bet you haven't even done you mission, the Angedreck is still blind you fool!" Life swings at Death with a open hand but is stopped by the Angedreck "I will have non of this in my presence, go back to your seat." The Angedreck takes a long look at Death then asks "Where have you been?" his voice is calm but demanding "I have been searching my ledge." He nods "Have you found anything?" He leans in closer. This is when he hears the screams but they begin to for words "You found nothing, tell him nothing" they keep repeating this over and over again until Death answers with "Nothing" Death feels a rush of excitement but shows nothing to show it "I see, very well then" he slowly walks towards his chair "Look more and this time keep in check, if you do not... you will feel my wrath."
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