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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 3:00 pm
intro post where i seduce you into reading this thread
also credit where its due:
Ravina Loki and ex o ex Snoof are the most encouraging and helpful people ; ;
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:29 pm
Ever-Changing Scent Inside the vial is a peculiar looking wisp of yellow smoke. At first glance it seems very unassuming, but as you come closer the smoke comes to life. Through the glass and cork you smell something. Something only you alone can smell because the moment you hand it to another person, they notice that they don't smell what you do and in fact smell something different! How odd! Even stranger, when you take the vial back, the scent has changed to something else entirely!
Rotten Banana This banana, though obviously rotten is still firm to the touch, having the consistency of a unripe banana. It came from a tree in Panama, growing rotten though the others in its bunch matured as normal bananas. Leaving this banana within the vicinity of perishable items causes them to rot at an abnormally fast pace.
--Some title suggestions would be really helpful ; u;
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:31 pm
Instead of having two different souls, I'll just be sticking to one. American cockroach (Periplaneta americana).
FEL ESSENCE : Ever-changing Scent NAME Peigi (affectionately nicknamed ‘Piggy’) GENDER Female SOUL CHOICE: American cockroach REASON FOR SOUL CHOICE :  POSSIBLE POWERS:
Resilience - Having the soul of a cockroach, Peigi is resistant to most disease and bacterium because she is a carrier of them. Even though she has immunity to pathogens, there is a chance that parasites can infect her body.
Suck it in! – Because of the cockroach soul, Peigi is capable of squeezing into very narrow and small places, flattening her body up to three times its original size. She doesn’t find any particular discomfort in contorting her body size, and it comes quite natural to her.
That Smelly Smell - Peigi is able to change her scent at will, in an attempt to make her seem more appealing to others. It's limited in its ability that Peigi can replicate scents that she has already smelled and knows what it smells like exactly. It's easier for her to replicate scents when she is near them, but it is not impossible for her to change her scent whenever, wherever. She can also use this ability to change the scent of objects and living creatures.
What's that smell? - The Raevan is capable of messing with one's odor glands making the person or animal smell things that aren't really there. For instance, if she is so willing, she can make one smell cat urine, or she can make one smell a warm apple pie. Again, she can only replicate scents that she already knows extremely well.
Remembrance - Peigi has a very discerning nose, and upon smelling something, she is able to recall an event vividly and identify something by scent alone (since scent is closely tied to memory.
*Peigi feeds of strong odors such as, rotting meat and garbage.
FEL ESSENCE : Rotten Banana NAME Peigi (affectionately nicknamed ‘Piggy’) GENDER Female SOUL CHOICE: American cockroach REASON FOR SOUL CHOICE :  POSSIBLE POWERS:
Resilience - Having the soul of a cockroach, Peigi is resistant to most disease and bacterium because she is a carrier of them. The slight radioactivity from the potassium found in the banana keeps the deadly bacteria at bay, but there is still a chance she can pass on a disease if in direct contact with the creature. Even though she has immunity to pathogens, there is a chance that parasites can infect her body.
Suck it in! – Because of the cockroach soul, Peigi is capable of squeezing into very narrow and small places, flattening her body up to three times its original size. She doesn’t find any particular discomfort in contorting her body size, and it comes quite natural to her.
Consistency - When Peigi comes into direct contact with any item, she is able to change it to the opposite consistency. It's easier for to change the consistency of perishables or food items, though anything man-made or large in scale will take more time and energy for Peigi. For instance, she can make gold as hard as diamond, a cashmere sweater as rough as an emery board, and a piece of wood as bendable as rubber. This is a difficult power for Peigi to use, especially when she is in the Frei stage.
*Peigi feeds on rotting items. The food is then reverted back to its fresh state. -----------
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:33 pm
NAME : Gregory Scott GENDER : Male AGE : 32 OCCUPATION : Owner of a small hardware shop in Durem called, ‘Scott’s Hardware’ and part-time handyman. RACE : Human – Scottish heritage LIKES : Sports, money, steaks, sitting down in front of the television with a good beer. DISLIKES : Formal clothing, constant nagging and repetitiveness, socks with holes in them
LOOKS : Greg is a broad and brawny man, standing at just under 6 feet tall with a pleasant disposition. He has short coppery-red hair, with a scruffy beard to match and bright green eyes. He’s quite hairy, with a generous amount of chest hair, among other places. He has a light caramel tan as well as hands that are heavily calloused, a result from his line of work. His usual attire consists of a t-shirt or wife-beater, worn down jeans, and work boots.
PERSONALITY : A jovial man with a loud booming voice, Greg goes out of his way to help anyone he can. He’s easily taken advantage of in this aspect, as some won’t hesitate to work him ragged. The loss of his baseball scholarship has now smoothed itself out to a dull ringing regret in the back of his mind. As a result he’s a tireless worker, because he doesn’t want to go through another failure. He’s also greedy, as most of his goals are based on how much money he can earn in a short period of time. He keeps his problems to himself, because he doesn’t want to seem helpless. It takes a lot to get him angry, and will leave the premises before the situation escalates any further because he hates being angry. Greg doesn’t like to be angry because it tends to rub off on everyone involved. The heavy tension in the room afterwards is not something he’s comfortable with. He’s a polite fellow, especially to women. He’s a one-girl kind of guy, though he doesn’t have any plans to get married soon, much to the annoyance of his on-and-off again girlfriend of 5 years.
HISTORY : Greg was born and raised in Aekea, with an older brother (Mark) and two younger sisters (Janice and Jessica). Greg and his siblings grew up participating in many extracurricular activities. Out of his siblings, Greg had a penchant for baseball. Growing up, he received a lot of rewards for playing the sport, even becoming team captain in high school and bringing his team to the national play-offs. As a result, he was offered sports scholarships to many universities and instantly took up one of the offers. Unfortunately for him, he didn’t realize that in order to maintain the scholarship, he had to have a certain GPA as well. It was his science and literature classes that he did miserably in, failing both. Even though he was a great addition to the team, he was eventually kicked out of school in the middle of his second year unable to recover from his academic probation. Greg was very frustrated and his parents angry, because he ruined his one big chance, as baseball was his only plan for the future. With the urging of his parents, he set out to look for jobs since baseball was no longer an option. He eventually found a decent job at a hardware store, working for an older man who taught Greg everything about maintaining and repairing houses. He liked the job because it taught him to be self-sufficient. When Greg was twenty-five the man passed away and Greg bought the store. It was a good decision because Greg now had a stable job and could support himself. Thanks to his teacher he could also have a part-time job as a handyman, usually servicing senior citizens with their repair problems. He eventually bought a small apartment and found a girlfriend. They’re on-and-off because of his refusal to settle down, much to her annoyance.
((there is a shorter version for events and stuff))
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 2:40 pm
Funds
if its ok with kyou i can give her my cat or something
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 2:41 pm
extra fel essence ideas maybe
they're fun to think up of and maybe i can inspire someone ; u;
or is that wishful thinking WHO KNOWS
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 12:16 pm
oh mah gahd open for crits even though i should be filling in more stuff *buries face in hands*
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:07 am
I think I like your Rotten Banana essence better than the Pitcher Plant. It feels closer to being an actual fel essence than the other. And the idea of being a cockroach soul and she eats from rotten food just seems right, lol. Though I'd probably leave the consistency ability limited to just fruits and have it just be a side effect from her feeding. Sort of like how Eiry feeds only on the death of plants and they burst back to life or how Anya feeds on illness and the person or thing gets better.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:55 pm
Thanks Ebony! I've changed Pitcher Plant to Ever-changing scent P:
I'll be changing it around again
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:32 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:40 pm
I appreciate you telling me but that quest hasn't actually been touched for four years. The essences are similar, but they're not exactly the same. I think my concept's different enough to not step on her toes but let me know if there's a way I could make it more different!
Thanks though!
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 4:28 pm
I just wanted you to be aware, that's all.
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