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Guardian Odelia
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:12 pm


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A Short Story Contest
Start date: August 25th, 2012 @ 2 PM CST
End date: September 1st, 2012 @ 2 PM CST
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:12 pm


Rules

This is a short story contest for all my non-nubber-flubs! - bricked - GAH! What this means is that if you are one of them people with more than one herla then you are eligible to enter this contest.

Be nice. Don't discourage anyone and so on. Or else I won't let you play.
You may not gift away Herla won from this contest.
The gender is predetermined and cannot be changed.
He is fully grown. But you may decide if he is an adult or a perma-child.
All entries should be no fewer than 2 paragraphs but no more than 1 page long. Hi! I are Loveless and I dun wants to read 30 pages! HURP! :'B
You may edit your entry as many times as you want until then end of contest. Once it's over the thread will be locked for judging.
Insanity_Of_The_loveless and Thy Reaper will be judging this, but should we not be able to decide together, Poison Ivy Josephine will be our tiebreaker.
This isn't a rule so much as it's a statement: His hair is not water. I cannot stress this enough. It's just meant to look like water. It's not water.
Above all: please, don't be a sore loser if you didn't win, there is always next time.

Guardian Odelia
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Guardian Odelia
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:13 pm


Your Prompt


I want you all to write my the story of this Herla's life. You can choose to write about his home, his family, his favorite food. Whatever strikes your fancy. But I really want to get to know and feel something for this Herla. Be creative!

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:59 pm


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saphria201


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:04 am


My name is Dorian and this is my tale.

Temperament:Dutiful
Story: ((the name might evolve so I left it out...))
There were sounds coming from every direction. Crackling. Rustling. Yelling. Frantic hooves moving carelessly through the brush in attempts to usher the young and helpless away from the fire as the adults and brave yearlings took on the challenge of a firebreak. It had come upon them so suddenly, the storm, a strike of lighting that would change the life of many of them forever. But how could he have known that?
Smoke. He coughed lightly as he made his way through the throng of herla toward a large group that began to congregate for no real reason. Herd mentality. It was a hard instinct to fight; especially in times such as these. Leaping up to a rock, he took advantage of the high ground and scanned the herd as he addressed those too afraid to realize the dangers of remaining this close to the flames. “Please...This area is still unsafe!” Making eye contact with a few bucks that still had their hooves about them, he pointed with his front leg to a wetland nearby. If the firebreak failed...it would be the only protection left. “Gather your loved ones and the less able! Lead them to refuge!”
Bounding from his perch, the young hart directed others toward the wetland. His eyes ever watchful for her...the only herla left to his family name. It had only been a few seasons since they had ventured here together. His daughter and himself. He was young for a parent, but others never assumed his young age. His spirit was old...or so his mate had told him before the disease took hold.
“Tahlia!” Dirt and loam found themselves heavily displaced as he pushed himself closer to the flames. His vision slowly loosing precision as the smoke fell around him like a blanket of chilled fog. It wasn't cold itself. No, the flames were quickly enveloping his home. Lungs burning from the heat of the air he raggedly inhaled. The chill came from the fear ebbing into his determination. Fear that Tahlia would be claimed by the unstoppable force that had devoured her mother. Never enough time.
Stumbling, his eyes widened and welcomed the sting of the smokey air. “Tahlia!” He had found her! Voice barely audible over the fire's roar, she remained huddled up to a large boulder; her father unknown to her in this world of flame and smoke. Rushing the small clearing she had sought, he leaped back as a tree succumbed to the fire and crashed to the forest floor before him. His path blocked from all sides. “Arrgh...No!...Tahlia!”
Scrambling backwards, the young father surveyed the area as his heart raced in his chest. Eyes manically searching for a way to her...he saw it. A small trail that was unblocked...but only she could escape through it. He would have to meet her deeper in the forest. Letting out a sob that couldn't be labeled as relieved or horrified, he neared the flames and reared up to let himself be seen by her eyes. His hoarse and charred throat screaming her name until he saw her eyes and ears perk. The fawn running up the tree to try and get to her father.
“No...No its no use Tahlia! Listen carefully! Are you Listening? Take the berry trail! It will lead you out to the wetlands! I can't get to you...I love you...papa loves you Talhia! GO!!” His eyes and shaking roar terrified her...but it was enough to send the fawn hurtling down the trail and towards any sort of escape. Watching her in mix of dismay and solace...he turned about and headed for the wetland by the closest path to her possible. She would make it.
He wasn't sure how he had done it, but minutes later his fur and mane were soaked as he barreled through the herd to reach the edge of the wetland she'd emerge from. Muck sucked at his hooves and slowed him down to the point of collapse. A splash of fetid water and algae covering him as he gave up on recovery. Limbs too weak. Lungs ablaze. All that he could do was lay there and stare off into the hell that once been their playground.
Time moved. Time stood still. Time abandoned him. Flames burned to ash. Sun set to moon. Dirt and muck coated what was once a luscious mane. Seeds took root. Sprouts reached up. Cattails grew. He waited. Waited for Tahlia to break free from the ash and blackened trunks. To trot over to him with smear of black berries upon her fur and a chuckle in her soft, trusting voice. A voice just her like mothers. He waited there, a feature of the wetland as the world and time seemed to endure without them. Of all things...time endured. For it was time that he had to little to waste. Time that he asked his daughter to wait. “Just a few minutes Tahlia...please...can't you wait?” And so...He'd wait.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 11:25 am


My name is Kawthar and this is my tale.

Temperament: Serene
Story: Kawthar stood on the bank of the river, over looking the other herla as they prepare for the fall celebrations. By nightfall, the festival shall begin and it'll last till morning. Kawthar looked up in to the sky as the sun sets, setting the sky ablazed, thinking about how this day would end. Then he turned around to see some herla about his age.

"Kawthar!" yelled a female herla. "Will you be joining us at the festival tonight?"

"Yeah! It's going to be fun." said her twin so excitedly.

Kawthar smiled. "Yeah. It's going to be fun." Kawthar ran to them and they started to run towards the festival as soon as the sky turned black with starry skies.

The Kawthar and the other herlas danced and played to the music all around them, living in the moment, doing everything Kawthar wanted to do so that he will live out the day with no regrets.

The young herlas and Kawthar watched as the sunrise the following day.

Kawthar smiled and took in a deep breath...and closed his eyes.

"I wonder...what the next day would bring."

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:33 pm


My name is Nereus and this is my tale.

Temperament: Forlorn (think Eeyore… XP )
Story: My tale is a sad one. Alas, it would seem your curiosity will not be sated until you hear it. It was a long, long time ago- during the great Talon Wars. Yes, I am that old. My herd was proud, they believed that nothing and no one could ever break into their protected glade. That is, until the Talons came. I was but a thicket then, vulnerable and new to the world. We were herla of the river and my mother had furnished my birthing place with cat stalks and lily pads- as was custom among my people. She told me stories and sang me songs, all while having one ear turned to the north, from where the distant sounds of battle could be heard.
I remember well the morning it happened. Whereas my first few days had been full of sound and light, this day dawned cold and silent. It is well known amongst all herla that we must be our most wary when stillness descends upon the forest. Silence was not a sign of peace, but a sign of fear. With cautious movements, my mother collected my thicket and bore me away to the river. Tucking me amongst the reeds she crooned to me comfortingly, keeping me from crying out in alarm. “Hush, little Nereus, my little man of river. Await for me here- do not move an inch from this spot,” she whispered before turning and preparing to bound off into the trees, to the aid of our herd. Her last words to me as she turned to look at me for the last time, “I love you my little one.” And with that, she was gone.
That day, the river ran red with the blood of my people. I sat, shivering, cold, and lonely in my reedy thicket by the river. I sat, and waited. Long did I wait, after the red had washed away, after the seasons changed, after the battle ended. My fur, mane, and tail grew mossy and moldy, as I never moved far from my watery nursery. I ate what I could find around me- reeds, amphibious eggs, small fish. I survived, all with the hope that some day my mother would come for me. Alas, it was not to be.
One day, a strange buck came strolling down the riverbank; a buck that I would later come to know as father- Bartholomew the Bard. A story teller-turned-soldier for the Talon Wars, he had fought alongside my herd and was there to hear my mother’s dying words as she told him to look for a fawn hidden by the river. It took him many long months to find me, but at last, he did. He bore me away to a good life with his young daughter, Amelia. I became her brother and then uncle to her children. Bartholomew moved on in his story telling ways and I was left alone, yet again. So I have returned to the river, where you find me now. I hope to someday become one with the water as I close my eyes and listen to the rapids whisper to me in my mothers voice, I love you, Nereus, my little man of the river.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 12:45 pm


My name is Anthea and this is my tale.

Temperament: Tempestuous
Story:

Anthea stood ridged, looking out over the swamp lands, muscles tensing as the hind approached from behind. “Anthea..” Her voice was strained and tight. They had had this conversation so many times before. She had begged him, pleaded with him, but he would hear none of it. Now, even as she called his name, not even his ear turned to hear her. “Anthea, the swamp is dieing… We must move to better grounds, or we will perish as well.” Anthea struggled to keep his composure, his chest tight as sorrow, fear and anger swelled in a tempest not at all unlike the hurricanes that had shaken their home… His home, in the past. How many times had the trees been leveled, and their home torn to shreds? “Leave if you want.” The words were cold, half spat at the hind he had known since childhood. Another time, he might have been gentler with his words. He was not blind, nor was he deaf. He knew the pain that this was causing her, that she had wanted him to come as well, but the very idea was absurd. This was their home, not any other place. This was theirs to care for, and now when the land needed them most, they were turning tail. He turned to look at the hind, blue eyes ever cold, filled with a wounded and fierce betrayal. “I am going to leave now. I suggest you do the same.” Without another word, and deaf to any of hers, the hart waded out into the waters, until he had disappeared into the wonder of his swamp.
There was once a time when the Crystal Swamps had been a beautiful place. Its waters were not the muddy and murky waters of other lands, but rather a beautiful blue, the color of the mid-morning sky. It teemed with life both beautiful and deadly. Its trees were the greenest Anthea had ever known, and yet even he would still be lost in their wilds from time to time. The clear blue waters had long protected its herd, leaving no murky water for strange and vicious beasts to hide in, but there were plenty of other ways for one to become a part of the earth. It was as much of a paradise as truly wild place could be, teeming with life and dangers. For as long as their herd had existed, they had cared for the swamp, protected it, and treasured it, but as all beautiful and wonderful things, it seemed that the swamp’s time had begun to pass. Anthea remembered the first day he had felt the sting of salt in his wonderful waters. He remembered when the edges of the swamp had begun to lose their luscious green, and tinge to brown.
The herd had originally refused to let their land die, and desperately began to build dams in hopes that it would stem the flow of salt water from the sea, but as time wore on, they had slowly begun to realize that there was no stopping the sea from taking their beloved home. It had been no singular realization that had sent the herd to disperse, but rather a gradual loss of hope for the future. One family would leave for better lands, then another, and another. The final few families had gathered, their numbers reduced from the large, populous herd they had been, to a mere thirteen. Anthea had been there, alongside his family and the rest. It had been a horrible night, the hart reduced to tears as he realized that even his own kin had lost hope for their land. They were fools, all of them. Hate rose up, hot and fierce. How dare they betray the land that had cared and kept them so well? How could they lose hope now, after so many disasters had demolished their homes, only for the swamp to heal? Nothing had ever been able to best his swamp, and nothing ever would! The hart turned his back on his kin, and child-hood friends. If they would leave, then they would leave without him.
Time would not wait for the swamp to heal, and carried on its ever endless march as the water began to grow murky, and the fish and plant life died. The wonderful place that had been green, and teeming with life soon turned brown, dry and dead. Through the seasons, food grew scarcer and scarcer, and even Anthea began to lose hope.
The hart stood in his once beautiful waters, belly long empty and bones prominent. Desperately, he had done his best to keep up the dams, but still the salt encroached, and steadily killed his home. His heart was breaking, and yet even his tears would only further poison his beloved home. They had been right.. There was no hope for the swamp, not when the sea was its enemy. Sorrowfully, even the hart was forced to forsaken his dieing, if not long dead land.

The journey had been hard, crossing lands so different from his beloved swamp. Its thick clay and water had made his legs strong, but without water he hart had begun to wilt. It hadn’t been long before he had encountered the flowers, and joined their journey. Listless, wilted and quiet, he said little, stuck in the same heartbroken daze he had worn since he had left his beloved home. He had lost all family, all friends, and all semblance of home…
The day they arrived in the hart lands was no joyous one for him. Just another dry forest, almost too cool for his tastes. He had no inclination to join the festive celebrations of reaching their new home. This was not home. The hart’s head hung low, his luscious mane flowing through the all too dry grasses, as even his tail began to dry and brown. But what was that? The scent tickled his nose, not unlike the crystalline waters he had not caught scent of in years. Skeptical, his ears perked and his head ever slightly lifted. The spring was crystal blue, cattails clustered about its rim. Tenderly, he dipped his hooves into the spring, its warmth soothing. A smile touched the Hart’s face as he flowed into its deep. Here. Here was home.

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Ruriska

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 6:32 pm


My name is Chowilawu and this is my tale.

Temperament: Accepting

Story: He feels old, but he knows he can’t be ancient, not as ancient as the earth. Memories are like water, they ebb and flow, they trickle from his grasp. Sometimes he gets a glimpse of a face or hears voices calling his name. Chowilawu, they call him. The owners of those voices were all gone now. Where, he knows not. But they had grown and their legs had carried them far across the lands, to live or die as the world willed it.

He had not grown; his body had remained as small and fragile as a fawn’s. It had hardly seemed to matter. The world he was sinking into did not appreciate size. It welcomed and molded around his petite frame. Now he is often indistinguishable from the land around him. He sinks into the lake reeds, buries his legs in the mud and lets his hair trail through the water until he has become part of the earth. Just not as ancient… no matter how old he feels.

The day that he meets her, the memories have escaped him again. He can’t even remember his name. He watches the dragonflies swoop over the water and listens for the gentle sounds of the lake only he can hear. He doesn’t hear them. Instead there is a familiar ‘thump, thump, thump’. Many creatures come to his lake. This is one of them. She is hard to forget.

A head appears; pushing through the reeds. How long has it been seen he had been eye to eye with one of his own kind? He makes an effort to stand, pushing up from the muck. His hair, though seemingly part of the lake, lifts from the water and drips like small waterfall frozen in time. Has he been lonely? That word is a strange one. But it feels right. Yes, he has been lonely.

It seems a shame he might forget this tomorrow, but there is nothing he can do, so he must accept and cherish the moment right now. They touch noses and share a breath.

She returns; again and again, over how many days he can’t tell, but he smiles whenever he hears her solid-stepped approach. He is not lonely now, and when he remembers his name, he tells her.

Chowilawu… joined together by water.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 3:41 pm


My name is Serhiy and this is my tale.

Temperament: Damaged
Story: Some days are better than others, but then again, it could always be so much worse. That’s what you tell yourself, trying to keep positive, but later when you’re ripping your insides apart from feelings of failure at being unable to make even one hart happy, you realize that’s nothing in comparison to when he completely ignores you.

You can take the glares of hatred, the bites that make you bleed, and the kicks that strike you down when something’s really got him angry. But when he won’t even look at you, those are the moments when your heart crumbles in your chest. It shouldn’t be a surprise when he walks past you, to the swamp you call home where he glares into the murky waters.

When no words are spoken you know that’s your cue to leave. Without making a single sound, just turn and go. For some reason, this is the worst pain you’ve ever known. You’re torn up inside, pulling your own heart apart asking why he didn’t want you. Why he didn’t need you.

But sometimes, he emits a soft grunt. That’s when you know you’re allowed to approach. Allowed to put one foot in front of the other, kneel at his side and stare down into the muck with him. You’ll sit in silence, listening to the occasional croak of a frog or the hum of a dragonfly’s wings. He never talks to you. Why would he? You’re disgusting.

But you don’t mind. This makes you happy. Just being close to him is enough.

Sometimes he’ll even lean over and press his nose into your hair. You know he loves your beautiful hair, so you always do your best to take special care of your mane. You go to the river every day to wash and groom yourself, even though there’s no point. More than once a day he’s kicked you into the mud and trampled over your body until it hurts just to breathe.

But these good moments are so few and far between.

Hopelessly Pretty

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Roxy_roxanna2

Tricky Treater

PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 10:31 am


My name is Crypsis and this is my tale.

Temperament: Enigmatic
Story:
To understand why I hide one must consider first that I am full grown, but smaller in stature than my fellow herla. One must also look back at the beginning of my life when scarcity and the threat of attack made every herla in my herd a capable fighter…every herla that is, but me.
~

"Crypsis! Pay attention! Do you want some young buck to come up on you and gore you with his antlers before you even know what's happening?"

He quickly shook his head, pale eyes wide with alarm as he considered the fact that danger seemed everywhere. He tried to tuck his tail lower and look like less of a target, but the beautiful aqua of his mane made him stand out no matter what he did. It wasn't that he didn't want to pay attention, it was just this 'guardian' kept whispering things to him, advice, and he was so enthralled by it that he lost focus. Of course the other herla in the herd thought it was nonsense, a guardian? What utter foolishness, foolishness sure to get him killed! Which was of course why the others avoided him, no one wanted to associate or become friendly with him only strong fighters made suitable friends and mates.

Crypsis left the lesson feeling that learning to fight was a hopeless task for him, most of the other males had huge racks and his own antlers were…lacking. He was full grown, but even some of the herd yearlings were his equal when it came to fighting. Some claimed he simply lacked focus, others said he was lucky to even still be alive, and the cruelest suggested leaving him behind…dead weight.

The next day dawned beautiful and fresh with the rivers bubbling and flowing along into the streams and the cattails shivering in the light breeze. Yet the beauty of the day was lost on the herd, they were busy trying to stamp through the river and cleanse their scent from the trail. Pursuit of the rival herd was likely and everyone was tense and alert. One wrong move was almost a guarantee of death, as usual Crypsis lagged behind and then made an error as he leapt over a flowing stream. His hind leg caught and he felt a painful twisting sensation, the landing almost found him sprawled on the ground, but he managed to keep on his shaking legs.

The others noticed however and his mentor stepped forward with a frown as she bent her head and examined his hind leg and shakiness.

"We'll have to leave him…" She murmured sadly and looked up at him her eyes regretful.

"No! No please, I can keep up…" Crypsis felt terror gripping him, leave him? They were really going to just leave him to die?

"Crypsis…you can't even keep pace uninjured, I'm sorry…let's move out the others can't be far behind and we're in no shape for a fight!" She turned and bounded off, perfectly, gracefully leaving him to his fate.

He sank down trembling half in the water and uncaring as it covered his lower half, his shoulders. His ears pricked and he could hear them coming, the rival herd, his executioners. At least while they stopped to deal with him his herd would get away. He could hear the guardian voice then it gave harsh orders this time not soft encouragements, and he obeyed because if death was coming what would a little foolishness at the last moment hurt? He shoved his tail beneath the cattails watching as it almost disappeared beneath them, he wriggled himself into the bank of the stream and lowered his head letting the water carry and move his hair surprised by how well it matched. He angled his head to try and conceal his antlers and realized that he was being told to hide, his guardian was trying to save him. Crypsis closed his eyes and waited for death, but the next few moments did not bring his own demise, the herd jumped right over him, he felt the sharp painful blow of a back hoof striking his body, but clearly being stepped on was better than being murdered. He didn't dare to open his eyes until he heard the first shout, the screams of battle, the cries of his herd. Eyes shut tight he sat in the stream frozen in fear and waiting, listening as the sounds slowed and finally died. He spent the night in the water not daring to move and when the dawn came again he finally unfolded himself and on trembling legs he limped towards the bloodstained grass.

"Crypsis…n-not so….foolish…" His mentor smiled up at him and with a rattled gasp closed her eyes.

Fighting was never the answer it seemed, but hiding…hiding would be his new mission in life, he would learn to conceal himself no matter where he was or what he faced. Limping he moved away and headed out for lands with herla less violent than these…or so he hoped.

~
The hartlands are beautiful, and scarcity does not seem to be an issue, but still I hide…until I find herla who I can trust to reveal myself to...
PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:20 pm


Whoo! Boy do you guys have some good imaginations. I have to say that we really enjoyed reading your stories, but when it comes straight down to it, the one that grabbed us the most belonged to Ruriska.
So congratulations, Ruriska!


Ruriska

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