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Inochi37

PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 4:45 pm


Edit: Finally finished the song and gave it a title. Check it out.

Taken from my tumblr blog, where I post a few verses. I'm not actually capable of creating the music, but thanks to the melodies in my head, I can make these verses. Here's one of the few things I've written.

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Its over
And it really hurts
‘Cause I can’t stand
To see you leave
And I can tell
That you’re a part of me
That I’ll never see
And though I can’t
Make you stay
I really wish you’d say

Let’s play pretend
Until the very end
I’ll be by your side
With your hand in mine
Let’s make believe
That you and I
Have eternal life
And will never die

So make me believe
That you’re part of me
At your side
I will always be
And make me believe
That you’ll always stay
I’ll make you believe
That I’m on my way

Let’s play pretend
Until the very end
I’ll be by your side
With your hand in mine
Let’s make believe
That you and I
Have eternal life
And will never die

All this time
I thought we had something real
All these things
I thought I’d never feel
Don’t set me free
Just let me be
Let’s play pretend
Let’s make believe
Just one more night
Let’s leave this right
Let me have this
Moment of bliss

Let’s play pretend
Until the very end
I’ll be by your side
With your hand in mine
Let’s make believe
That you and I
Have eternal life
And will never die

[This love for you will never die
Even as we say our last goodbyes]


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:08 pm


Inochi37
Taken from my tumblr blog, where I post a few verses. I'm not actually capable of creating the music, but thanks to the melodies in my head, I can make these verses. Here's one of the few things I've written.

----

Let’s play pretend
Until the end
I’ll be by your side
With your hand in mind
Let’s make believe
That you and I
Have eternal life
And will never die

So make me believe
That you’re part of me
At your side
I will always be
And make me believe
That you’ll always stay
I’ll make you believe
That I’m on my way

Let’s play pretend
Until the end
I’ll be by your side
With your hand in mind
Let’s make believe
That you and I
Have eternal life
And will never die

[This love for you will never die
Even as we say our last goodbyes]

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Very nice! I love it!

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Inochi37

PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:23 pm


Snowblazer


Very nice! I love it!


Thank you. Perhaps I'll get a chance to finish it one day. smile
PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:41 pm


Finally came up with the rest of the lyrics and finished it. biggrin

I edited the opening post and put all the lyrics in the spoiler tab. Tell me what you think. 3nodding

Inochi37

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