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| What's your favorite plasmid? |
| Electro-bolt, baby! Stay with the classics! |
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| Incinerate...fire! Fire! Heh heh heh |
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| Telekinesis, the better to move you with. |
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| Houdini. *poof* |
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| Plasma-whatsis? |
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| Yay, gold! |
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| Hey! My favorite isn't listed! How come you hate (insert asinine plasmid name here)? |
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33% |
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 Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2012 12:01 am
So I need some help deciding which would be a better opening setting:
a.) A working stiff and his daughter go to Rapture after her mother (his wife) dies and get caught up in Fontaine's shinanigans accidentally becoming big daddy and little sister to each other.
b.) An inside look into the insanity that plasmids brings seen over a long stretch of time through the eyes of the sole proprietor of a somewhat successful bar in Rapture (journal form)
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c.) The coming of age of a little sister into big sister-dom.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:24 am
A sounds like it's been done too many times before (And smells a bit too much like Mark Meltzer's story with the whole Big Daddy Little Sister thing).
B turns me off because I hate journal fiction, it always feels a bit lazy (Like first person).
C sounds like it could have chops if the psychology was properly explored but it depends on who the focal character is; since Little Sisters themselves are insane they don't make for a very reliable character to 'hear' the story from so maybe if it was done from say Gil Alexander's perspective it would work better in my opinion.
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