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PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:08 am


Felicity Roze
i figured the number would be to high after posting it. To clarify if i make the bullet points into full formed sentences and be more specific is the fact that it is in bullet points okay?

I didn't mean to make it seam as a list, i just figured it would be the most organized way to display my original thought.


It's a fair point but remember we're doing this as an RP. We're already doing things in a format wherein we use flowing sentences.

Basically the bulletpoints aren't necessarily bad but I think they should be accompanied by a complete explanation of abilities as it will be more rooted in the context of the RP.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 7:25 pm


Felicity Roze

Kido Number:
75
Kido Class: haudo
Kido Name: Sand tentacle
Kido Chant: Crushing earth, separating plains collecting beads of sand. Binding limbs grain by grain. Cannot waste time, do not be late or a crushing weight will seal my fate.
Appearance: small earth quakes shake the area as masses of land are disrupted around the area, grains of earth that have been crushed between the shifting plates in these earthquakes rise up and in layers wrap any arms the user of the attack has raised with a fist. The attack continuously collects beads of earth and sand compacting in weight and size of tentacles formed over the limbs, The user will be able to swing around their tentacles with movement of their arms.
Effects : ◙ It expands the physical range of your self, the tentacles act as an extension of ones own arms. The longest the length of the tentacles may reach is eight meters, however at this point they will not stop growing, the beads of earth from that point on will only add to the thickness of the tentacle.
◙ Because this attack begins with earth quakes to loosen the earth and grind it's plates the battle field where this attack takes place will be disheveled from the environmental event. This will leave the battle field uneven, and rocky for a radius of a few miles.
◙ Each bead of earth that layers the tentacles is comparable to glass shards so being smacked or dragged around by a tentacle will cut you up significantly.
◙ This haudo is only stopable in one way. The user must unclench their fists to put an end to it, however even after the user releases their fist it will still take several moments for the layers of sand to unwind the opposite way. The speed of the twisting layers differs from each person however the average speed it gathers is about five ounces per minute; because the speed in which earth gathers into the tentacles is so fast it is crucial to know when you need to stop the attack ahead of time. The layers will become dense swiftly if the user does not predetermine the end of the attack the weight will restrict them from being able to later. If the user does not end the attack in time, their limbs will be crushed inside.

Flavour Text: Story goes that there once were twin boys in the fifth division. They were pariah-ed outcasts and they were responsible for the creation of this dangerous haudo. They showed it to the world, testing it by means of a slaughter. The two killed several members of their own division as well as a few others, they were only stopped once their limbs were torn off from the pressure and they bled to death. (the original chant was quite demented and morbid, it was changed years later when it became more commonly used. )
Credited to: felicity roze


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 12:51 am


Felicity Roze
Felicity Roze

Kido Number:
75
Kido Class: haudo
Kido Name: Sand tentacle
Kido Chant: Crushing earth, separating plains collecting beads of sand. Binding limbs grain by grain. Cannot waste time, do not be late or a crushing weight will seal my fate.
Appearance: small earth quakes shake the area as masses of land are disrupted around the area, grains of earth that have been crushed between the shifting plates in these earthquakes rise up and in layers wrap any arms the user of the attack has raised with a fist. The attack continuously collects beads of earth and sand compacting in weight and size of tentacles formed over the limbs, The user will be able to swing around their tentacles with movement of their arms.
Effects : ◙ It expands the physical range of your self, the tentacles act as an extension of ones own arms. The longest the length of the tentacles may reach is eight meters, however at this point they will not stop growing, the beads of earth from that point on will only add to the thickness of the tentacle.
◙ Because this attack begins with earth quakes to loosen the earth and grind it's plates the battle field where this attack takes place will be disheveled from the environmental event. This will leave the battle field uneven, and rocky for a radius of a few miles.
◙ Each bead of earth that layers the tentacles is comparable to glass shards so being smacked or dragged around by a tentacle will cut you up significantly.
◙ This haudo is only stopable in one way. The user must unclench their fists to put an end to it, however even after the user releases their fist it will still take several moments for the layers of sand to unwind the opposite way. The speed of the twisting layers differs from each person however the average speed it gathers is about five ounces per minute; because the speed in which earth gathers into the tentacles is so fast it is crucial to know when you need to stop the attack ahead of time. The layers will become dense swiftly if the user does not predetermine the end of the attack the weight will restrict them from being able to later. If the user does not end the attack in time, their limbs will be crushed inside.

Flavour Text: Story goes that there once were twin boys in the fifth division. They were pariah-ed outcasts and they were responsible for the creation of this dangerous haudo. They showed it to the world, testing it by means of a slaughter. The two killed several members of their own division as well as a few others, they were only stopped once their limbs were torn off from the pressure and they bled to death. (the original chant was quite demented and morbid, it was changed years later when it became more commonly used. )
Credited to: felicity roze


edited


Alright. Looks like a fun high risk Kido. I'll add it in.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:33 am


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:30 am


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Kido Number:
38
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Devils circus
Kido Chant: Dance with the ten devils, drink and forget, let the night wash you of your will to fight.
Appearance: Ten blue flames wrap around the target from shoulder to calf.
Effects The caster of this Kido begins to chant and each individual finger begins to light one after the other. As if clawing at the intended target the caster throws the flames as they begin to stretch and wrap around their intended target. The target is then trapped and is not able to move. The flames them self slowly, as if by a mosquito begin to drain the target of their reiatsu. While to fully drain the target it would take weeks this kido is not meant to kill. The Bakudo is used to surpress weakened targets for safe transport. The flames themselves do not burn the target they do however grow stronger and weaker depending on the reiatsu consumed. The flames can be overcome by an individual pouring reiatsu into them. Or over exerting a large amount of reiatsu at once such as a release.
Flavour Text: N/a
Credited to: Karite the reaper


Sounds fair. Just sort out a few spelling errors and I'll add it in.
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