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Ritz_Freak

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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 5:47 pm

The cool air soothes me
I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then black
the street lights turn on
everyone sleeps
their slumber
I sit here
and I can cry

Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 6:40 pm

Ritz_Freak

The cool air soothes me
I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then black
the street lights turn on
everyone sleeps
their slumber
I sit here
and I can cry

I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight to come
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then the pitchest black
the street lights turn on
everyone, dead asleep
I sit here
and I can cry

Just some things that I would personally change, but you don't have to...

iluvwritin

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Ritz_Freak

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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 3:37 am

iluvwritin

Ritz_Freak

The cool air soothes me
I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then black
the street lights turn on
everyone sleeps
their slumber
I sit here
and I can cry

I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight to come
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then the pitchest black
the street lights turn on
everyone, dead asleep
I sit here
and I can cry

Just some things that I would personally change, but you don't have to...

Nice. I like that.

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 1:59 pm

Ritz_Freak

iluvwritin

Ritz_Freak

The cool air soothes me
I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then black
the street lights turn on
everyone sleeps
their slumber
I sit here
and I can cry

I sit here
Saying good-bye to the sun
waiting for the moonlight to come
The sky turns
into a shadowy blue
then the pitchest black
the street lights turn on
everyone, dead asleep
I sit here
and I can cry

Just some things that I would personally change, but you don't have to...

Nice. I like that.

mmk... coolio

iluvwritin

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