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Young Master Oz Vessalius Crew
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 Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:30 am
I've been here since the beginning of Rosentale and I'll be around to the best of my ability.
Teachers:
Silveril Volce
Severin Novaire
Tarik-Khaldun Sayyid
Students:
Kamil Terrace
Misaki Shinonome
Cyril Alexander
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:55 am
Silveril Volce
Reminders:
- Need to roleplay him as more business-like and have him less likely listen to idle banter and friendly chatter
- People will hate me and Silveril, but he will stick to his personality and hate trivial things.
Addition to flaws:
- Uptight: Silveril rarely loosens up and it's even rare to those who know him.
- Cold: Due to his business-like demeanor, he comes off as cold to people and rarely takes the time to exchange any friendly words.
Other Additions:
- More details to appearance
- Added minor details to his bio
- Added more to his personality
Soon to come additions that WILL appear:
- His birthday when I figure it out
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Kamil Terrace
Reminders:
- I need to remind myself to show how much of a neat freak he is because he really is a freak for neatness.
- I forget to send him out swimming or getting his daily dose of water. He needs this to live and lately it's all happening off screen.
- The pond is his favorite place. He needs to go there again.
- Kamil has never ever shown his power to control water. He probably should at some point.
Addition to flaws:
- Foolish: Sometimes this guy just lacks common sense
- Over-reactive: Kamil jumps to conclusions all the time. He gets it from his dad...
- Gluttenous: Not so much as a flaw, but an interesting tidbit. When he returns to the sea, he will be sinking, not swimming.
Other Additions:
- More details to appearance
- More description to powers
Soon to come additions:
- His birthday
- His grade
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Severin Novaire
Reminders:
- He HATES girls. But lately he's been really nice, so I need to keep reminding myself about this.
Addition to flaws:
...I look back at his flaws and I want to smack myself.
- Removed "Rarely shows his real self to people" since character development hit and he screwed that over and decided to just be himself.
- Grouchy: He can live in a trash can and tell people to go away for a living.
- Cowardly: He usually runs away from things that are annoying or could hurt him
- Added more detail to his current flaws
Other Additions:
- More details to appearance
- Finally updated his bio
- Added a new power because he became the spellcasting teacher
- More description with his powers
Soon to come additions:
- His birthday
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Misaki Shinonome
Reminders:
- I need to remember a lot of her likes and dislikes such as her hate for being bossed around and her hate for stinky smells
Additions to flaws:
- Removed "Strong dislikes for black cats" because that's just something to go in the dislike section.
- More details to flaws
Other Additions:
- More details to appearance, and abilities
Soon to come:
- Birthday
- Grade
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Cyril Alexander
Reminders:
- He doesn't interact enough to show his personality and flaws. I need to start using him more.
Other Additions:
- Appearance added
Soon to come:
- Birthday
- Grade
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Tarik
Reminders:
Additions:
- Appearance added
- His childhood added to the bio because I realized I jumped straight to his adult life
Soon to come:
- Birthday
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Young Master Oz Vessalius Crew
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:04 pm
Hi Oz! I was just dropping by for some helpful and friendly advice! Here I go!
I know you're a bit busy with life and stuff, but you still need to have your characters attend classes. Cyril has been truant to a lot and it's kind of important for Misaki to attend classes too since she's a prefect. Kamil kind of shows up every now and then too. I'm not saying that you have to go posting mode, but it would be nice to see them show up even just for a little bit. =D
And you should probably start having your characters just jump into scenes a bit more? Of course, not all the time and stuff, but they need to meet new people. Tarik has only been able to interact with Angela and Abel and was able to meet Romane and Samuel and Akito briefly. But he hasn't really been all that integrated in the RP aside from his link to Angela. I think Tarik just needs more friends.
Same with Cyril. D< He suddenly became like a housekeeper but Ichirou is never around. And I can see you tried to get him to get more into school life by getting him to mess with Reni, but he still seems to stick to Ichirou's mansion. So yes, he needs to meet more people outside of Teavil. 8D
And I know it would be out of Silveril's character to leave his dorm to do anything unless he was pestered, but he should probably go meet other staff too. 8D Probably have him take a breather in the lounge or something?
And you don't have to do all this all at once. D< Just a bit at a time. =D
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:45 pm
Sure! I'll make sure to litter my characters around or have them jump into scenes if it's convenient.
Thanks for the advice, Light!
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Young Master Oz Vessalius Crew
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