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 Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 8:17 am
Rising mist
From the river
in this cool weather
Water clear
As the sky
Reavilling its secrets
To yourself and I
Look what it is showing to us
Is it the meaning of Life
Is it the meaning of Death
It is neither
For we are not the river
who knows what we see
For all we see
Is the dirt below
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 2:15 pm
That's pretty cool... you just might wanna use the handy spell checker tool (revealing)
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 2:50 pm
It's interesting. Not exactly pretty 'pretty' because it ends on dirt instead of soil or earth, but it's not gross or distracting either.
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:18 pm
lol i thought the dirt was a nice touch when i wrote it and i forgot to use my spell check i always forget to use it (my teachers are always down my throught about it)
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:25 pm
Goddess_Rya lol i thought the dirt was a nice touch when i wrote it and i forgot to use my spell check i always forget to use it (my teachers are always down my throught about it)
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:36 pm
iluvwritin Goddess_Rya lol i thought the dirt was a nice touch when i wrote it and i forgot to use my spell check i always forget to use it (my teachers are always down my throught about it) lol thanks i won't forger....waid i can't held me selF
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:39 pm
Goddess_Rya iluvwritin Goddess_Rya lol i thought the dirt was a nice touch when i wrote it and i forgot to use my spell check i always forget to use it (my teachers are always down my throught about it) lol thanks i won't forger....waid i can't held me selF
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:49 pm
lol that was very interesting
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:00 pm
Goddess_Rya lol that was very interesting
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:01 pm
i don't think forgetting that will ever be a possibility
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:04 pm
Goddess_Rya i don't think forgetting that will ever be a possibility
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:13 pm
iluvwritin Goddess_Rya i don't think forgetting that will ever be a possibility
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