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 Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 12:56 pm
((Pinkamina is... Problematic. Try developing your character without her for a while.))
Before any of the suited ponies can fly down to confront her, Twilight erects a purple magical barrier to keep them where they are. A ceiling between them and their victims, if you'd rather. Although, the strain from this is clearly showing on her face. "Pinkie, I can't hold this up forever. Use your key, unlock all of the imprisoned ponies, and find a way to get them out of here. You can't walk on clouds, so once they're out, stick to the platforms, and wait until you see my balloon. Okay?"
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:29 am
Okie Doki Loki *Unlocks the cells then the captured Pegasi escape*
(Meanwhile with Pinkamena)
*Floats down to Wish's shop then passes through the door*Wish we Need to talk
(Pinkamena is just so good to RP as, that SHE needs more Development than Pinkie pie does since pinkie pie's character is already developed Via the Show. since Pinkamena is basically a spirit of her own trying to get back to her Vessel that she was seperated from she's only known as a killer no backstory or anything so SHE needs more development than pinkie pie does so you can expect for me to put in a Meanwhile with pinkamena in my posts since they are seperated from each other)
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 5:41 am
((First of all, let me rephrase that. You need to develop your portrayal of Pinkie Pie. Just because a character's been established on TV doesn't mean she's going to play herself for you. From what I've seen, the only parts of her that you're interested in expressing are her 4th wall powers and her bipolar tendencies. Any character deserves to played by someone who has a deeper understanding of them than that.
Second of all, if she's talking to him in Ponyville, wouldn't it be a good idea to have that conversation take place in the ponyville forum?))
Twilight grits her teeth, as the suited pegasi above her beat on her barrier with their hooves, trying to break their way through. She doesn';t know how long it'll take Pinkie to get the little foals out of the factory, but it has to happen quick. "Spike..." she says, as his invisibility finally fades. "Find a scroll, and send a letter to my brother about what's been going on here. Go, now!"
Spike nods, a little worried about the amount of energy Twilight's expending, but scampers off to a nearby office to find a scroll anyway.
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:44 am
((So, you've abandoned Pinkie for Pinkamina? I guess that proves what you were interested in all along. At least do the character a favor and change your profile to just Pinkamina. Free up Pinkie, so someone who actually respects her might be able to use her. As for me, this factory's coming down.))
As the rest of the pegasus foals escape from confinement, Twilight uses one last magical trick. One she didn't want anypony else to see. With the last of her magical energy, she folds her barrier into a ball, trapping the suited ponies inside, and sucks that hole right into the machine. The machine sputters from having so many ponies in it at once, and then crashes to a hault. Not a climactic explosion, but with enough noise to let her know it was far too damaged to be repaired.
With that, she collects Spike, and leaves the building.
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Less than five minutes later, as she's leaving Cloudsdale with the now sane Pinkie Pie in tow, just as they're discussing how life will be from here on out, a bright, terrifying explosion rocks the clouds behind them. Twilight looks over the edge of the basket in shock as the building crumbles, pieces of it falling through the clouds to the thankfully uninhabited landscape below.
"I hope you got all the foals out," she mumbles, choking back tears for any souls who may have been forgotten.
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 12:29 pm
((You seriously thought I abandoned Pinkie pie for Pinkamena? I didn't post because I didn't see a REASON to Post right there since Twilight didn't REALLY tell pinkie pie to do anything else besides unlock the cells of the pegasi foals and such and escape))
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 12:34 pm
((Having Pinkie try to regain the trust of the foals who were probably terrified of her from when she was possessed would have been a great opportunity to explore some character development, which is never unnecessary. And if you think less than half a line of text is enough for a non-evil Pinkie post, then frankly, you could have used it.))
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:55 pm
((ok, this is going a bit too far, honestly, just let her do her thing. my motto is that there is ALWAYS a method behind my madness. If there's a reason behind the way she does things, then dont go off on her for it. you did just tell her to free them, not make a "happy, your free, now help me with the others and hopefully you'll forgive me speech" all will come in due time))
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:13 am
((Do you know what RP courtesy is? I'll give you an example of basic RP courtesy; When two people are RPing together, you don't skip a post just because you don't think your response to the other person is necessary. You find a way to MAKE your post necessary. Which isn't hard to do, if you have any vested interest in the character you're using.))
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:36 pm
After a few hours of napping, Gadget stirred. "I'm.." She paused to yawn. "..Thirsty." She looked around, then pulled her goggles onto her face. "Oh. There we go." She took off towards Fillydelphia.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 10:22 pm
From the shadows, a figure old enough to be the two ponies' father watched. Nopony knew he was there, not even the suits. If they'd spotted him, he'd surely have been forcibly removed. He smiled as the two young ponies -- well, young compared to him -- overcame them and rescued ponies from the loathsome eugenics program the factory had been a part of.
Perhaps now, we can go back to using the old rainbow formula, he thought. That would be wonderful. I can't even look at the rainbows this thing makes without my stomach turning at the thought.
Satisfied, he turned and left the factory.
A few minutes out, the factory exploded.
Okay, first we'll have to rebuild before a good rainbow machine can be installed.
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