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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:44 pm


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Name:Grimm Amarai
Nickname: None
Gender: Male
Actual Age: 324
Appearance Age: 28
Height: 6'3
Weight: 210lbs (muscle)
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black with green tips
Blood Type: O+
Reiatsu Color:Gold

Affiliation: Soul Society, Gotei 13
Division: 6
Rank: Captain



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Personality: Kind-hearted, Gentle, always smiling, except for when he is serious.
Likes: The sky, Life, His job, and his brother Axzaki
Dislikes: Death, War, Sin
Biography: (Before Death)– At one time Grimm was happily married to Elizabeth Ann Diskence, the sister of his best friend Aero Diskence. It was only after the horror that struck Aero occurred that Grimm’s happy life started to crumble down. After his wife and daughter had been murdered by a Shinigami, Elizabeth had gone to calm down her brother and take him to the house where Grimm was waiting for them.
Grimm had waited patiently for several hours, but he had grown worried and went out to find Elizabeth, to no avail though. When he did find her though, what he saw would change his life forever. There she was lying on the ground, her own blood pooling around her. Her blank dead eyes were staring up in shock and yet still held the love and caring she had been known so well for. Standing above her holding a blood soaked sword was the man he would have least expected to be capable of such things, his best friend and brother-in-law, Aero. Grimm ran forward to attack Aero, being horrified at the slaughter he had committed, but in the process was cut down thus ending his life.

(After Death/Soul Society)- After his quick death by the hands of his brother-in-law, Grimm was just a lost soul roaming around the world of the living, until he met a Shinigami who sent him to the Soul Society to live peacefully as a Soul. When he arrived Grimm became apart of District 13 of the Rukongai. After a few decades of being in the Rukongai districts, Grimm became aware of his vast amount of Reiatsu while defending the weak against some Soul Reapers looking to "have a good time". Soon after that moment Grimm was admitting into the Soul Reaper Academy.

(Academy)- After being accepted into the Academy, Grimm began to learn from complete scratch picking things up as he went. After a few years he became one of the top students in both Kido and Zanjutsu. Being the top student in his class in both classes Grimm made a name for himself amongst the students and the staff, as well as Shinigami already in squads. Soon after he became the top student in his class he was accepted into Squad 5 as the 9th seat officer.

(Division Years)- Many years of being in the 5th Division he loved it until he decided to transfer to Squad 13, then he decided to go back to Squad 5. Through a vast amount of training and through his skills he quickly rose through the ranks becoming the 3rd seat of Squad 5. After many more years of holding that rank Grimm got the opportunity to become that Lieutenant of Squad 6, and eventually earning his rightful spot as the Captain of Squad 6 by defeating the highly respected Renji Abarai with a last ditch effort. Though many people in his squad didn't like him at first, Grimm quickly grabbed their loyalty and trust by showing them why he was made Captain of the 6th Division. Ever since Grimm has spent all these years remaining the Captain of Squad 6 and has also spent his time searching for his brother-in-law Aerokai Diskence.

Family: Axzaki Heroki(Adoptive Brother), Animus Yamamoto(Adoptive Father)



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Zanpakutō Name: Tenshi no ō, āchi - Tyrael
Zanpakutō Spirit: Tyrael
Attribute: Light Reishi Manipulation
Sealed Appearance: Sealed
Inner World: Inner World



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Shikai Command: Eliminate Evil; Tenshi no ō, āchi - Tyrael
Zanpakutō Changes: Tenshi Tyrael
Appearance Changes: Replacing the normal Shinigami's Uniform, a war piece of Angelic looking clothing with a set of Golden armor covering his angelic wings, as well as his shoulders, his chest, and his hands and forearms.
Battlefield Changes: N/A
Additional Changes: N/A

Shikai Abilities:
1) Ten Gaado (天ガード, Heavens Guard) Grimm brings forth a wall made from his spiritual pressure to block his enemy from his path giving him some sort of defense.
2) Tenshi no Rekuiemu (天使のレクイエム, Angelic Requiem) This ability gives Grimm a large boost to his speed and strength allowing him to fight his opponent more efficiently in Shikai.



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Bankai Name: Arch Angel of Justice, Tyrael
Bankai Command: Bankai, Arch Angel of Justice, Tyrael
Bankai Spirit Appearance: Angel of Justice Tyrael
Zanpakutō Changes: Same as Shikai
Appearance Changes: Though the Golden armor remains, and more covers his body, Grimm's Bankai changes his wings into small beams of light. Also his head is covered by a hood and the only thing being seen is blackness.
Battlefield Changes: N/A
Additional Changes: N/A

Bankai Abilities:
1) Imperiumu Yumi (インペリウム弓, Imperium Bow) A bow made from pure light reishi taken from Grimm's spiritual pressure, he can fire arrow after arrow until he deems he doesn't need this ability anymore.
2) Ten no Geeto no Kuroon (天のゲートのクローン Clones of the Heavenly Gate) As the name implies Grimm can make a clone equal to his strength and speed. The seven gates of heaven allows Grimm's clone to gain special abilities brought to him from the heavens. The seven gates are as follows; Spirit, Joy, Love, Strength, Light, Health, and Death. Each having its own special abilities
3) Segei no Hakai (正義の破壊, Justice's Destruction) Much like the ability Angelic Requiem, this ability further boosts his strength and speed. Though with this ability his gauntlets glow with his Golden Spiritual Pressure causing a devastating attack.

Clones of the Seven Gates-
Spirit: Its main focus of ability is to grant Grimm a small yet decisive boost in his spiritual pressure for a few minutes.
Joy: With each passing moment with this clone, the happier the two Grimm's are the stronger the next attack will be.
Love: This clone is mainly used as a distraction, while Grimm plans his next move.
Strength: This clone grants Grimm a large boost to his strength, he usually only uses this clone when it is needed.
Light: This clone temporarily boosts his Imperium Bow, allowing for the bow to fire more powerful arrows.
Health: This clone is used as a Catalyst to heal the real Grimm when it is needed, the more damage this clone takes, a fourth of the total damage that is dealt on the clone heals Grimm's wounds. Mainly is used for out of battle healing.
Death: This clone is not to be used, no matter what. Upon learning this move he was told about the ability of the Death clone and promised to only use this clone as a last resort. The ability of the Death clone is as it sounds to cause complete death, including the wielder of the clone. Also note that with this clone there is a good chance that both will be heavily damaged or killed.



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Hadō
1. Shō (衝, Clash)
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)
12. Fushibi (伏火, Lain Fire)
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)
32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Firefall)
54. Haien (廃炎, Nullific Flames)
58. Tenran (闐嵐, Swelling Storm)
63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear)
73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin-Wake Blue Firefall)
88. Hiryūgekizokushintenraihō (飛竜撃賊震天雷炮, Flying Dragon Marring Heaven-Shaking Thunder-Sear)
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin)
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear)

Bakudō
1. Sai (塞, Block)
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
8. Seki (斥, Repulsion)
9. Geki (撃, Strike)
9. Hōrin (崩輪, Disintegrating Circle)
21. Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Flight)
26. Kyokkō (曲光, Bent Light)
30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash)
37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Hanging Star)
39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan)
58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Trace-Catching Pursuit Sparrows)
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison)
62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred-Step Rail Parch)
63. Sajō Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Chainlink Chain Bond(s))
73. Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)
75. Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Five-Post Iron Weights)
77. Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Void Net)
79. Kuyō Shibari (九曜縛, Nine-Daylight Bonds)
81. Dankū (断空, Severing Void)
99, Part 1. Kin (禁, Seal)
99, Part 2. Bankin (卍禁, Great Seal)

Other Abilities:

Master Zanjutsu Combatant
Master Kenjutsu Combatant
Master Kidō Combatant
Master Strategist

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:57 pm


  • Shikai #3 is a bit godmod. That means that if he's heavily damaged, two strikes can bring down any opponent.

  • There is a limit of three Bankai attacks.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:54 am


Changed them...
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:59 am


If you're using Clones of the Seven Gates, you'll have to list what each gate does.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 1:52 pm


First and foremost, I don't like the Health and Death clones. For one thing, when attacking Grimm, you can easily shift the opponent's attack by having the Health clone take the attack for him, therefore healing him in the process. Second, the Death clone is entirely too powerful, seeing as it's an instant death and there's no way to dodge the attack, regardless whether the user is sacrificed or not. Last, but not least, there needs to be some kind of limitation or restriction on the ability "Clones of the Seven Gates". There's nothing that doesn't say you can't interchange clones in the blink of an eye. Therefore, when the Health clone is destroyed, you can just automatically make another one. Or you can draw out one clone for a single purpose before changing it so you have another boost. All in all, it makes it seem like you have an additional seven Bankai abilities.
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 2:58 am


First off, I can't just bring up another one right after one is gone.

As it states and I quote "Clones of the Seven Gates (Only able to use each clone once per use in Bankai)"

The Health clone, is really only used after Grimm is finished with a fight. The only clones he really uses is Spirit, Love, Strength, and Light.
Joy, Health, and Death are just there because I was going to do the Seven Deadly Sins, but instead I chose to do the Seven Gates of Heaven. If you want I will take out the ones you seem to have a problem with.

The Death Clone, there is a way to defeat it, don't give it the chance to attack or do anything or defeat the user before he tells it to do its thing and to end it all.
Look at it this way, it is basically the same exact thing as when Vegeta sacrificed himself to kill Buu in Dragonball Z. It didn't kill Buu but it killed Vegeta.
Its basically just a big explosion that has a 65% chance of killing both and a 35% chance of killing one or neither of the two but heavily damaging them

As for having Seven additional Bankai abilities, not really... Its all 1 ability and as I stated earlier I am only able to use 1 clone per use in Bankai, which all in all means I am only capable of using 1 clone per battle and using said clone actually drains an incredibly amount of spiritual pressure from Grimm. So honestly I really don't see the problem in this ability...

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:50 am


I think the only problem here is the wording. "Only able to use each clone once in Bankai" doesn't mean you can't interchange them. For all I know, you can switch the Health clone with the Love clone at any given time, though that does mean you won't be able to use the Health clone again. Also, the Death clone stated nothing about an explosion before, so I was assuming it just caused complete death with no chance of escaping. I can roll with the fact that it's not seven additional abilities, and the Health clone as well, as soon as the fact is cleared that you can't use them interchangeably. I'm still iffy on the Death clone unless you're turning it into an explosion type attack and not something like instant death. Sorry for being so iffy on details, but I try to reduce all possibilities of misunderstanding and godmodding as possible.
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 6:27 pm


alright I fixed and added a few things to what the special abilities are and have added more details and stated that Grimm is only able to use 1 clone per Bankai.

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 6:49 pm


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