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Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

Questionable Prophet

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 11:50 pm


18. Irony

“Judas” didn’t hear me when I knocked on his door. He was hunched over his desk, scribbling at something.I stepped in, looking at the walls. They were forcibly plain and bare. His bed comforter was gray, his carpet a neutral navy blue. It looked like a guest bedroom. I knocked on the door again, just to see if I could get his attention.
He couldn’t hear me. His headphones were stuffed in his ears.I quietly walked up behind him, peering over his shoulder.
He was working at a thick piece of paper, drawing a flying bird. It looked like a robin to me. I waited a few seconds, watching the picture starting to come to life. He still hadn’t noticed me after half a minute.
I tapped his shoulder. He whirled around, almost knocking me in my gut.
Judas yanked his headphones out, glaring at me. “What?”
“What are you working on?”
“Cards to promote optimism. I get, like, a dollar for each of ‘em.”
And this kid wrote some of the most depressing crap in his journal. I leaned on his desk.
“You draw a lot?”
“Yeah, not as much as I used to.” He flicked a piece of hair out his face. “What do you want?”
This ruined my whole approach plan. I shrugged.“We need to talk about your principal, Paul McCannon.”
A quick smile formed on Judas’s face. “You’ll have to ask my dad about that one.”
“Really.”
He snickered, shaking his head. “Really.”
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 11:54 pm


Desi the fuzzy fluffhead
Nui Kyrisa

Thank you for pointing those out to me, I agree completely with you.
I'll make sure to check for those things when I look over my stuff.

You're welcome. smile I find it easy to see those mistakes because I honestly make them more frequently than others might think. stare

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Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

Questionable Prophet

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 11:58 pm


Nui Kyrisa

They're easy mistakes to make.
I'm horrible at catching typos. Just see what I meant, instead of what is actually there.
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2012 12:06 am


19. Lust


~Angela~
It was quiet in the library, mostly empty at that time during the day, which was for the better. Molly, the librarian nodded at me, not bothering to stand.
I knew my way around. I had brought a large bag with me. It was starting to wear out at the corners, it’d last at least another week, god willing. I gripped the strap of the bag while I looked through the first section of books, waiting. He said met him in Romance.
Romance wasn’t my favorite genre. Still, I was in the section and I figured I would browse around until I found a book that didn’t have a cover with a painting of some long-haired underwear model on the cover. That was easier said than done.
I was getting to the “O’s” of the section when I was asked, “What are you looking for?”
I look up, smiling without meaning to and hoping I wasn’t blushing too much. My ears were hot, my heart beating fast. Bradley wasn’t an especially attractive man. He was short, a little chubby with thick glasses that made his eyes look small and a pencil mustache.
I knew I should not want to drag him back to my car and rip his clothes off, but I could help it. “Lust's passion will be served; it demands, it militates, it tyrannizes.” Marquis de Sade said.
Bradley already had a book in his hands. It was blue and titled quite originally, “In Blue.” I did not need to read the back to know what it was about. I snatched the book from Bradley. It burned my hand. I dropped it quickly on the shelf.
Bradley barely grunted. He was looking at my breasts..
I said, “I am done looking for a book.”
“Great.”

Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

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Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

Questionable Prophet

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 1:43 am


20. Identity Crisis

Mr. Sam Andrews sat back in his seat. His eyes flicked between Jay and I. I sat just opposite him, and Jay sat a little more to the side of him, but not by much. Bringing someone to the interrogation room can help with two things,One, intimidation and two, impression of confidentiality. From the way that Mr. Andrews was staring me down I doubted the room was helping with the intimidation aspect.
I looked him in the eyes. “You were sleeping with Paul McCanon.”
His eyebrows furrowed and he gaped at me. “Excuse me?”
“You were seen together,” I lied.
“Where?”
“That’s confidential.”
“I’m not gay.”
Lies. Jay leaned forward, interlacing his fingers on the table. “There’s nothing wrong with it.”
“I’m not gay.”
“It must be so hard.”
Jay should have won some sort of award for his false sympathy. He had this way of making his eyes look sad, a small twitch of a sad smile to make someone burst into a tearful confession, he knew exactly when to give someone an encouraging touch, when to call them ‘honey’, when to let a tear sneak out of his own eye—one time I watched him weasel away the last doughnut from the chief of police.
I almost felt sorry for Mr. Andrews as he shook his head, repeating that he was married, they were just friends, it was nothing.
I stayed silent as Jay gave him a small twitch of a sad smile. “How did it start?”
Mr. Andrews swallowed. “I’m a happily married man.”
“Of course you are.”
“I’m not that guy. I’m not.”
“But, you are, Sam.”
I considered ditching the whole soggy mess, but that’d give him a distraction, give him a moment to compose himself. While Mr. Andrews had his face in his hands Jay shot me a smug smile. It would finish quickly.
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