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PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:30 pm


b]Name: Louis brayton

Age: 43

Gender: male

Kishin Form:Hell angel but hes not really an angel his wings are metallic

Race: human


Former partner: His deceased wife Syango

Likes: getting his way, Murder, revenge, and seeing his pathetic family know true power.

Dislikes: losing, his wife, being told what to do, and his daughter


Personality and past: He was a computer tech and a nice guy before their son. their son showed potential of being a meiser and a musical power house but, when his powerful daughter arrived. he just snapped. he never wanted a daughter. he wanted only sons. Fights began about her. and on her 15th birthday. he just snapped and killed Nancy and send Kiri away. since that day he haunted the house killing anyone that enters.


Fear: Being over powered by his daughter..


Attacks:
--Static rope. A computer cable that becomes whiplike and long and wraps around you or your weapon and pull them closer.
-- Mirror image- He makes an image of people to make them think their talking mean to them
-- Broad band. When hes running at fasts speeds.
-- Firewall. A barrier of sorts that will block attacks
-- Virus. The attack that killed Nancy. Its a code that is tattoed on the arm and slowly infects the body
-- Black blood.
Acceptance from Captain or Vice Captain:[/b (not yet)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:29 am


You might want to fix up your capitalization and grammar. Like me and plenty of other crew members, we get peeved when we see poor punctuation/grammar/capitalization. You might want to place in some comma's too...
Your bio is a giant run-on sentence...
Sorry for the criticism, but I'm just speaking the truth.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:56 am


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You might want to fix up your capitalization and grammar. Like me and plenty of other crew members, we get peeved when we see poor punctuation/grammar/capitalization. You might want to place in some comma's too...
Your bio is a giant run-on sentence...
Sorry for the criticism, but I'm just speaking the truth.
i did this on a nook. They dont teell you typos. My mom hogs the computeer most of the day. Ill fix it when she lets me have my turn.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:47 pm


Oh. The nook? Makes sense.
Sorry then ^ ^

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