Your last piece is really touching. I've never been a fan of rhyming poetry, but I love the imagery here and how much you can accomplish with just four lines. My personal brain-metre also suggests that "Maybe she will fly on home" rather than "she'll" but that might be because in my head it sounds better. I don't know if that's valid critique, haha.
Good job!
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