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 Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:26 am
Death comes slowly to those who ask, so inflict some pain to make it last. The thoughts of death will not decay.They will corrupt the mind till its dieing day. Death will slap you like your a little boy.Rotting mortal thoughts of love and joy. So come with me and walk the valley of death.This is were will take our last breath.There are no plea bargains, no good deals.The shadows of death are well on our heal.Feel the flesh and blood decay, as we now approach the fleeting day.Feel the cold raw hands of death upon you,when it sets in only the day of your rotten birth shall you rue.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:20 am
i'm not a poetry expert, but still i like sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:02 pm
Samuel Grant i'm not a poetry expert, but still i like sweatdrop It don't matter if you know anything about poetry.As long as you like it,that is all that matters.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:30 pm
Very nice.
Its well written and i like it cat_3nodding
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:50 pm
Colorful Chimera Very nice. Its well written and i like it cat_3nodding If you like this one you should check out my other one I posted.I think it is about as good.Thank you by the way.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:11 pm
i will but im goin to sleep soon
im sleepy
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:37 am
i just feel like a complete robot by saying "i like it" i wanna add more.
i see people comment on videos on youtube, and one person ticks me off with his "good video luv"; and that's during the whole time the OP posts her gameplay of MASS EFFECT! scream
with me and commenting, i wanna say more than just those three words
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 3:29 am
Samuel Grant i just feel like a complete robot by saying "i like it" i wanna add more. i see people comment on videos on youtube, and one person ticks me off with his "good video luv"; and that's during the whole time the OP posts her gameplay of MASS EFFECT! scream with me and commenting, i wanna say more than just those three words Well I think that you said enough.You praised my work and for that I am appreciative.
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