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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:29 pm
Stuck In In a hole cold dark and wet a more scary place I have never met seeing the bright light at the top I try to escape climbing clawing at the dark wet mud trying hard to leave this place behind but the further I go the more these shackles on my ankles seem to drag me down as my demons kick me In the face again I find myself at the bottom still scared still confined and still alone my demons seem to want me here needing feeding on my fear but I cant give up cant give in I have to get out of this hole I am in so I start to climb again the shackles start to get heavy but somehow i manage to drag them along the demons are kicking again but It doesn't hurt anymore than it did before my confidence builds and I climb some more I can see the light the light getting closer and my shackles are getting looser Clink! my shackles have fallen to the bottom realizing my advantage I start to climb faster and faster finally I reach the top victorious I spring from my whole Ive done it ive put my misery to an end my demons are below me I WIN
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:49 pm
Interesting, but don't forget your punctuation.
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